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Historical comments

Love love love "Annie/Jack" - great story about real love/sex.


-- Monday, February 20, 2012 at 18:07:28 (EDT)

I just have to say that I really love Clean Sheets and I'm so glad that its still here! An oasis of classiness in a sea of popups and shallow waters.


-- Sunday, August 28, 2011 at 15:07:28 (EDT)

"Pole" - hot. Very hot. Thank you, Chaparrita.


-- Thursday, August 11, 2011 at 09:31:23 (EDT)

Pripid and Oenomaus is beautiful on many levels - thank you!

Stella Maris

-- Friday, July 08, 2011 at 18:18:35 (EDT)

V much enjoyed Perfect Girl. Nice work!


-- Thursday, July 07, 2011 at 23:03:28 (EDT)

My name is Jesse and I could really use your advice!
I am a writer of erotica and I am looking to leverage my web design skills to start up a new site for the publishing of quality erotic stories and tasteful erotic art. It is my goal for the site to attain longevity and I want to do everything possible to avoid breaking any laws or incurring any liability.
I know you are probably not an attorney, but if I could get an idea of all the bases I need to cover, perhaps I could avoid paying an attorney their exorbitant fees for legal research and simply pay for the once-over of the legal agreements for users and authors.
If you can find it in your heart to help out a fellow erotic writer (and potential future publisher) I would be eternally grateful.
Feel free to email me anytime.

Jesse <>
Burbank, CA United States
-- Wednesday, June 22, 2011 at 13:53:19 (EDT)

Ha! Fair enough Rob. Should have caught that but I always seem to make that mistake. Thanks for making it a funny mistake.

Lea Meadows <>
New York, NY United States
-- Monday, June 20, 2011 at 19:45:55 (EDT)

"I'll shutter as you claw at the snaps of my rain slicker..."

OK, but closing down for the day seems a strange thing to do at a time like that.

Rob <>
San Diego, CA usa
-- Saturday, June 18, 2011 at 23:19:26 (EDT)

Perfect Girl - what a fabulous mix of hedonistic indulgent pleasure and barely veiled creepiness. Orlando enjoying the idea of Penny watching him is a really finely tuned insight.


-- Friday, April 29, 2011 at 04:04:05 (EDT)

beautiful sentiments, wish I had written it!

mikel <>

-- Wednesday, April 20, 2011 at 19:15:43 (EDT)

"Room 418" is very lovely!

-- Wednesday, April 20, 2011 at 09:56:23 (EDT)

I do love your work Peter, but I have to laugh - you obviously write from a man's P.O.V. There are always some random naked women wallowing about for your immediate pleasure. Seriously though, great story!!!

TheFurFiles <>

-- Saturday, March 19, 2011 at 23:23:32 (EDT)

A Private Affair

by Jane Westforth
Interesting, surely, and quite unique in the depiction of an unusual relationship. I must read again, but I think very well written.

Robert <>
Montreal, QC Canada
-- Friday, February 11, 2011 at 00:25:56 (EST)

"Lex is for Lovers" was very good. It was weird how I thought this was a female writer. Hmm..

Ashley Rhodes <>
Fallbrook, CA USA
-- Saturday, January 29, 2011 at 03:08:52 (EST)

"within the curve of the spoon" is very beautiful!


-- Tuesday, December 28, 2010 at 12:04:22 (EST)

"Ass Man" is wonderful - who hasn't wanted to say that boring line to someone you sorta love!

-- Saturday, December 18, 2010 at 12:18:21 (EST)

Bread and Bedfest is such a fantastic story! Smiled the whole way through. Loved the setting and the narrator's voice. Excellent work, Jeremy.

Anne Lowry <>

-- Tuesday, December 14, 2010 at 14:25:17 (EST)

Love Seirian Winters' spanking story!


-- Monday, December 13, 2010 at 13:00:26 (EST)

"You know, Harold. You're the most boring fuck of my life." -- that's the best opening I may have ever read for an erotic story! ("Ass Man")

-- Monday, November 22, 2010 at 15:05:25 (EST)

Thanks for letting us know that -- once upon a time the Literary Erotica ring took you from one lovely erotic site to another...but, alas, it appears no longer. We've removed the link.

Sam Capps Emerson
-- Sunday, November 21, 2010 at 18:41:32 (EST)

The "Authors of Literary Erotica" web-ring add you carry appears to be a scam. All the links just go to the same skanky-looking :dating" site.


-- Sunday, November 21, 2010 at 17:25:24 (EST)

Thank you for publishing the melodic,sensational "Spring Pictures." Lovely to see another exquisite piece by Donna George Storey!

Emerald <>

-- Monday, November 15, 2010 at 21:35:58 (EST)

Technicolor Bee Dreams was magnificent. Another delicious treat from the mind of Gina Marie.

Craig J. Sorensen

-- Saturday, October 30, 2010 at 06:26:37 (EDT)

Wow, Lana Fox. I can't wait to read your novel. Peace, A

Alana <>
-- Sunday, October 24, 2010 at 14:20:19 (EDT)

Loved "Her Room", very female, very knowing.


-- Tuesday, October 12, 2010 at 11:02:38 (EDT)

Shout out to a fellow Canadian - "Dressing For Dinner" was thoroughly enjoyable. Thanks Giselle!

Amanda Fox <>
Ottawa, Ontario Canada
-- Wednesday, September 29, 2010 at 13:50:55 (EDT)

Love Danton Grey!

Emily Sims <>
Forest Knolls, CA US
-- Saturday, September 18, 2010 at 22:39:20 (EDT)

Love the astrology and the breast obsession story!

-- Saturday, September 18, 2010 at 10:32:28 (EDT)

I really enjoyed Sharmagne Leland-St. John's poems in latest issue. There's a feeling of landscape and exploration that works so well on multiple levels, body, language, and human connection, as well as the actual land around the personas. Both sensual and emotional connections and partings.

Patricia Esposito <>
St. Charles, IL USA
-- Thursday, August 26, 2010 at 13:47:18 (EDT)

Body of Christ is so well written it amazes me, what a great story here.

Ken Stone
-- Thursday, August 12, 2010 at 11:44:53 (EDT)

That's the Synthetic story by the way, sorry!

Mike Walsh <>
Leicester, Leics UK
-- Wednesday, August 04, 2010 at 18:05:05 (EDT)

Cool! Where can you hire one baby..?

Mike Walsh <>
Leicester, Leics England
-- Wednesday, August 04, 2010 at 18:03:44 (EDT)

That John Updike story seems a bit forced, but the Body of Christ story is stunning, good work Cleansheets in finding this writer, I hope we read more from him.

Teresa Naquin
-- Saturday, July 31, 2010 at 11:25:50 (EDT)

Donna George Storey -- loved the story!


-- Wednesday, July 21, 2010 at 22:50:52 (EDT)

Donna George Storey, I love you! Pure brilliance!

Gina Marie <>
Camas, WA USA
-- Wednesday, July 21, 2010 at 21:25:41 (EDT)

Ditto on "Body of Christ" - great story.

-- Friday, July 16, 2010 at 10:39:18 (EDT)

Body of Christ is a stunning story.

Jennifer Howe

-- Thursday, July 15, 2010 at 16:34:02 (EDT)

Loved the personal ads writing about eating the vegetarian pussy!


-- Tuesday, July 13, 2010 at 19:12:53 (EDT)

"I could see that she was searching for the same thing I was -- the Beautiful Moment, the Ultimate Moment with the Right Person, where the questions are answered and the future is clear. "

Forty-Four - really great story!

Charles Van
Sf, CA
-- Saturday, July 03, 2010 at 10:11:23 (EDT)

I feel out of control. Oh Violet I know you so well.It wasn't as bad as yours but too much. 3 yrs. I started I ended. I was in charge. My life is my own now. It was only a dream.A sweet,horrible dream.

Cathy <sparklekat0296>
phila, pa usa
-- Saturday, July 03, 2010 at 00:05:29 (EDT)

The pleasure principle.

Mmmmmmm. Sweet, but.... plain? Simple? Where is the truly imaginative, mind stretching version. It's not up to the usual standard, CleanSheets.

Cupidness <>

-- Thursday, July 01, 2010 at 01:26:17 (EDT)

Love "Pleasure Principle" and the gelato stories!

Jen V.
-- Wednesday, June 30, 2010 at 13:00:06 (EDT)

"To a Landscaper" makes me smile and nod my head and miss my beautiful, treeplanting, landscaping intended who is on his way to me to finally live our lives together. I've loved him half my life, and this poem sums up the dearest and oldest feelings I have for him, the ones that sprouted when I was just 17 and saw him for the very first time. What a gorgeous poem!

Emily Sims <>
West Marin, CA US
-- Monday, June 21, 2010 at 01:25:45 (EDT)

Gelato...certainly. any flavor, including vanilla. please.

Boston, USA
-- Wednesday, June 09, 2010 at 11:33:57 (EDT)

re. Forty-four. Thank you for the engaging, calm, reconciled-to-life coming of age story. Teenagers aren't the only ones to learn the facts of life and then move on.

Erik <>
Los Angeles, CA USA
-- Monday, May 24, 2010 at 10:56:01 (EDT)

Those are beautiful photos, classy yet crazy sexy.

-- Thursday, May 13, 2010 at 16:24:15 (EDT)

These are great stories here!

-- Monday, May 10, 2010 at 17:29:48 (EDT)

i love that first day of summer.

-- Wednesday, May 05, 2010 at 11:41:38 (EDT)

"Carrot and Stick" - lovely and real.

-- Saturday, April 24, 2010 at 11:29:37 (EDT)

Absolutely love the Peach and the other fruit stories!!

J Stone
-- Wednesday, April 21, 2010 at 21:02:28 (EDT) and wow again.

max <>
boston, ma usa
-- Wednesday, April 21, 2010 at 10:31:03 (EDT)

Not crazy about the Kimera story, thought his old stuff was much better. It may be because men writing from the woman's point of view so rarely get it right, it tends to sound a bit off.

Loved "How a perfect pen provided the tipping point of pleasure" by Jacqueline Applebee!

-- Monday, April 12, 2010 at 16:39:52 (EDT)

Sex with Owen,by Mike Kimera.
A wonderfully sensual tale. The message for me is that real joy is possible,if we stay true to ourselves. Thanks.

annay <>
the plains, oh usa
-- Thursday, April 08, 2010 at 14:16:57 (EDT)

Panopticon - Oh boy.

Stuart Hale, you rule! That was FUN!

b.entheos <>
Oakland, CA U.S.A.
-- Friday, March 26, 2010 at 15:37:39 (EDT)

The Ratcatcher!
Layla Briar is the kind of author that fills out the characters deftly, and leaves you with the feeling that if you met her, you would like her a lot.
An excellent story.

(Clean Sheets gets an A+)

b. entheos <>
Oakland, CA USA
-- Wednesday, March 24, 2010 at 15:03:03 (EDT)

Playing around with this extended metaphor may be fun for the writer, but it fails to reach the erotic potential for which this genre is profoundly capable. The act of fellatio can be described in infinitely more detail, focusing on the elements of humiliation, submission/domination, and control enjoyed by the receiver of this gift. I could write a short story on the subject from the point-of-view of a jaded straight male who becomes fascinated with the penis to the point of worship: his own and a variety of others.

Robert Lucas <>
Grand Rapids, MI USA
-- Sunday, March 21, 2010 at 14:02:48 (EDT)

Daisy it,love it. it happens all the time, i imagine


-- Thursday, March 18, 2010 at 11:58:13 (EDT)

I loved Devil's Dance. I felt my heart race and get quite wet. It was a story I lived. Lately the only 'heat' I feel is my own. A dry spell which even I can't fill. So, I read stories, this works for me. I'm the character in it. I write a little myself. It gives me the freedom to get whatever I want. Keep up the good job. I need to feel the shower drench me again.

cathy <>
phila, pa usa
-- Sunday, March 14, 2010 at 14:13:02 (EDT)

Loved "Blow" by Marina St. Clair! Thanks Marina, and thanks for publishing it Clean Sheets!

Emerald <>

-- Saturday, March 13, 2010 at 02:18:39 (EST)

A brilliant piece of work, unexpected at every turn.

Steven Johnsrud <>
Palo Alto, CA USA
-- Tuesday, March 09, 2010 at 16:14:17 (EST)

Very beautiful "The Tipping Point of Blue" story.

-- Saturday, March 06, 2010 at 10:51:53 (EST)

Wow, love all 3 of those stories, particularly the one about the tipping point of the pen!!


-- Friday, March 05, 2010 at 10:26:40 (EST)

Just finished "Being Bobby" Wow... Really hot, and giving a whole new perspective. Loved it!984

Suzi K <>

-- Tuesday, March 02, 2010 at 03:51:24 (EST)

"The Virginity Chronicles" is the stupidest story I've ever read. And I mean that as a compliment. It confounded my expectations completely. I couldn't stop giggling. I think my downstairs neighbor must think I'm insane. . .


-- Tuesday, March 02, 2010 at 00:38:46 (EST)

You are an inspiring writer. Inspiring because you make me want to enjoy sex the way that you do. Your stories are as pleasurable as I am sure you are. I wish to read more.

An old lover
Buffalo, NY
-- Sunday, February 28, 2010 at 22:52:17 (EST)

Into the Lens. Gina Marie - you have fully encapsulated the reality of sexual experience. A pleasure to read.

Julia Freeman <>

-- Wednesday, February 24, 2010 at 16:56:59 (EST)

Very real. Women have endless capacity than men. True.

R.K.Singh <>
Dhanbad, Jharkhand India
-- Friday, February 19, 2010 at 00:37:36 (EST)

Zabsolutely Z-lightful!

Zank you, M.J. Nicholls!

[The Virginity Chronicles (1)]

EllaRegina <>
Zew Zork, ZZ Zoo Zess Zay
-- Monday, February 15, 2010 at 23:18:33 (EST)

Grasping Raspberry makes me want to be one...hers, in fact.


-- Wednesday, February 03, 2010 at 11:55:31 (EST)

Object d'Art - fantastic...artsy, honest, sexy, original.

-- Saturday, January 30, 2010 at 17:14:26 (EST)

Lovely "Pretty Girl" and the one called "Spoon" is amazing.


-- Wednesday, January 20, 2010 at 23:29:52 (EST)

Shame I never could end up at your church...hella good writing though!

Craig <>
Manchaester, UK ENGLAND
-- Tuesday, January 12, 2010 at 16:39:43 (EST)

Oh my goodness.....'Spoon' took my breath away, that is some great writing!!!

-- Thursday, January 07, 2010 at 20:37:49 (EST)

Enjoyed the Helen Waterman story. Lili = awesome.

Greta C

-- Sunday, December 27, 2009 at 13:41:45 (EST)

"Objects of Desire" is a fascinating article! I think I'm in love with my Xmas tree.

Jenny V

-- Saturday, December 26, 2009 at 10:50:53 (EST)

Wow, that story was off he charts amazing. I actually had a visual while reading it. Hot hot and more hot. Did I mention hot!

Kesha <>
little rock, Ar United States
-- Saturday, December 19, 2009 at 23:58:36 (EST)

The "Helen Waterman" story is a delight. There's been some great fiction here lately!


-- Thursday, December 10, 2009 at 23:54:45 (EST)

"Raw" is delicious!


-- Monday, November 23, 2009 at 14:04:16 (EST)

I'm jealous, I wish I had thought to write charming bits about the sex life of various fruits! - just read all three, they were outstanding.

-- Thursday, November 19, 2009 at 21:50:56 (EST)

What a fabulous story on objectophilia! I've never read anything so fascinating in my life. Great writing by Mr. Baltensperger.

London, Canada
-- Tuesday, November 17, 2009 at 20:22:42 (EST)

"I can stack sushi all night", that's one great story!

Jeremy A.
-- Monday, November 16, 2009 at 10:47:17 (EST)

The Proper Care and Feeding of A Wife
by Andi Marie

Loved It!!! Very well written.

-- Thursday, November 12, 2009 at 22:53:59 (EST)

I see that Cleansheets pulled Alicia Night Orchid's (who I hear is actually a man) plagiarized story "Teach" but I have a cached copy of it, and wow! there's a whole section of it (the good part in the middle) lifted and barely altered from the other writer's older story. Shame on her(him)!

Russell Jamison

-- Thursday, November 12, 2009 at 15:53:30 (EST)

Wow, Happily married 23 years. Been thinking about someone. Just like your story, i want one time and I know he does too!

jack <>
paducah, ky
-- Wednesday, November 11, 2009 at 22:02:55 (EST)

Loved the story. More please.


-- Tuesday, November 10, 2009 at 11:43:31 (EST)

Wow! Well written, You draw us in right away, irregardless of the end. Very real!
Very sexy! Many thanks A.

ko shin Bob Hanson <>
Neshkeoe , WI USA
-- Monday, November 09, 2009 at 23:18:20 (EST)

To Sally Miller;10 Best Kept Sex Secrets Nice and short to the point. I a, 61 yr. old woman I have known these secrets since I was in my 40's. I just love sex and the more I know the better it is. I find the G-spot more intense than any other way. For me trying to stop it makes it so much better.I can't ever see me not wanting to have sex in whatever form.

Cat <sparklekat@comcast,net>
Phila, Pa USA
-- Monday, November 09, 2009 at 13:20:21 (EST)

Love the horoscopes, especially mine--:))

-- Friday, November 06, 2009 at 12:37:05 (EST)

Adam Berlin's "Raw" is dirty, obsessive, and brilliantly written---I loved it!!

Chicago, IL
-- Friday, October 30, 2009 at 20:06:16 (EDT)

Wow, that's a fantastic edgy story (Raw")- great writing.

Kevin Miller
-- Wednesday, October 28, 2009 at 10:57:03 (EDT)

I thought Ariel Graham's "Business Class" first class; indeed, scrumptious, or, better, juicy, a succulent mango of a story...i read it twice!

alan kay

-- Tuesday, October 27, 2009 at 17:51:22 (EDT)

I enjoyed your review of the "Sweet Heart Vibe" toy, but I couldn't find it on "Babeland's" site at all. Not sure if you know anyone else that sells it.

Patty <>
Boston, MA USA
-- Saturday, October 24, 2009 at 22:12:18 (EDT)

I really liked the Banana Bunch and other fruit story, I hope that there's more of them!

-- Friday, October 23, 2009 at 14:32:34 (EDT)

Loved "Three Variations on Susan" - nicely short and evocative.

Karl Miller
-- Wednesday, October 14, 2009 at 12:09:03 (EDT)

I really enjoyed the story Time Capsule. I would like to see more of her stories on here!

Lydia VanderKaay <>
Dayton, OH US
-- Friday, October 09, 2009 at 21:43:56 (EDT)

Greta Cabrel's poems are gorgeous.

-- Tuesday, October 06, 2009 at 10:00:06 (EDT)

Thats funny I came here to comment on how much I liked Soul Catcher---it was very different from standard erotica, a bit more evocative and literary without the wham bam met her/had sex with her/it was great type of story. Would like to see more of this variety!!

Charlie Scully
-- Wednesday, September 30, 2009 at 15:57:19 (EDT)

This week's Exotica and Fiction (Banana Bunch and Forgotten Places) are excellent, the sort of wonderful writing I've come to expect at Clean Sheets. I'm glad, because I thought last week's pieces (Vanessa--Ordinary Woman #2 and Soul Catcher) were terrible: they were neither credible nor well-written, even making allowances for the author of Soul Catcher not being a native English speaker. I'm sorry to be negative, but after so many years of consistently fine offerings, I was really shocked by those two stories.

Atlanta, GA
-- Wednesday, September 30, 2009 at 11:56:56 (EDT)

The poetry here is great, a wonderful variety, from the haiku/tanka to the remarkable "five song fuck" and on, it's quite a collection.

Jackson M
-- Tuesday, September 08, 2009 at 19:11:15 (EDT)

Sylvia Lowry's "Night Train" captivated me with its arresting imagery, unfaltering momentum, and keen subjectivity.

Jeremy Edwards

-- Thursday, September 03, 2009 at 07:18:53 (EDT)

"Languorous Lychee" - sweet!


-- Monday, August 31, 2009 at 20:06:53 (EDT)

Regarding the story Teresa, very exciting concept but, I know of very few women who could climax without any physical stimulation of themselves at all.


-- Friday, August 28, 2009 at 00:11:34 (EDT)

Re: "Half past pudenda?" awww, that was a very cute and realistic story!


-- Thursday, August 27, 2009 at 16:22:03 (EDT)

I'll leave a comment right after my cigarette...and shower. and I think I bit my lip...

Rhonda Smolarek <>
Colorado Springs, CO United States
-- Tuesday, August 18, 2009 at 20:26:27 (EDT)

When I was 11 or 12, and I became sexually mature, I was haunted by longings that I could find no answer for.

I wanted something in side of me!

And my not-Barbie doll's legs were the answer. The cravings were intense and overwhelming, but once I shoved her legs into my pussy, and moved them in and out,.....

Sigh. It felt so good.

fuzzarelly <>
Corydon, IN USA
-- Tuesday, August 18, 2009 at 13:42:50 (EDT)

Thanks to Carlotta and Riccardo for their wonderful comments about my story. To answer your question: I just had another one of my stories published at The Erotic Woman. http:../../ Spread the word, and thanks to you and to Clean Sheets. xoxoxo.

Marina Kris

-- Friday, August 14, 2009 at 21:45:02 (EDT)

Phew - Susan St. Aubin's story is steaming me up here - excellent fiction.

-- Friday, August 14, 2009 at 19:31:49 (EDT)

Wow -"You" by Susan St. Aubin is the kind of unusual story I come to CleanSheets for, it's dark and sexy and I want more!!

-- Wednesday, August 05, 2009 at 11:57:48 (EDT)

Morning Hunger-John Sydney South
You have a very lucky woman. I could feel it. All of it. Well done.

Lisah <>
Toronto, ONT. Canada
-- Wednesday, July 29, 2009 at 14:18:43 (EDT)

Morning Hunger-John Sydney South
You have a very lucky woman. I could feel it. All of it. Well done.

Lisah <>
Toronto, ONT. Canada
-- Wednesday, July 29, 2009 at 14:18:19 (EDT)

I really love the astrology here, keep it coming!!

Lauren V
-- Monday, July 13, 2009 at 09:44:02 (EDT)

Beautiful beautiful war/love poem by Sonja de Vries!

-- Thursday, June 25, 2009 at 11:34:50 (EDT)

Definitely go to Babeland and check out their "favorites" - they have tons of info on where to start!

CS editor Sam

-- Wednesday, June 10, 2009 at 16:22:49 (EDT)

Hi, I want to buy my girlfriend her first toy. Can anyone advise me on what I should get and where should I start. Neither of us are experienced so any advise would be appreciated.

grimji <>

-- Monday, June 01, 2009 at 13:52:03 (EDT)

Amazing - I think i came right after julie in Maude's books - both times!

Janice <>
-- Friday, May 29, 2009 at 11:30:14 (EDT)

"Being Bobby" thrilled me! Another Donna George Storey tour de force!

Jeremy Edwards

-- Thursday, May 28, 2009 at 11:44:19 (EDT)

i want to fuck like Jeremy's folks in The Fabric


-- Wednesday, May 27, 2009 at 16:59:25 (EDT)

I was struck by the vivid imagery and sizzling tension in Craig Sorensen's "Severance." Nicely done!

Emerald <>

-- Sunday, May 24, 2009 at 16:01:14 (EDT)

I found Donna George Storey's "Being Bobby" a delight from start to finish! Thanks!

Emerald <>

-- Wednesday, May 20, 2009 at 03:14:06 (EDT)

I really enjoyed "Fabric" by Jeremy Edwards. Clever, thoughtful, stimulating, and hot! Thanks Jeremy!

Emerald <>

-- Wednesday, May 13, 2009 at 20:53:45 (EDT)

I really enjoyed Craig Sorensen’s, “Severance." His story had me hot and bothered, hot and angry and hot and hopeful, all at the same time. The parallelism between his characters tumultuous relationship, along with the sub-text - sign of these economic times - was compelling, brilliant actually. I could feel the respected love/hate relationship between his two characters from beginning to end. Craig reminds us in this yin/yang story of how sometimes opposites attract, and that usually leads to an extraordinarily explosive ending.

neve black <>
cleveland, OH US
-- Tuesday, May 12, 2009 at 08:17:53 (EDT)

"The Fabric" written by Jeremy Edwards was yet another wonderful piece written by this sensuous writer. Jeremy always manages to capture the tenderness and beauty shared between his couples - this story is a poignant tale of the magic that is often found in the smallest details. Beautiful.

Neve Black <>
Cleveand, OH US
-- Tuesday, May 12, 2009 at 08:04:27 (EDT)

Ah, the "Semen Trees", quite wonderful!


-- Monday, May 11, 2009 at 10:41:24 (EDT)

Re: Bredin's "My Greatest Comeback"

I read Clean Sheets because I enjoy sex-positive erotica that treats both women and men as humans with feelings, brains, and real emotions. If I wanted to read misogynist cardboard cut-outs rather than literary erotica, I'd go pick up a Penthouse Forum.

I'm sorry to say that "My Greatest Comeback", with its heavy emphasis on misogyny (his slamming of the women he's been with on the basis of them not being "Major League material" physically, and whining incessantly about how he can't get a woman he really wants) and racist tropes (such as "Latina shorties" who live in the projects and "ethnic beauties"), is not up to the standards of quality that I usually expect from Clean Sheets. I'm not sure who approved this one, but to use an appropriate baseball metaphor, they really dropped the ball.

-- Saturday, May 09, 2009 at 00:32:32 (EDT)

What a lovely, delicious piece of writing! And so true to the experience, too... thank you!

Lily Minet <>

-- Friday, May 08, 2009 at 15:24:21 (EDT)

I also wanted to say how much I loved Jeremy Edwards' "The Fabric," which eloquently shows that small details do make all the difference!

Donna George Storey <>
Bay Area, CA USA
-- Thursday, May 07, 2009 at 22:35:39 (EDT)

"Severance" is a masterpiece! The tension between the colleagues is so well-crafted, the wit and delicious prose provides yet another layer of pleasure. And the climax? They don't come more satisfying. A wonderful story.

Donna George Storey <>
Bay Area, CA USA
-- Thursday, May 07, 2009 at 20:50:30 (EDT)

The Pretty Pussy by Silkenvoice was so much fun to read! Great narrative and wonderful humor. I think she's onto something with the concept that some women's bi-curiosity is tied to a curiosity about what their own pussies really look like. As soon as I read it, I had an aha! moment myself. Thanks Clean Sheets for publishing it.

Dania <>
San Mateo, CA USA
-- Tuesday, April 28, 2009 at 22:59:21 (EDT)

I disagree with Sal. Cerection's piece was very well written. It's hilarious!


-- Monday, April 27, 2009 at 15:07:38 (EDT)

that story by Cerection? How the hell did that end up on here? Not one of the better stories on here.

Sal <fearandclothingblog@gmail.comj>
-- Friday, April 24, 2009 at 23:25:44 (EDT)

"With Strings Attached"
well written and thought out.
would like to read more frpm this writer.

stvkomodo <>
san diego, ca usa
-- Sunday, April 12, 2009 at 14:33:53 (EDT)

Hector Ramirez's Into the Mystic makes me want to be him for those lush moments in his poem.

-- Wednesday, April 08, 2009 at 09:44:19 (EDT)

Re: What I'll never say to you...

L <>
Dallas, TX USA
-- Friday, April 03, 2009 at 03:04:19 (EDT)

That was fun to read, but the guy better hope he looks like Sean Connery to make that dream come true!

-- Wednesday, April 01, 2009 at 17:01:20 (EDT)

Almond Oil
by Emma Dashwood
Emma, I absolutely loved your story, it really resonated with me. Thank you!

Julia Freeman
-- Monday, March 23, 2009 at 20:02:44 (EDT)

Good story, however I think that certain positions during sex will encourage an orgasm as well as good communication. If you don't tell your sexual partner that your goal is to get off, they might not try for it. Try being on top or if s/he is strong enough, have her/him lift you up with your legs wrapped around her/him. That position is not used enough. I am one of those 6% but I work really hard every time for the big finish.


-- Thursday, March 19, 2009 at 23:33:55 (EDT)


-- Friday, March 13, 2009 at 23:32:55 (EDT)

Funny story, good luck!

-- Saturday, March 07, 2009 at 10:34:47 (EST)

I found "Tapping into Theresa" by Jeremy Edwards mystically and deeply beautiful -- thank you Jeremy.

Emerald <>

-- Thursday, March 05, 2009 at 15:48:00 (EST)

Jeremy Edward's piece, Tapping Into Theresa is gorgeous. It oozes raw sex appeal, while transcending more traditional spirtual beliefs; allowing the reader to celebrate the spirtuality found in the love, and respect of two people.

Loved it!

Neve Black <>
Cleveland, OH US
-- Wednesday, March 04, 2009 at 15:37:47 (EST)

loved Morning Hunger by John Sydney South. very sensual and sexual. a true wake-up call.

max <>
boston, ma usa
-- Wednesday, February 25, 2009 at 11:24:55 (EST)

"Letting Go" by Julia Freeman - Amazing piece of writing. It has real artistic quality, even outside its intended context. Please post some more of your fantastic work!

Just Someone
-- Sunday, January 25, 2009 at 22:53:17 (EST)

Thank you, Clean Sheets. You're a breath of fresh air in the fetid world of internet erotica. I'm glad I found you.

Arlo Gaffer <>

-- Tuesday, January 20, 2009 at 16:36:55 (EST)

Mariella Messenger's "You Can Tie Me Up" teases with its twists - is she in control, is he in control? Will they make love, will they be tender, or will they be wild? She shows us the beauty when...ALL OF THE ABOVE are true!

John Sydney South
-- Thursday, January 15, 2009 at 19:52:08 (EST)

Very artistically and beautifully written. More please Elizabeth.

Micaiah <>
Kimberley, ID USA
-- Thursday, January 15, 2009 at 18:26:02 (EST)

Great article about RLC. I've written my own review here if you want a lot more in depth information on the game...

Ed <>
Toronto, NA Canada
-- Saturday, January 10, 2009 at 10:22:40 (EST)

Love "...all I need is for you to tell me you love me and feel about me the way
Warren Haynes feels about a guitar" in the poetry!!

-- Wednesday, January 07, 2009 at 22:46:13 (EST)

I totally agree with the last comments from Riccardo (USA)and intend to read your piece again and again. It is 'divinely' poetical and I think it is so apt that you chose to preface it with 2 poetic lines of Kalil Gibran's. You erotic writing is what I, as a female reader of erotic literature, have been seeking. To combine the desire for a baby with such a beautiful description of love making is IMHO a great feat that few male writers of erotic literature could achieve.You are extremely gifted as a writer of this genre. Have you a book or anthology I can read?

-- Monday, January 05, 2009 at 19:04:29 (EST)

Traversed By His Longing is an incredibly poetic, evocative and moving piece. It defies easy categorization and demands multiple reads. I'm on my fifth. Erotica as art, the language as beautiful, mysterious and complex as the acts it portrays. Writer to writer -- Marina, you are a great talent. Where can I read more of your work?

-- Monday, January 05, 2009 at 14:56:22 (EST)

I came on here primarily looking for a pornographic read. What I found was actually very imaginative and touching! I think I saw a little of myself there too! A very good read. Thank you.

Graham <>
London, UK
-- Monday, December 29, 2008 at 18:56:40 (EST)

"Two Men" is an excellent piece! Her description of the nervousness she experiences as they meet, the erotic tension and excitement that builds prior to her decision to proceed is very well done. Her description of the sexual play is finely drawn and very arousing. A very erotic story, very much what I imagine the actual experience would be like. Please continue to publish Ana's stories, I would love to read more of her work!


-- Wednesday, December 17, 2008 at 14:19:47 (EST)

Two Men--fascinating, to watch from a woman's viewpoint, the complex interplay of polyamory--who will do what to whom, and when... Honest, sensual, and compellingly-told.


-- Friday, December 12, 2008 at 19:18:13 (EST)

loved "The Painter." Thank you for writing it.


-- Wednesday, December 10, 2008 at 14:35:31 (EST)

Mary F. Lee's "What I Want" is lovely. Delicious, raw imagery. Bravo!

K.M. Borberg

-- Sunday, December 07, 2008 at 15:53:02 (EST)

Tipton's haiku: A REAL GEM. I wish I could write one like this.Simply superb.
And Pallavi's essay too is very readable. Enjoyed it very much. Only one comment: Tools can be validated.

DHANBAD, Jharkhand India
-- Sunday, December 07, 2008 at 01:48:56 (EST)

Being Myself. great, great.


-- Saturday, December 06, 2008 at 12:06:53 (EST)

I love James Tipton's Haiku. simply wonderful.

max <>
boston, ma usa
-- Saturday, December 06, 2008 at 11:57:48 (EST)

LOVED Jeremy Edwards's "Being Myself" -- what a beautiful expose and tribute to joy, sex, and laughter. Thank you Jeremy!!


-- Thursday, December 04, 2008 at 03:50:23 (EST)

I just read Jeremy's Being Myself story. It's loaded with luscious sentiment, sympathy and sensuality. Jeremy does an excellent job at defining that awkward stage we all go through of self-discovery. I really enjoy the way Jeremy weaves his sexy and erotic prose into each and every story he writes. It's always a nice treat. Thumbs up!

Neve Black <>
Cleveland, OH US
-- Wednesday, December 03, 2008 at 11:08:33 (EST)

Great site chock full of great reads! So glad I found you! Will certainly recommend you to my readers.

Debra <>

-- Sunday, November 30, 2008 at 08:16:51 (EST)

What a breath of fresh air this site is. I came here for Jim Tipton's poetry, but now I'm in love with the whole poetry and exotic areas, can't quit reading!

San Diego, CA US
-- Thursday, November 27, 2008 at 19:09:32 (EST)

Thanks for a great site

Emil Favsing Overgaard <>
-- Monday, November 24, 2008 at 09:15:48 (EST)

. O Brave New World by Heidi Champa is filled with all those titilating pleasure: innocence, need, obsession, and lust and of course, the teacher/student fantasty. Oooh, la la!

Neve Black <>
Cleveland, OH US
-- Wednesday, November 12, 2008 at 14:56:54 (EST)

Just read Patricia Wong's "Fantasy". Loved it! Simple and real. Perfect.

Amanda Fox
-- Wednesday, November 05, 2008 at 07:37:54 (EST)

Marina Kris's "Traversed....." story was quite beautiful.

Chris T

-- Thursday, October 30, 2008 at 23:00:58 (EDT)

Ha ha - I am Barack Obama and I heartily approve this Storey. Although I do not consider her any form of "hot"!!

B. Obama
-- Thursday, October 30, 2008 at 17:26:28 (EDT)

With voting day looming in the background, Chasing Sarah couldn't come at a better time. Donna's image of a lipstick canine is phenomenal.

Thanks Donna!

Neve Black <>
Cleveland, OH US
-- Thursday, October 30, 2008 at 16:39:17 (EDT)

Re: " Chasing Sarah":

I am Sarah Palin and I approve this Storey.

EllaRegina <>

-- Thursday, October 30, 2008 at 14:55:49 (EDT)

"Chasing Sara" is wonderful in a scary kind of way, and I loved the dancing videos!!

-- Thursday, October 30, 2008 at 13:37:28 (EDT)

Jalissa Au Jus, by J. Sherwood was a great read. I'm at the library and had to contain myself at the very end. I shared story with my boo and he was like, "no more surprise recipes for me!" Can we say the Colonel's secret recipe?

Trisha <>
St. Louis, MO USA
-- Monday, October 27, 2008 at 15:45:57 (EDT)

"I Miss You" by Navaeh Edwards is lovely!!

-- Saturday, October 25, 2008 at 11:01:52 (EDT)

Patricia Wong's "The Fantasy" taps into a particularly provocative aspect of marital eroticism. It candidly focuses on the way long-married couples often move into deeply forbidden areas of discource and sexual exploration as a means of imbuing the private, the shameful, and the personal into a new, highly charged erotic language. I'm impressed by the honesty and insight of this story.

-- Wednesday, October 15, 2008 at 08:23:22 (EDT)

"Eros" is lovely - so many good things here!

-- Wednesday, October 08, 2008 at 13:28:56 (EDT)

Wow. Just wow. I rarely find myself compelled to comment on the many wonderful stories on this site, but Slipstream was so heartbreakingly beautiful I just had to send my compliments to the author. Amazing. Thank you.

Ellen <>

-- Thursday, October 02, 2008 at 21:46:57 (EDT)

Love that jumping picture and also the Eros poems!!

Phoenix, AZ
-- Monday, September 29, 2008 at 13:53:39 (EDT)

Wow, now "Sex, Fucking, and the Female Orgasm" from 2005 which is an old article but deserves a comment...I have a great affection for my wife who orgasms with me and we quite often orgasm together after a long period of lovely penetration and sex in different positions. For me to be able to hold on to my erection for a long period or even to rest during sex and then reignite the flame and continue a number of times, then orgasm together with tumultuous timing is magnificent and she revels in it...and the beauty of cumming in such a way, is that we then spoon and she absolutely enjoys the afterglow of laying there with muscles twitching and juices flowing for at least an hour or more to delight the senses over what was and is!
Her ability to be able to use my hard cock as a dildo and ride me senseless up against her clit and then to have my cock head titilate her cervix entrance deep inside is the raptureous and exquisite sensation that puts us both over the top.
A very enjoyable journey...and one that continues unabated and sometime at least twice in the one day or even same session....I am mid sixties and she mid fifties....bring it on!!

Brian G
-- Sunday, September 28, 2008 at 20:18:48 (EDT)

Alisha Steele- I just read Slipstream and it had me in tears. what a beautiful story. Yes, yes, it was hot, very sexy, but the fast beating of my heart was for more than the hot train sex. My heart ached because Steve would ultimately lose Brian, and it made me sad. Thanks for a great love story.

monica k
-- Friday, September 26, 2008 at 11:58:12 (EDT)

Congratulations on your recent posting of Mr. Thomas' Eros. He is among the very few poets whose work continually amazes me! With a finely honed voice & wings of a raven, his poems are black & sleek & blue as any midnight bird of prey!
Joseph R. Trombatore
Spring, Texas

Joseph R. Trombatore <>
Spring, TX USA
-- Wednesday, September 24, 2008 at 14:31:19 (EDT)

"Threshold" is beautiful writing!

Cathy V
-- Wednesday, September 17, 2008 at 18:12:59 (EDT)

All the current Fiction is really good. In particular, I liked "Not Having Sex." Good stuff

J. Harshaw
Charlotte, NC
-- Wednesday, September 10, 2008 at 18:15:12 (EDT)

OMG! This Emma Greer person was spying on me! "Not Having Sex" is an almost exact account of the most frustrating and at the same time exciting evenings of my life. She nailed it perfectly. I may need to check back to see what else she's writing about my life. Loved it.

Taylor Hanes <>
Portland, OR USA
-- Monday, September 08, 2008 at 15:56:54 (EDT)

After this week, I badly needed a bawdy laugh - thank you.

axamermaid <>
-- Friday, September 05, 2008 at 19:37:21 (EDT)

"Mustang Sally" made me laugh out loud! In addition, I quite enjoyed its great imagery and of course hot sex.


-- Wednesday, September 03, 2008 at 04:38:15 (EDT)

"Perfect Pussies" is the kind of unusual, kinky, yet loving writing I come to Cleansheets to read - excellent piece.

Jack K.

-- Wednesday, August 27, 2008 at 11:00:17 (EDT)

That's the best part about watching the summer Olympics, those bodies! Those amazing, sensual, fit, health bodies (excusing the child-girl-gymnasts here) -- is there anything sexier in a kinda healthy way than watching Walsh & Misty May move?!!

-- Saturday, August 23, 2008 at 16:29:24 (EDT)

The tanka suite posseses a gorgeous sensuality.

Maria <>
New York, NY America
-- Thursday, August 21, 2008 at 09:02:31 (EDT)

Love the candlelight/nipple picutre, absolutely gorgeous!

Dani B
-- Wednesday, August 20, 2008 at 22:25:16 (EDT)

lucy walle-afternoon. i really enjoyed the many layers of this made me think about my own life,and how i too need to just walk away.yes,he was hot,but he isn't for me.i must stop my enless fantasizing about him,for it keeps me trapped-with nothing.thanks so much for your work.

m.a.m. <>
baltimore, md. usa
-- Friday, August 15, 2008 at 11:44:49 (EDT)

"I wish my childhood fingers had known
it was an orchid between my thighs"- gorgeous poem and what a great thought.

Dani Webb
-- Thursday, August 14, 2008 at 10:30:06 (EDT)

By Night Light: Sestina, Voyeur is lovely, haven't read many erotic sestinas!

Ann Arbor, MI
-- Tuesday, August 12, 2008 at 15:39:12 (EDT)

Wow what a great website, just found you !! I read thru the first three exoti ca stories, fabulous- The History of Her Tongue, Lucid Dreaming, Fucking Badly-this sure beats working on a Monday morning!!

-- Monday, August 11, 2008 at 09:47:43 (EDT)

Lucid Dreaming..hmmm, I have a relationship like that with someone far night I touch myself, remembering how his hands felt and will again...I whisper his name into the night..thank you for this story.

Sam <>

-- Sunday, August 03, 2008 at 21:12:38 (EDT)

"Afternoon" was the best piece of its kind I've read in a very long time. I was able to fall into it entirely. Lucy should be very proud; I'm excited to know what her second story will be like!

Andrea <>
Omaha, NE USA
-- Saturday, August 02, 2008 at 15:21:55 (EDT)

Marking Her Territory is delicious, delightful. Makes you feel like you're there, watching silently.

max <>
Boston, MA USA
-- Wednesday, July 23, 2008 at 10:58:34 (EDT)

"The Year of Fucking Badly" is hilarious - thank you!

-- Tuesday, July 22, 2008 at 19:36:51 (EDT)

Loved "Longevity" -- thanks Gwen!


-- Saturday, July 19, 2008 at 03:00:39 (EDT)

Lux Zakari writes with a great mix of dialogue, detail, and feelings from the characters. I will look for more from her.

Scott <>
-- Friday, July 18, 2008 at 14:17:59 (EDT)

If only there were no such thing as bad sex, but there's plenty:

Callaigh <>

-- Friday, July 18, 2008 at 12:34:37 (EDT)

This story put me in a really good mood.....even though Ive had plenty of bad sex myself!!

Janet B.
-- Thursday, July 17, 2008 at 09:27:16 (EDT)

"The Mango" is a sly, beautiful story! It reminds me of Christina Rossetti's "Goblin Market," but even juicier!

Carol Goodman <>
Great Neck, NY USA
-- Friday, July 11, 2008 at 08:23:34 (EDT)

Scott Andrew Smith ~The curves of his writing took lead of my body. I want more.

Lady Z <>
San Mateo, CA USA
-- Saturday, July 05, 2008 at 15:35:34 (EDT)

The curves of his writing took lead of my body. I want more.

Lady Z <>
San Mateo, CA USA
-- Saturday, July 05, 2008 at 15:33:54 (EDT)

Lush & lovely triolet by Alex.

Maria <>
-- Tuesday, July 01, 2008 at 10:06:04 (EDT)

Green Eyes, Purple Door, and Wonderful Annika Jones!


-- Saturday, June 28, 2008 at 04:27:52 (EDT)

Loved "Green Eyes and Purple Doors" as a tight, hot, succinct quickie. Thanks!

Emerald <>

-- Friday, June 27, 2008 at 01:44:49 (EDT)

"Hunger" by C.J. Black was incredibly satisfying. More, please?

Jo <>
Bay Area, CA US
-- Saturday, June 14, 2008 at 17:48:01 (EDT)

I found "The Day the Sun Goddess Got Laid" just delightfully full of rich and beautiful imagery. Love to see Donna's work here, as she's one of my favorite erotica writers -- thanks!


-- Saturday, June 14, 2008 at 03:19:23 (EDT)

Donna George Storey, Cleansheets' Miss June 2008! And no pesky staples to mar the delectable centerfold. You go, girl!


-- Friday, June 13, 2008 at 03:13:55 (EDT)

Hey girl,
EXCELLENT! Good for you. Great read.
Love ya,

Cammie <>
Pella, IA
-- Thursday, June 05, 2008 at 12:10:23 (EDT)

I notice your tenth anniversary is coming up soon; doing anything special to commemmorate it?

Qc Canada
-- Friday, May 30, 2008 at 22:22:53 (EDT)

I like the "Obsession Art" gallery - more of these please!

Kent Weldon
-- Sunday, May 25, 2008 at 15:02:14 (EDT)

Wonderful poem, " Tumbling After" - I do like the poetry here!!

Katie V
-- Thursday, May 22, 2008 at 13:14:57 (EDT)

"To the Edge" by Yeva West was great, very funny and sexy!!

Janice C
-- Wednesday, May 07, 2008 at 10:04:38 (EDT)

Thank you, I enjoyed reading it. The scene was vivid, the characters shined like sharp stainless steel.

Nikita <>
-- Thursday, May 01, 2008 at 15:59:22 (EDT)

" Sex and Minimalism" is a great short piece of writing.

-- Tuesday, April 29, 2008 at 22:02:33 (EDT)

"Engineers and Astronauts" is a great piece.

Greg Gowlon
Chicago, IL
-- Thursday, April 03, 2008 at 17:22:27 (EDT)

The "Naked Chicks on postit notes" are crazy sexy, I wish I had them posted all over my office here!

-- Tuesday, March 25, 2008 at 12:15:04 (EDT)

Beautiful story, Jacqueline Applebee.

-- Friday, March 21, 2008 at 11:45:37 (EDT)

Just in case I haven't told you lately, I really love all of you at Cleansheets, its so smart and sexy and interesting to come here to read. I really like the way you cover gay and social issues, a bit different and more intriguing than other sources.

calicut , kerala india
-- Wednesday, March 19, 2008 at 23:56:37 (EDT)

loved Della's Sandelwood Candles. there is fire in that furnace and kindling in that sensual gray matter.

max <>

-- Wednesday, March 19, 2008 at 16:03:09 (EDT)

annika jones what a nice job you did w/"what you didnt do".great word pictures. more please. thanks.

annay <>
balto, md usa
-- Tuesday, March 18, 2008 at 22:47:50 (EDT)

We do appreciate readers' comments here about revamping our comments file style -- it is currently under consideration with our editorial staff. Some love the blog-style comments attached to only one entry/story; others love to be able to read about all of the magazine in one place. If any of our fabulous readers have some clever examples or constructive ideas on how to combine those two concepts, please feel free to email us as we work on this! We also have a reader survey coming up on our front page in about two weeks that will include views about comment style.

What a gorgeous, elegant magazine to find in the on-line world -- the poetry! and the art! not to mention the smut! Thank you for being here

Kara S. Westburg <>
-- Monday, March 17, 2008 at 15:16:29 (EDT)

Absolutely love the naked chicks on the postit notes - first class original art here.

Howard S
-- Wednesday, March 12, 2008 at 15:01:55 (EDT)

As usual, you don't disappoint when you tell a story - the whole story, that is.

When will you pull me off of the ledge and reunite me with Jack and Alex...
oh, the pining away is slowly ....k.i.l.l.i.n.g.m.e

Still love you though.......

chicago girl <>
chicago, il usa
-- Thursday, March 06, 2008 at 15:37:17 (EST)

Ladies and Gentlemen of CS, thanks for the story from Alison Tyler.

Alison, this is clever and sexy and super. Thank you.


Alana <>
Portland, OR USA
-- Wednesday, March 05, 2008 at 21:30:55 (EST)

Great story Alison. Nice to see something of your "spiritual" side, for a change.

Karl Friedrich Gauss <>

-- Wednesday, March 05, 2008 at 12:26:47 (EST)

Very refreshing, enlightening and perceptive essay on the complex phallic symbology in life, art, and poetry.

Dhanbad, India
-- Monday, March 03, 2008 at 02:18:10 (EST)

Late Night Snack was a wonderful read. Made me want to go make brownies and have some fun with the batter...

Eagle River, AK USA
-- Friday, February 29, 2008 at 02:28:19 (EST)

Almost Scientific is the kind of story I come to Cleansheets to read, smoking hot, smart, and real. And that picture is also smoking!!

-- Wednesday, February 20, 2008 at 14:13:32 (EST)

This was a very moving and beautiful story.

Vanessa Jackson <>
Atlanta, GA USA
-- Saturday, February 16, 2008 at 23:48:54 (EST)

Kite is a lovely story.very nicely written.

annay <>
ironton, oh usa
-- Saturday, February 16, 2008 at 15:27:27 (EST)

I loved Kite and Morning Prayer they are both quite lovely!


-- Saturday, February 16, 2008 at 08:51:56 (EST)

Well written, Glimpsing Gretchen develops the first person's humor and ability to laugh at himself without losing the thread of mutual desire. Great description of Gretchen's sweet ass! You done Good!


-- Saturday, February 09, 2008 at 14:20:31 (EST)

The story kite by Chrley Moon is absolutely beautiful, a miniature picture drawn delicately of magic and desire.

Karla D

-- Saturday, February 09, 2008 at 09:36:58 (EST)

The Strange Credibility of Polyamory by Pepper Mint was an excellent read. Just a couple of weeks ago I had a conversation with an uncle of mine who is a born-again Christian and asked me if I was 'right with God'. I'd told him that I followed Jesus' commandment that we love one another. That I love, that it is who I am and what I do. I was surprised by his acceptance of my lifestyle--and it made me think. Pepper Mint has put into words much of what I was considering. Thank you.

Silkenvoice <>
Portland, OR USA
-- Sunday, February 03, 2008 at 00:16:26 (EST)

Michael Saves Democracy is a hoot! Excellent job.

-- Friday, February 01, 2008 at 13:55:42 (EST)

I am really grateful for Clean Sheets which I have just found! I wonder if you would consider separate comment threads for the separate stories/posts? This is super confusing to try to find comments about the one story I just read (I came to this comments page by clicking "read comments" on the story page).


-- Thursday, January 31, 2008 at 04:21:46 (EST)

Nice stories - I love the "kite" one and the poem!!


-- Wednesday, January 30, 2008 at 11:21:20 (EST)

"Lacuna" is beautiful. The poetry in Cleansheets over time has educated me on what erotic poems really can be.

Leslie N VA

-- Tuesday, January 29, 2008 at 18:12:25 (EST)

Love Abbie, in fact love all the "exotica" I read, love the site here!!

Portland, OR
-- Saturday, January 19, 2008 at 17:43:34 (EST)

I think the reason that polyamory does so well in mainstream media these days is that it subverts the stereotype that monogamous people all cheat on their partners but pretend they don't. It's hard to argue that people should feel hurt if they don't, and it's hard to argue that people should lie about their actions. And stories about poly relationships going bad read like "Poly Person Acts Like Normal Person".

Daniel Barkalow

-- Thursday, January 17, 2008 at 23:41:49 (EST)

abbie and the stranger in the bar...
reminds me of something I wrote for a gentleman once...very steamy.

Sallie <>
St. Pete, USA
-- Thursday, January 17, 2008 at 13:43:09 (EST)

loved Abbie. very sensual and evocative. made me want to spread those legs.

max <>
Boston, Ma USA
-- Thursday, January 17, 2008 at 12:38:50 (EST)

dj Gunn with the drawing was a great short short story!!

Jenny Vogel
-- Wednesday, January 09, 2008 at 17:58:32 (EST)

The poem If I Could Make Her, is a
sly and seductive. I adore the clean
feel of the words on my tongue.

jade <>
brooklyn, ny america
-- Saturday, January 05, 2008 at 15:32:11 (EST)

I loved seeing the Rumi here, and also liked the list of things, I'll have to try poledancing!!

Alyssa M.
-- Thursday, January 03, 2008 at 15:08:28 (EST)

What happened to the horoscopes? I looked forward to them every month!


-- Wednesday, January 02, 2008 at 20:39:50 (EST)

I thoroughly enjoyed Need to Forget by Anne Lowry. It is a very touching story of how 2 people cope with bereavement.


-- Tuesday, January 01, 2008 at 20:37:33 (EST)

Be Still just knocks me out, very inspiring.

Heidi V.
Santa Fe, US
-- Friday, December 28, 2007 at 20:45:02 (EST)

DJ Gunn's story rocks-I'd like to read more of them, by the number!

Jackson Fenn <>
Seattle, WA US
-- Saturday, December 22, 2007 at 10:42:40 (EST)

What a fine direction, what door opening humane writing.


-- Friday, December 21, 2007 at 16:57:11 (EST)

he Lonely Onanista is the most original story I have read in years, and certainly one of the best written.

Erik <>
South Bend, IN USA
-- Thursday, December 20, 2007 at 03:12:09 (EST)

Love love love the post-it note chick art site from the clever story!!

Karen Av
Phoenix, AZ
-- Wednesday, December 19, 2007 at 19:24:14 (EST)

The Lonely Onanista is a great story! I'll never look at the Washington Square Arch in the same way again....

Donna George Storey <>

-- Wednesday, December 19, 2007 at 15:02:36 (EST)

That's a smoking hot story with a nice suprise at the end with the drawing!

Kevin Johnson
-- Wednesday, December 19, 2007 at 14:33:13 (EST)

Those are amazing answers to the advice questions, Indigo is right about the voice (especially the ending about boring yourself to death!) Never heard of him before, but am going to buy the book!

Jordan VG
-- Friday, December 14, 2007 at 12:55:07 (EST)

Great stuff here---I love the "society is a gun" answer!!

Janna S
-- Wednesday, December 12, 2007 at 11:53:11 (EST)

Just read the article about "The Rabbit" and from her description..I think I may have to buy one..and lose my mind.

Sallie <>
St. Petersburg, FL USA
-- Monday, December 10, 2007 at 15:07:44 (EST)

Wow! Be Still is a work of art


-- Saturday, December 08, 2007 at 09:59:52 (EST)

"Skin Deep" is a terrific story. It captures two damaged people in a very tender way. Thank you for your efforts.

Boston, MA
-- Friday, December 07, 2007 at 16:43:38 (EST)

Your story was exquisite - the velocity, the intensity - everything about it. And kudos to you for going to such a difficult, deep place with your erotic imagination.

Anne Lowry's fan club

-- Thursday, December 06, 2007 at 14:52:21 (EST)

Very beautiful poem 'Be Still', I like that kind of style of poetry!

Sandi V.
-- Thursday, December 06, 2007 at 10:20:42 (EST)

"When I am Syr" by Brandy Bonilla both brutally honest and breathtakingly beautiful. --An intimate foray.

Bri <shade_of>
Ozark, AL USA
-- Saturday, December 01, 2007 at 02:32:00 (EST)

I really enjoyed Jim Danner's story "One for the Road." He captures the sense of this couple very smoothly. The sexual connection between them is quite real.

This is the kind of erotica I like to read.

Nan A <>

-- Thursday, November 29, 2007 at 18:27:59 (EST)

Just in case I haven't told you lately, I really love all of you at Cleansheets, its so smart and sexy and interesting to come here to read. I really like the way you cover gay and social issues, a bit different and more intriguing than other sources.

-- Thursday, November 29, 2007 at 11:22:06 (EST)

Kris-You always had a way with words. A gift indeed. The story captivates you and doesn't let go. It's not about the sex but two people trying to survive and reconnect with their bodies. Great work

Teresa <>
Saint Louis, MO USA
-- Monday, November 26, 2007 at 11:26:08 (EST)

"Skin Deep" is awesome. Beautiful and winsomely sexy! Thank you for this amazing piece of prose.

Marguerite <>

-- Monday, November 26, 2007 at 10:16:44 (EST)

"To My Girlfriend, Who Loves Detail" - good story, but everyone knows how the second act goes ..... 'and now I can't stop thinking about her'......or ' she won't stop calling me'...... and the next thing you know you're on Dr Phil!

JC Redbound
-- Sunday, November 25, 2007 at 14:36:16 (EST)

Bliss in mutual imperfection: Love it, Kristina. Thank you.

Alana <>
-- Sunday, November 25, 2007 at 14:18:44 (EST)

Love the pink dress story!

Jenna F.
-- Monday, November 19, 2007 at 10:55:57 (EST)

Re "Idle Hands"- as a massage therapist, I cringed at the mere idea of this story. I've been a CS reader for over 7 years, and I am aware that erotica sexualizes a wide range of occupations, but massage therapists have been fighting so long to be recognized as medical professionals, and a story like this doesn't help. People who might feel uncomfortable getting their first massage are gonna get the wrong idea from this story. It just furthers the misconception that massage is sexual, not therapeutic.

Jen <>
Boston, MA USA
-- Friday, November 16, 2007 at 17:13:52 (EST)

Pretty nice.

Neale Sourna
-- Friday, November 16, 2007 at 02:17:07 (EST)

Two cinquains: Simply Superb.

Dhanbad, India
-- Thursday, November 15, 2007 at 23:39:01 (EST)

Loved Shadow Dancing! Great characters and tightly-wound, intense story. Bravo ;)

Gracie <>
New York, NY U.S.A.
-- Wednesday, November 14, 2007 at 23:50:39 (EST)

That was a sweet story Sarah. Thank you

Nitaelf <>
Klamath Falls, OR USA
-- Sunday, October 28, 2007 at 22:25:26 (EDT)

Damn! Could you ask for more? Alana Noel Voth's "Shadow Dancing" lived up to its title and then some! Erotic? Yes, but with an edge - an undercurrent as human and dangerous as a perilous river. For beneath the implied beauty of her protagonist writhes a mind trapped in suffering. And the ending ... well, if you haven't read the story, read it. I wished it didn't end. When's the book coming out, Alana?

Sonny <>
New York, NY
-- Friday, October 26, 2007 at 11:58:26 (EDT)

Sarah Black's "A Blowjob for Jesus" was not at all what I expected. Happy to say that it was much, much more. Mixing what could have been blasphemous elements, (to others, I myself am not at all bothered my the concoction) It was a sexy story that got to the figurative truth about the beauty one can find in any love. If Jesus did come back I could with great certainty believe that he would be a pan sexual bringer of happiness and comfort. Thank you for combining the things I love most about writing, a good hot loving scene surrounded by deep meaning all wrapped up in a "not-at-all preachy" package. Yet another brilliant story in a month of excellent stories. You did the near impossible, you made me forget the mythos and enjoy the truth as it should be.

Roy Mitchel

-- Monday, October 22, 2007 at 00:15:56 (EDT)

Ann Regentin's Magnificat was phenomenal, personal, and as awe-inspiring as the pregnancy, indecision and fear she describes. I remember it well, though ours was hoped for, somewhat planned and welcome, it still brought forth all the emotions and fears excitement Ann so beautifully describes. Thank you Ann for one hell of a beautiful story!

Roy Mitchel

-- Sunday, October 21, 2007 at 23:52:10 (EDT)

Brilliant story. I enjoyed it thoroughly. Bakka

-- Sunday, October 21, 2007 at 01:58:33 (EDT)

What an amazing poem!

Edwinna Bryant

-- Sunday, October 14, 2007 at 20:59:27 (EDT)

fantastic lyrical writing...enjoyed it.

Zoe <>
newport beach, ca
-- Friday, October 12, 2007 at 01:23:27 (EDT)

you write very well. nut you already know that

Hank Heath <>
Nashville, tn usa
-- Tuesday, October 09, 2007 at 02:41:39 (EDT)

Very erotic. Didn't want it to end .

-- Friday, October 05, 2007 at 18:21:41 (EDT)

Loved Existential Wendall. Very funny


-- Friday, October 05, 2007 at 08:17:12 (EDT)

Red Leatherette...oh yes.

max <>
boston, ma usa
-- Wednesday, October 03, 2007 at 14:16:36 (EDT)

Hi, Sommer. Just read "My Will." Just about the most erotic thing I've ever read.


-- Sunday, September 30, 2007 at 17:15:36 (EDT)

The author really should try the Lifestyle before he attepts to write about the subject. It is most obvious he has not.

John <>
Albuquerque, NM USA
-- Thursday, September 27, 2007 at 22:52:48 (EDT)

Hi Jeremy Edwards. Just read, and enjoyed, "Involuntarily." Nice job.

Alana <>
-- Tuesday, September 25, 2007 at 22:21:32 (EDT)

I loved Consonance by DJ Maze. Interesting *and* hot is a combination that's far more difficult to achieve than one would think, and this story does it so very well.


-- Friday, September 21, 2007 at 01:12:06 (EDT)

I loved Consonance by DJ Maze. It's rare to find something that titillates you both intellectually and sexually, but the lyricism in the language takes care of the former while the tenderness of emotion and sensory description take care of the latter. I'm glad I got to read it!


-- Thursday, September 20, 2007 at 14:09:43 (EDT)

I love the poetry, especially the one by J. Shontere. And I appreciated your article about and the 7 foot tall walking condom!

Kevin <>
Woodland Hills, CA USA
-- Wednesday, September 19, 2007 at 19:11:35 (EDT)

I love the poetry, especially the one by J. Shontere. And I appreciated your article about condoms and the 7 foot tall walking condom!

Kevin <>
Woodland Hills, CA USA
-- Wednesday, September 19, 2007 at 19:11:06 (EDT)

Hi Sommer,

Wow, more stories like "My Will" please. Enjoyed the premise very much. Thank you.

Alana <>
-- Monday, September 17, 2007 at 19:15:27 (EDT)

re: Deanna: Wow. Nice balance between yearning and fear, there. I love a piece that isn't quite comfortable. Thank you for this.


-- Monday, September 10, 2007 at 23:10:50 (EDT)

I do enjoy the majority of the stories on this website but the one for "Big Boy" seemed on the line of real abuse. Especially when she had to have sex with his friend(a complete stranger to her). It didn't really sound like she wanted it like in other stories in the moment. It was as if she did it just to make him (master) happy in a way of ignorance of not knowing there is a choice. I know I may be taking this too literal, but compared to other stories I felt compelled to respond.


-- Wednesday, September 05, 2007 at 20:40:02 (EDT)

Directly inverting the strip-tease motif against repressed victorian imagery in "Dressing Dana" was such an original way to build up sexual tension. Very arousing!


-- Monday, September 03, 2007 at 19:00:36 (EDT)

"Sex on the Other Side of Midnight": the rhythm sets the scene, the words part of the music. When I felt the rhythm, then read the words, the whole unfolded ... a dance of nature lovers. That's poetry, Magi. So beautiful, so moving.

Sonny <>
New York, NY USA
-- Monday, September 03, 2007 at 18:41:54 (EDT)

Grey Irish Mornings -- really enjoy the way this writer is reflecting on the ups and downs of love in the real world. An calling the author "an up and coming erotic writer" is great. He can put that on the jacket of his next book.


-- Saturday, September 01, 2007 at 17:58:12 (EDT)

I really enjoyed Objects of desire, you see I'm also an Anthropology student:) Did give me some wonderful ideas for research proposals and my current supervisor is very yummy...

Coco <>
-- Wednesday, August 29, 2007 at 04:00:50 (EDT)

I loved Objects of Meaning by S. Lee.
I felt it was funny as hell, poignanT and just well done. I wish I had the balls this girl has in this tale...

Toni <>
who the hell cares, Blue state Democratic all the way
-- Thursday, August 23, 2007 at 01:04:23 (EDT)

You ain't British are you 'luv' so stop 'pretendin' dear


-- Wednesday, August 22, 2007 at 17:52:36 (EDT)

Toni Barca's work is just sexy & intriguing ---thank you for sharing it with us all.

Sandy K. <>
-- Sunday, August 19, 2007 at 21:34:46 (EDT)

Terminally Curious was great! I gasped and then cracked up at the end. Good fun!

-- Monday, August 13, 2007 at 00:46:32 (EDT)

Sarah Parr's "Buda" was a remarkably simple story; so simple that you felt it. When a story simply makes you feel without any unnecessary words, that's marvelous. Well done!

Sonny <>
-- Saturday, August 11, 2007 at 23:10:08 (EDT)

Lovely! Rich language, very arousing and engaging. Plus, it describes perfectly the disjointed and passionate sex between two people of different nationalities when both feel so alone. Their difference is what makes them yearn for each other, and you really nailed it. Nice job!

Lauren <>
New York, NY USA
-- Saturday, August 11, 2007 at 17:43:17 (EDT)

"Lessons on Love" by Caroline Wolfe reads perfectly. It sounds didactic while intuitively accurate, as if Wolfe expressed universal truths here that many of us haven't slowed down to see. I laughed to myself when she encouraged women to not talk about problems when making love to a man. I had to slow myself down when reading the details of making love to a woman.

I look forward to applying the lesson soon. Thanks!

Rickey P <>

-- Wednesday, August 08, 2007 at 10:39:05 (EDT)

Hi Jean Roberta,

Many thanks for your review of The Mammoth Book of Best New Gay Erotica. I've got it and am reading my way around the book. So far, my favs include Kirk Read's "Little Stevie," Shaun Levin's "A History of Noah," Alexander Chee's "The Crow's Confession," "Two Hearts" by David May, "The Bureaucrat" by Andrew Holleran (his book, Dancer from the Dance, is equally amazing) and TJL's "Last Time." Incredible collection. Three cheers.

Alana <>
-- Tuesday, August 07, 2007 at 21:24:43 (EDT)

I love it, it turned me wet

futna <>
cairo, egypt
-- Monday, August 06, 2007 at 07:11:14 (EDT)

Sunburn was hot. perfect for chasing boredom,the enemy in the middle of the night,, my mind wanders. thanx for sharing elizabeth

gr melvin <>
n.ft.myers, fl
-- Monday, July 30, 2007 at 01:19:06 (EDT)

Nikki, that was mind-blowing (almost as good as the real thing!)WHEN are we going to get a book of your poetry published I wonder?

Gordon Marriott <>
Orkney, Scotland
-- Friday, July 27, 2007 at 20:09:43 (EDT)

Ms. Nx Magennis, the poem is lovely!

Alana <>
-- Friday, July 27, 2007 at 10:11:38 (EDT)

Wow, great tip on the greatest lube ever, I bought it from Babeland and love it!!! Also happen to be most in love with Clean Sheets too, it's first on my list of zines to read every week!!!

Sandy V.
-- Monday, July 23, 2007 at 12:31:58 (EDT)

Simply superb


R.K.Singh <>
Dhanbad, India
-- Friday, July 20, 2007 at 02:20:46 (EDT)

re: Attune To You..very good, I enjoyed the mystery.

Sallie <>
St. Petersburg, FL USA
-- Wednesday, July 18, 2007 at 15:22:13 (EDT)

I loved Sara Parr's Buda. It's a strong,evocative and sexy piece. I could feel the rain storm, and the orgasms. Well done!


-- Wednesday, July 18, 2007 at 11:12:48 (EDT)

Question Mark made me conceptualize our commonality more than I ever had before. I am profoundly moved by knowing that not only am I not alone in my analyzing of this strange situation we are in - (everyone would say we're crazy)but that someone else knows where I am - where my spirit is. And that I can talk to you about it over coffee is nothing short but a miraclous gift from God.


-- Monday, July 09, 2007 at 20:51:28 (EDT)

vin rouge
how in the world could I ever forget?

Ken <>
Gainesville, FL USA
-- Wednesday, July 04, 2007 at 15:23:44 (EDT)

ahhh..where is my greenman

Sallie <>
St. Pete, FL USA
-- Sunday, July 01, 2007 at 05:13:23 (EDT)

Hi Ms. Marsden, you captured this obsessive-compulsive character quite well. Sexy but sad. Thank you.

Alana <>
POrtland, OR USA
-- Friday, June 29, 2007 at 21:46:27 (EDT)

Marvelous job, Ms. Wolfsong. The Greenman will never die. Bless you for keeping him alive in a dark time.

And yes, this is what it looks/feels like for many heterosexuals.


----so beautifully written...

Valentine Bonnaire

-- Wednesday, June 27, 2007 at 10:28:46 (EDT)

Sorry, I should have been more specific; I was referencing Trianon by Timothy Mulcahy. Great work.

Ellen <>
somewhere, mi USA
-- Tuesday, June 26, 2007 at 14:21:18 (EDT)

Incredibly powerful and disturbingly beautiful. This story will haunt me for days.

Ellen <>
somewhere, MI USA
-- Tuesday, June 26, 2007 at 14:19:25 (EDT)

Holy blessed smokes, Kim Wright! Curved Slightly Like A Question Mark is gorgeous & profound. Did you ever pull off the 2nd person POV. Thank you.

By the way, I've also read your story in BAE 2007. "Dangerous Games With Competent People." One of the best in the book. Hope to read more of your stuff. Good luck with the novel.

Alana <>
Portland, OR USA
-- Sunday, June 24, 2007 at 21:33:49 (EDT)

Trianon by Timothy Mulcahy is without doubt the best and most beautiful erotic story I've ever read. Never before have I been both turned on and incredibly moved by erotica. Wow - the story is an amazing achivement, and I'm grateful for having read it. Thank you.

-- Thursday, June 21, 2007 at 14:09:27 (EDT)

Your magazine is superb! Keep up the good work.

Nick Manley <>
Kansas City, MO U.S.A.
-- Friday, June 15, 2007 at 01:09:41 (EDT)

The total attention on a lover and the molten hot freezing sensations travelling across nerves in the speed of light, from erogenous zones touched and licked, to the brain, becomes the ultimate headtrip in a finite moment of nirvana. Wow, you made me realize this.

Philnensia <>
Manila, Philippines
-- Tuesday, June 12, 2007 at 06:29:30 (EDT)

"Maria's Window" by Teresa Lamai is a gem.
It resonates with dark, archetypical themes,
yet sparkles with vivid imagery.The story artfully bounds between locales
and times, keeping the reader interested
but never bewildered.
"Maria's Window" is further proof that, in the right hands,
erotica can be smart and sexy.

Reen Guierre <>
-- Sunday, June 10, 2007 at 12:03:01 (EDT)

The Bubble.....totally haunting and wierd.....i like it

A.J. <>
-- Friday, June 08, 2007 at 01:36:53 (EDT)

Velvet Moore's Born of a Shadow is a delight, a wonderfully, dark and shadowy delight. you can feel the cool dark light.

max cherven <>
Boston, ma usa
-- Wednesday, June 06, 2007 at 09:04:14 (EDT)

That "magic Feeling" I have felt that, I know that..

Sallie <>
St. Petersburg, FL US
-- Tuesday, June 05, 2007 at 07:41:04 (EDT)

Wow, I really liked "Magic Feeling", Shell Shocked", and "The Bag", great stories!!

-- Friday, June 01, 2007 at 10:49:08 (EDT)

The Bag was a tender, sensual and beautiful story.

Vanessa Jackson <>
Atlanta, GA USA
-- Friday, May 25, 2007 at 20:46:20 (EDT)

Re: "Domai believes that the beauty of woman is valuable, and that not only is it okay to admire beauty, it is a sin not to" -- OK, but that's only half the picture; the beauty of man is valuable as well.

Starchild <>
San Francisco, CA Francisco, CA 94114 United States
-- Monday, May 14, 2007 at 02:49:34 (EDT)

Just a comment on William Dean's essay on the topic of sex and death: what I remember most from a book on the various Jewish views of the afterlife, was written by an Hassidic rabbi who said that there's food and sex in heaven-I pray that he's right, and, by the way, I say, the hell with the food-unless it's strictly ORGANic!


-- Sunday, May 13, 2007 at 17:29:33 (EDT)

I read Bandora's Box(her affliction)by J. Walczesky.

It was very raw, sensual and empowered with a sort of defiance for freedom. I loved it.

This phrase totally hypnotised me:

Be sexy, just be sexy, flaunt your pussy and purr.

I loved it ! Keep writing!

cinthia <>
montreal, Qc Canada
-- Thursday, May 10, 2007 at 16:22:42 (EDT)

Rebecca Vining... she is winning really !

Read "Babyji" by Abha Dabeswar... Indian context. Subtle but potent stuff.

arvind <>
Provo, CA Guess
-- Tuesday, May 08, 2007 at 13:10:36 (EDT)

Shanna, the poems are awesome.

Alana <>
Portland, OR USA
-- Wednesday, May 02, 2007 at 21:34:09 (EDT)

I loved "A Case of Female Hysteria." Great tone, images, pacing. I can't wait to read more from Alicia Wag

Terie B. <>
Madison, WI USA
-- Wednesday, May 02, 2007 at 13:54:00 (EDT)

This is my first time at Clean Sheets. I love the story, "A Note" by Alexandria Day. Those first months of being a new mother and the body changes are a big adjustment. There's nothing more sensual than nursing breasts. Often the only solution to the tenderness is your husband/partner suckling them often. Sweet story. I hope to read more by this author.

New York,
-- Tuesday, May 01, 2007 at 12:57:09 (EDT)

Love H.L. Berry's Nightgirl.

Alexandria Day <>
Baldwin, ME USA
-- Monday, April 23, 2007 at 09:41:29 (EDT)

Alicia Wag's "A Case of Female Hysteria" ... depth, substance ... much
appreciated, much enjoyed. More, please.


-- Tuesday, April 17, 2007 at 23:24:49 (EDT)

Amanda Fox ... you're a treasure! Keep writing!

Sonny C <bluebourbonstreet>
New York, NY USA
-- Tuesday, April 17, 2007 at 23:07:47 (EDT)

I may be a wee bit biased, but Will Belegon's poetry rawks!

Alessia Brio <>
Pittsburgh, PA USA
-- Saturday, April 14, 2007 at 18:52:01 (EDT)

I thought both poems by Will Belegon were great but Answer The Phone brought back a sexy moment/memory. Looking forward to reading more of your work.

Suzette <>
-- Friday, April 13, 2007 at 19:13:50 (EDT)

Will Belegon's poetry is just as good as his prose. I'm delighted to see him here on Clean Sheets!

Gwen Masters <>
Centerville, TN USA
-- Friday, April 13, 2007 at 08:04:02 (EDT)

Whoa, Samson. Get me to a hairdresser, and oh yes, a woman as hot as this one. she is scalding.

max cherven <>
boston, ma usa
-- Wednesday, April 04, 2007 at 16:49:02 (EDT)

'Petard' by Erastes is very hot.

Rachel Green <>
Sheffield, UK
-- Monday, April 02, 2007 at 19:32:51 (EDT)

I adore the pictures of the BBW woman, and also the story about 'riding the edge of a knife'!

Janice C.
-- Saturday, March 31, 2007 at 12:12:02 (EDT)

Love the naked girl with penguines picture - and I'm always trying to uncover my 'erotic nature' at cleansheets!!

Terry BK
-- Friday, February 23, 2007 at 19:50:34 (EST)

Pole Dancer is beautifully written, with a nice twist at the end. I really enjoyed it, especially the observations in the final paragraph. Well done!


-- Wednesday, February 07, 2007 at 20:05:45 (EST)

Michael by Gwen Masters is awesome, small town erotica at its best.....

-- Wednesday, January 31, 2007 at 00:30:07 (EST)

f.a.night; you have touched on a favourite fantasy. Thank you!


-- Monday, January 29, 2007 at 20:05:28 (EST)

I appreciate all these good movie reviews here in Cleansheets, since we're always looking for sexy moview to watch!!

Ken Youst
-- Thursday, January 25, 2007 at 13:54:24 (EST)

"Ink Stone" -- absolutely elegant poetry here. I do love that Clean Sheets keeps up so well with erotic poetry, when so few places do!

Shane W.
-- Monday, January 22, 2007 at 15:35:35 (EST)

I love the American Violet stories...Being in a BDSM relationship myself i found it his subltety interesting but his cruelty a little frightening.....

Good Story though

Property Of KINGBRH <>
TWIN CITY, ga United States
-- Monday, January 22, 2007 at 14:29:21 (EST)

Trailblazers is my total fantasy. I would love to be part of a hot 3some like this. 2 huge cocks for me? Yes please!Great story!

monica <>
Aurora, CO USA
-- Monday, January 15, 2007 at 21:38:00 (EST)

Jayden Blake, I'm so lovin that camping article, you're on to something, a real inspiration in so many ways. keep writing!

thank you

-- Saturday, January 13, 2007 at 01:17:16 (EST)

Dear Mr. Brendin;

I was so with you on this until we got here: "Still, it was only our second date. I figured if she's enough of a floozy to come to my apartment, who knows how many dicks have been inside her." Bummer.

Alana Noel <>
Portland, OR
-- Thursday, January 11, 2007 at 23:02:02 (EST)

Good With Tools is a very sensual story. The interesting characters and references to the senses brought it to life.

Alex Day

-- Thursday, January 11, 2007 at 09:58:26 (EST)

Dear Dorothy,
I particularly liked the third poem, a lyrical tanka. Brief and beautiful
R K Singh

R.K.Singh <>
Dhanbad, Jharkhand India
-- Wednesday, January 10, 2007 at 23:22:07 (EST)

Lord, those hippie girls are SEXY as can be!! Thank you for that link!

John VN
-- Sunday, January 07, 2007 at 23:57:45 (EST)

Dear Kat,

I love narcissa. I've come back to read it over and over, perhaps a dozen times in the last two weeks. It's sexy, it's urgent, it paints pictures, and, best of all, it tells a story. The unpunctuated style works wonderfully to make your voice unique.

narcissa has so many fabulous lines I could quote the whole piece trying to tell you which ones they are. Here's a few of my favorite favorites:

"me with my white eyelet cotton dress pulled up" [oooh, so sexy]

"the years trip and flip and rip away"

"men old and young and in between look, cannot help but look want wonder" [me too]

"molten polenta and i am shimmering, alone at this bar in heat"

"more pluck than i have in my toolkit"

And of course, the smoldering line CleanSheets selected for a teaser:

"they lose their bearings no matter how hip no matter how worldly no matter how young and i am in heat and i want to score the supple flesh of a man's bare back with my short nails while he pummels me punishes me pushes himself into me into me into me"

If gently done, writers also like to know what readers think might make a simmering piece like narcissa even better. I know you went over every word a billion times, and to you it's perfect, but what about leaving out another word or three to make the above passage even more rushingly demanding:

they lose their bearings no matter how hip no matter how worldly no matter how young and i am in heat and want to score the supple flesh of a man's bare back with my short nails while he pummels punishes pushes himself into me into me into me

Offered with the greatest respect,
Matthew Dyne

Matthew Dyne <>
Lexington, MA USA
-- Thursday, January 04, 2007 at 14:36:49 (EST)

John Bredin's "The Blow Job that Changed America" made me feel more patriotic than the many hours I spent watching the Ford funerals and requiems.

New York, NY
-- Wednesday, January 03, 2007 at 23:29:45 (EST)

Narcissa by Kat Cox was great!
More please!


-- Wednesday, January 03, 2007 at 18:43:31 (EST)

Trailblazers, oh my, oh yes. oh, for a sleeping bag in that tent.


-- Wednesday, January 03, 2007 at 09:15:24 (EST)

loved "Posession" by Coco. How can we get more from her?

wasabi peas

-- Wednesday, December 27, 2006 at 00:42:16 (EST)

I really liked the blow job essay

-- Friday, December 22, 2006 at 23:50:54 (EST)

narcissa by kat cox is a wonderful story. all lower-case and no punctuation lends a breathlessness and erotic urgency to her writing. ee cumming(!) would have been impressed. please encourage further contributions from ms cox, her style and passion is exciting and left me wanting more

"Possession" by Coco Rogue is a engaging, fluid, shifting, and hauntingly beautiful storytellling.

Sonny C <>
New York, NY USA
-- Tuesday, December 19, 2006 at 00:36:25 (EST)

Hey, I loved that blow job rave and rant, great writing!

Jack House
-- Wednesday, December 13, 2006 at 11:59:23 (EST)

Milk by John Shanahan was one of the most intriguing pieces of erotic literature I have had the pleasure of taking in for a very long time. Some of it was the type of thing I pen, and some of it was totally of an ethereal plane. And I loved it all. I do hope to find more by this wordsmith, who spins a sultry tale weaving the words into my a pain/pleasure vibrato mantra that I just love and want more of.

FantasiaRealms <>

-- Monday, December 11, 2006 at 03:20:08 (EST)

Absolutely love "I Have the Power" with the erotic art after breast cancer - great work here.

Sandra Z.
-- Monday, December 04, 2006 at 18:38:03 (EST)

hurray for Mindy and her boring, perfect ass. great story.

max <>
Boston, ma
-- Wednesday, November 29, 2006 at 10:56:26 (EST)

The Tradeoff by Tula is a wonderful comment on the compromise of marriage. I truly enjoyed it.

B.F. Redd
Birmingham, AL
-- Monday, November 27, 2006 at 13:28:43 (EST)

Toni-Barca's linos - love them!


-- Friday, November 24, 2006 at 12:14:11 (EST)

The linocut series by Toni Barca is wonderful- beautiful designs with a touching message.

Los Angeles, CA USA
-- Wednesday, November 22, 2006 at 14:32:14 (EST)

Jules Jones is an awesome writer!

Catt <>
-- Wednesday, November 15, 2006 at 20:35:57 (EST)

"La Femme Rouge" is close to perfect storytelling.

Janna Z
-- Monday, November 13, 2006 at 16:39:12 (EST)

Lovely zine here!

Sandy B.
-- Monday, October 30, 2006 at 11:34:50 (EST)

I really loved "Ancient History" by Gwen Masters. Great use of water, with the rain and the balcony scene. Plus the feeling that she's doing something illicit? Yummy.

Callie McIntyre
Las Vegas, NV
-- Sunday, October 29, 2006 at 10:57:30 (EST)

I like all the stories and poems here, but this one realy hit home, cause I have my own secret.

Sallie <>
St. Pete, FL USA
-- Sunday, October 29, 2006 at 07:31:25 (EST)

"Drafts" by Michael O'Mahony. From the opening, the author grabbed me; as I read, I was caught up in the rhythm of the piece. I was whooshed along by the "breeze" -- directed, engrossed and finally fulfilled. I shared the unhurriedness of the lovers. And I thought "wouldn't it be wonderful to make love to a woman in such a languid way, to the rhythm of the wind?". Using a device as simple as the breeze flowing through a window, Michael spun a tale so deceptively intoxicating, I didn't exhale till the end.

Sonny C <>
New York, NY USA
-- Thursday, October 26, 2006 at 15:11:39 (EDT)

Absolutely loved "Rapture in Paris: Three Scenes of the Left Bank" , great stories!

Jenna T
-- Tuesday, October 24, 2006 at 19:39:07 (EDT)

Trade-off is an amazing story, so hot and complex


-- Saturday, September 30, 2006 at 22:59:43 (EDT)

I love the drawing sun vulva. That is so cool-

rochelle <>
-- Wednesday, September 27, 2006 at 17:19:06 (EDT)

Back by the Weekend was amazing. Thanks Jacqueline! More, more!

Mick <>
-- Tuesday, September 26, 2006 at 21:46:03 (EDT)

The Helmet
by Craig Sorensen

By the way Craig, that last comment from me, was for you buddy!

Skyler Grey <>
-- Saturday, September 23, 2006 at 13:58:34 (EDT)

That was an AWESOME excerpt and I can't wait to read more. Great job!
Best of luck in all your future writing.

Skyler Grey <>
-- Saturday, September 23, 2006 at 13:54:39 (EDT)

Thank you, Jenn, for your comments on my story, The Helmet. I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Craig J Sorensen

-- Friday, September 22, 2006 at 15:29:29 (EDT)


That story was really hot. As a foot man, I find that the super market is one of the nicest places to see sexy feet. I work for myself so am free during business hours and make it a point to go then looking for horney housewives w/sexy feet. I always carry a camera w/me and as I engage a sexy pair of feet in conversation, I subtly take pictures of her feet. If anone is interested in my pictures, write to me at and I will send some.

So ladies, do you dare to bare your feet in the supsermarket.


Bob <>
Haddonfield, NJ USA
-- Friday, September 22, 2006 at 08:34:51 (EDT)

Maggie.......Oh Baby-I am sure to have sweet dreams tonight...

Miami, FL USA
-- Friday, September 22, 2006 at 00:16:16 (EDT)

The Helmet
by Craig Sorensen

Was great! I loved the end where both got what was coming to them.


-- Thursday, September 21, 2006 at 20:28:32 (EDT)

These poems blew me away their so good.
I would aspire to write this well myself.

ronnie greenspan <>
hallandale, fl usa
-- Thursday, September 21, 2006 at 14:45:41 (EDT)

Many strong and brave things here. I like "Perseid's Witness" enormously. The lyrical flow seems just right, a bit toned down, but payoff in last line is a stunner--makes the "nature" prelude work all the more. Great stuff.

michael cleary <>
Ft. Lauderdale, FL Broward
-- Thursday, September 21, 2006 at 12:32:04 (EDT)

I agree with your article Sexual Identity. My questions to you is do you feel that bi-sexual women respond the same way? I'm bi-sexual & find it's so much easier being a women. We are much more touchy feely that it doesn't even have to be an issue. Twice a friend asked if I would help her to experiement. I wasn't about to turn that down & yet I didn't pressure them .I really wanted them to enjoy it.They did but 1 women said it was nice but she didn't want to do it again. And of course would I keep it a secret. I have so many secrets in my head it's a wonder it doesn't explode. My other friend shows up at my door now & then for comfort & closeness her husband doesn't give her.So. one way or another I'm having the warmth & softness of a woman next to me.

Cathy <>
Phila, Pa USA
-- Tuesday, September 05, 2006 at 10:12:13 (EDT)

"Into the Shadow and Through" was a beautifully written piece. A fantasy worth having.

Frank <>
Marietta, GA United States
-- Monday, September 04, 2006 at 11:50:34 (EDT)

about Nolan Whyte's Late Night Decisions:

This could be the work of a good writer. As a reader I can surely enjoy and relate to it. Maybe I should peek in exotica more often, but this is surely a good one.

Honest Joe
Mtl, QC Canada
-- Friday, September 01, 2006 at 01:32:48 (EDT)

Lord and Master. Perfection, so rare.


-- Monday, August 28, 2006 at 21:59:20 (EDT)

Is a quick ass...excuse me, a spanking ass of a story. Wow!
I want my daddy : )

TB <>
hell no, ca what happened?
-- Sunday, August 27, 2006 at 01:04:43 (EDT)

Into the Shadow & Through was EXCELLENT!!
I was excited ALL the way through it! I couldn't help but imagine myself in the sub-hubbie's place...Getting Wife's Bull ready to screw Her...sucking Him hard so He could give Her what I couldn't!!! Submitting to Him MORE power over me! Just to know my Wife was watching closely as I fell in LOVE with His big Cock! Moaning unabashedly...not caring that both knew how badly I wanted to have His Manhood in my mouth........
Then to watch Him bring Her to heights I could only dream of...Knowing how much better He was than me! TYTYTY..I LOVED It!!

Glen Walker <>
Birmingham, AL USA
-- Wednesday, August 23, 2006 at 03:01:24 (EDT)

Antonio Galarza's article is right-on target. An excellent read and couldn't be more correct!
Spread the word.

Rob <>
Houston, TX
-- Monday, August 21, 2006 at 12:04:36 (EDT)

WOW!!! This story smoked :) Very erotic and got me going :)

Bill <>
Raleigh, NC United States
-- Monday, August 21, 2006 at 11:52:03 (EDT)

beautiful read for a quiet afternoon home alone, just what every woman would want.

sandra <>
melbourne, vic australia
-- Sunday, August 13, 2006 at 01:07:36 (EDT)

"Honey Bunny" was a complete delight to read! Thank you so much!

Ami Doehring <>
-- Wednesday, August 09, 2006 at 19:27:19 (EDT)

. On "Attempt to Rise" -- I haven't stopped by here in awhile and now I'm incredibly glad I did. Gorgeous, tough, and very affecting. Very nice work. Best to all at CS

Julia Peters

-- Monday, August 07, 2006 at 15:37:00 (EDT)

Casa Azul - absolutely beautiful!!!

-- Monday, August 07, 2006 at 00:05:02 (EDT)

Good article from William Dean about sexual assault in the military. And please, let's not forget that women cannot obtain an abortion via their military medical care, thus increasing the trauma of many more victims.

A note for CS staff -- maybe you could consider implementing comment verification that requires you to enter a code in a box. It does seems to cut down the spam.

-- Friday, August 04, 2006 at 11:19:26 (EDT)

i love this site.

Ronny <>
Arabia, Sweden CA
-- Wednesday, August 02, 2006 at 23:28:56 (EDT)

You in My Garden was fucking amazing. It made me love love.


-- Monday, July 31, 2006 at 17:24:25 (EDT)

Wow... I just read Ms. McMillan's "The First Dance". What a well-deserved blue ribbon! Love the rhythm of the telling.

Luca <>

-- Monday, July 31, 2006 at 16:53:47 (EDT)

Really enjoyed Casa Azul by Valentine Bonnaire - well written, imaginative and erotic with credible characters not cardboard sexual athletes! Congratulations.

John L
-- Wednesday, July 19, 2006 at 15:03:23 (EDT)

I really like the poem 'naked girl with a samurai sword' was surprised to come across it

Cerlayne <>
Portland, ME USA
-- Friday, July 14, 2006 at 22:40:54 (EDT)

All the three poems--simply superb. Keep it up.

R.K.Singh <>
Dhanbad, Jharkhand India
-- Friday, July 14, 2006 at 00:10:55 (EDT)

If I Were. . . was downright clever!


-- Thursday, July 13, 2006 at 12:06:11 (EDT)

Liked the first two of the three "Erotic Paintings"

Erotic Dralion

-- Tuesday, July 04, 2006 at 11:58:25 (EDT)

For me BD/SM has always been in my life I can go back to vanilla but never for long. My parnter has always been on the same lines. In the past couple years he doesn;t want to let alone much of anything else. I haven't strayed and keep on trying. It's him that I want. But I seem to be losing myself and nothing I do works and any form. I have tried mostly anything I can dream up to interest him which is alot. I feel if this continues I will lose my desire completely or I will search someone else out. I have told him this. He'll try and then quit again. I can't imagine the rest of my life without sex. I'm now in my 50's. This is very sressful.

Chloe <>
Phila, Pa USA
-- Monday, July 03, 2006 at 12:35:05 (EDT)

Lovely story!Wish more women were like that.

David <>
Jersey CI~UK
-- Saturday, July 01, 2006 at 10:28:26 (EDT)

Comment on Poems by RC Edrington

Dark, dark, dark, but painfully true and beautiful. Loved the two pieces.


Elazarus Wills <>
Hotchkiss, CO USA
-- Wednesday, June 28, 2006 at 13:08:21 (EDT)

What a great love story! Thanks!

jennie <>
Phila, Pa USA
-- Tuesday, June 27, 2006 at 20:11:04 (EDT)

Wow! I really enjoyed reading this!!

Write more.......Thanks

Joe <FISH45373>
-- Tuesday, June 27, 2006 at 14:29:04 (EDT)

Thank you, Chris Bridges, for the anti-porn article. I agree completely! It's especially reassuring to know a man feels the same way.

-- Saturday, June 24, 2006 at 14:11:02 (EDT)

An excellent review of an excellent movie. Joy St. James' review of "Breakfast on Pluto" nailed it. As well as portraying transexuals in an honest light without the cliche, so too does it portray Ireland. Lot of parallels there. See this movie, please do. Kudos to Joy for the review.

Maggie K
-- Thursday, June 22, 2006 at 09:21:47 (EDT)

I am an American woman, who has long had the innate desire to be submissive. I just recently found out what this is truly about. I am like a sponge and cannot get enough. Reading Kayla Kuff's article about the submissive woman, hit home with me. I feel as she does in several points. This is my life, and I will live it happy! Polly Samples

Polly Samples <>
Avinger , TX USA
-- Sunday, June 18, 2006 at 15:26:01 (EDT)


Enjoyed Chris's anti-porn article. We really enjoyed Xana & Dax: When Opposites Attract (2005), I also have a Sex in Film wed site that lists good erotic films

Paul <>
Greenville, NC USA
-- Saturday, June 17, 2006 at 15:44:46 (EDT)


New Bamboo - great story Ms. Colson. On an elephant - original to say the least. Thank you.


-- Monday, June 12, 2006 at 17:51:50 (EDT)


Bike Girl is an incredibly erotic tale. Every time I read it I come. Every.Time.


-- Thursday, June 08, 2006 at 02:00:46 (EDT)


New Bamboo -- an incredibly sexy story. Loved it.


-- Wednesday, June 07, 2006 at 12:00:13 (EDT)


Thanks for the story "she likes it when i watch". Excellent. I've long wanted to do that for my partner. She loves how I maybe I will have to show this to her for a good night!!

Ames, IA USA
-- Saturday, June 03, 2006 at 17:09:43 (EDT)


Just as some pornography is just pictures of nude people, some stories are just words. Thanks for realizing that the best sex occurs in the mind and for sharing your sexy mind with me. Keep putting pen to paper and fingers to ???

desarian <>
b.h., mi usa
-- Thursday, June 01, 2006 at 23:05:16 (EDT)


First visit to this site and I feel at home already thanks to Chris's anti-porn article. I wholeheartedly agree. I'm a female who's always enjoyed porn. In the 70's the main thing was to turn down the horrible music - you know - porn music. I was glad to read what Chris had to say regarding his needs. I agree 100%, but didn't know if I was too picky or too bitchy or too catty or too something.

What I want is fairly simple:

1. a semi-believable plot for at least the first half of the movie.

2. realistic positions, changed frequently

3. no more cutting and splicing the explicit scenes just to stretch out the movie

4. women in the movies? please. kick off those damned high heels. Yes you have pretty legs and dainty feet and we've all seen them - now be real.

5. lingerie ladies! naked gets boring very quickly

6. HUMOR! I saw an X-rated western once that was great. I'd rather watch porn that has some quality humor in it than the best of what passes for porn today.

7. can't be stressed enough - get real, especially females. Tone down the makeup, let your hair actually move and get messy, walk and move like real people, not wannabe models, and stop acting like semen is a precious Gift From The Gods.


( women DO moan with pleasure while giving oral, if it's one of those times when I'm really hot)


-- Thursday, May 25, 2006 at 02:58:09 (EDT)


I'm wholeheartedly with Chris Bridges in his anti-porn position. it is a sad state of affairs when the virginal caresses of "Shakespeare in Love" are more arousing than anything you find in the over-21 section of the video store. If I wanted anatomy lessons I'd go see my gyn. (Here's a thought--what if they had a plot?) The best thing I've seen in years is "Secretary," and there was nearly no skin showing...

Tina M

-- Wednesday, May 24, 2006 at 18:37:53 (EDT)


Your Shortsheets editor is right on---that 'You are So Beautiful' was downright orgasmic for me!! (Taylor HIcks on AI)

-- Tuesday, May 16, 2006 at 22:41:15 (EDT)


thanks for the "heads up" on attention to
the clitoris; I think I will give it
priority when I finally get the next lady
in the sack. At least I'll give my jonny
less attention.

jon <>
san jose, ca usa
-- Monday, May 15, 2006 at 05:22:13 (EDT)


I absolutely loved "To Dance Beneath the Diamond Sky", it is just beautiful, and so right!

-- Monday, May 08, 2006 at 21:06:01 (EDT)


This is too weird. My estranged man goes by the name Flint, and I truly am a MOlly. Then I read on, and this is the way it truly is. Minus the hospital. But everything else. I was like who has been a voyeur in my house?God, it brought back memoreis of the good times. Thank you. I almost forgot I had a sex drive.

Molly A <>
Frederick, Md USA
-- Sunday, April 30, 2006 at 01:38:09 (EDT)


G-spot Spelunking,
I really enjoyed this article and the way the author made the content fun and playful. I would love to read more of her stuff

Morgan <>
Scott Depot, WV USA
-- Thursday, April 27, 2006 at 10:09:24 (EDT)


"In the Rain" feels real and haunting.

JJ Long
-- Tuesday, April 25, 2006 at 23:33:14 (EDT)


i really enjoyed reading the short story "the first dance" by tressie mcmillian. wonderfully descriptive. i wish that could of been me...


-- Tuesday, April 25, 2006 at 19:10:10 (EDT)


I loved that article about Etta James. I was so there when you described Etta mouthing and then you prone on the floor.
I fell in love with the blues on day listening to Ruth Brown singing her chair song on NPR on a long scenic drive home with the kids fast asleep in the back seat.
Thanks too for letting us know when the rerun of that show is on. I am definitely tuning in.

Belvidere, IL USA
-- Sunday, April 23, 2006 at 02:59:23 (EDT)


You should see her live... sigh... and damn...


-- Saturday, April 22, 2006 at 20:33:50 (EDT)


I enjoyed your remarks about Etta james. I have been one of her greatest fans since I was growing up during the fifties in the Bedford Stuyvesant section of Brooklyn. When all the radios in the apartments facing the street would all be turned to the local blues and R&B radio station. And Etta's voice would be seducing all of my teenage friends. She is the epitome of blues and R&B of the fifties and the queen of today's blues. I look forward to the Austin City rerun later this month. Thanks for the heads up keep up the commentaries.

Eric <>
-- Friday, April 21, 2006 at 00:22:25 (EDT)


10,000 orgasms! What we all want, not just the 10K, but the guy who cares enough to count!

Janna S.
-- Thursday, April 20, 2006 at 23:33:30 (EDT)


I am loving the female energy in the recent Exotica - Song of Solomon, Paper Buddha, Diamond Sky, etc..... great stuff!

-- Thursday, April 20, 2006 at 11:03:03 (EDT)


Lawrence Schimel - another reason to regret that I didn't come out at Yale. At least I got my fill in Madrid of Strong and Chez Pomme and a Javi. :)


-- Wednesday, April 19, 2006 at 18:57:18 (EDT)


yes, I know this story
I LIVE this story
with a lover who I can only be with every 4 to 6 months (or so)
we take what pleasure we can in those stolen hours together
the author's words cut to the bone
to the core
thank you

zoesophia <>
Richmond, VA US
-- Wednesday, April 19, 2006 at 18:25:23 (EDT)


Toni Barca is a master of words and pictures. When they say a picture is worth a thousand words they should also say toni's words are worth a thousand pictures. Bang on Toni

Chef Stu
Sherman Oaks, CA USA
-- Friday, April 14, 2006 at 12:45:13 (EDT)


I had a visual feast as I read Paper Buddha and Some Ice Cubes- You should do more art and poetry, it works so very well-

Very sensual art work by Barca-

Nikki <>
-- Thursday, April 13, 2006 at 16:58:33 (EDT)


Love the Toni Barca, and love when Cleansheets does poetry and art together!!


-- Wednesday, April 12, 2006 at 17:11:19 (EDT)


A Saturday Morning in love said that it described almost perfectly the way she feels when she is with me. Thank you for putting our love into words.


-- Monday, April 10, 2006 at 01:54:22 (EDT)


Love your writing...

Rae <>
Tallmadge, Oh US
-- Sunday, April 09, 2006 at 11:44:02 (EDT)


I certainly agree..completely..with
Mr. Garcia's comments about Mike Kimera.
No one does it better than Mr K...
he is my very favorite male writer..
(Victoria fav female writer.)
Be sure to read Mr K's...Deserving Ruth...and My Brother's Wife...two of my favorites. ..and of course his
great holiday series.
Write on..Mike...
and if you have never read V Manley..
read Pleasure Giver..and an earlier one..The Imaginary Lover...superb.
Check the exotica archives.

WI usa
-- Saturday, April 08, 2006 at 02:03:12 (EDT)


Loved the story "In The Rain". A bittersweet ending to a short tale about a man with questionable motivations for what he is doing. He knows it too. But the pain would just be worse if he stops, or at least he assumes it would.

Will Belegon <>
San Diego, CA USA
-- Thursday, April 06, 2006 at 03:40:27 (EDT)


Loved "What she hides from the sun". Hit home..Thank you

patty <>

-- Wednesday, April 05, 2006 at 17:48:23 (EDT)

I loved the "Sex & ltp://"> Idol), and thats a great picture of him here!!!!

-- Wednesday, March 29, 2006 at 18:21:20 (EST)


The "Wedding Dress" was a really funny story that I enjoyed very much. More Don Rasner stories, please.


-- Wednesday, March 29, 2006 at 17:37:56 (EST)


Ann Regentin's article from Dec '05 gives an enlightened perspective on the female orgasm, encouraging readers to think beyond the dominant cultural paradigm of sexual pleasure being a tool for evolution. It is well worth reading and thinking about. Thank you Ann.

Anonymous <>
San Diego, CA USA
-- Wednesday, March 29, 2006 at 00:10:45 (EST)


I loved the wedding dress story, very well written & funny :)

a <>
detroit, mi usa
-- Tuesday, March 28, 2006 at 13:42:05 (EST)


That's a great thought-so many things at Clean Sheets "define erotica", and there's nothing else like it. I absolutely love the shorter pieces here, like "The Queen of Fucking Everything", and others.

-- Monday, March 20, 2006 at 15:11:49 (EST)


No band-aids, no bongos. This is a wonderful site. "How to Fuck a President So It Means Something" was funny, sweet, sad, charming and sexy. This kind of writing defines erotica.

-- Friday, March 17, 2006 at 20:17:31 (EST)


Stunning! Absolutely stunning!


-- Thursday, March 16, 2006 at 11:02:01 (EST)


Well written, If yiu were female I would shudder to think of your insight.
You need to put your intelligience to the investigation of the erotic human mythos such as, well, you can see the possibilities without my input.

william stoffs

-- Wednesday, March 15, 2006 at 16:30:01 (EST)


I really liked the cute "Story Problem" story!!

Jerry K
-- Sunday, March 12, 2006 at 20:34:06 (EST)


So happy to see Sera Gamble's story "The Clay Man" here. I first discovered it in this year's edition of Best American Erotica. "The Clay Man" is one of my most favorite short stories now. Really well written and absolutely intriquing. Thanks for giving it another forum. I love it!


Alana Noel Voth <>
Portland, OR USA
-- Thursday, March 09, 2006 at 19:51:54 (EST)


Love love love the "Queen of Fucking Everything"!

Chris VB

-- Wednesday, March 08, 2006 at 23:30:03 (EST)


"Bike Girl" is well-written, sensual, incredibly sexual, a great piece.

Susie <>
-- Tuesday, February 28, 2006 at 20:38:28 (EST)


I loved the "Women en Large" stuff!!

-- Tuesday, February 28, 2006 at 14:14:56 (EST)


Having read Themistokles Butterfly Effects long ago, it was refreshing to see it again here. The writing is inventive and insightful. He takes great care to invite the audience in, to experience the moment with him.

And we do.

-- Sunday, February 26, 2006 at 00:47:00 (EST)


Bike Girl by Paul Christian is one of the slickest, smartest pieces I have read in a very long time. Wonderful!

Gwen Masters <>

-- Saturday, February 25, 2006 at 21:00:08 (EST)


That's an pretty predictable ending to the Justine story, a disappointment. Love the Butterfly story though, want to follow that one forever !!

P. Bridge
-- Friday, February 24, 2006 at 20:55:05 (EST)


For the "Butterfly Effect" writer - bravo, great D/s writing.

JL Hasting
-- Thursday, February 23, 2006 at 00:12:22 (EST)


This has been my first visit to your website, and I found it quite politically interesting I have traveled to Cuba several times, and will be going again this month. I would like to ask Richard Ammon, what the name is of the gay friendly Casa Particular, which he has stayed at in Havana. I will not post anything on any website. Also if he has the phone number. Thank You

Robert Shupe <>
Vancouver, B.C. Canada
-- Saturday, February 18, 2006 at 21:35:54 (EST)


"A Story Problem" was a delightful fun surprise - made my day!

Charles BYN
-- Saturday, February 18, 2006 at 19:46:16 (EST)


Regarding, "A Saturday morning in October", by Gwen Masters: It was a perfect description of my experiences with my One. I sent it for Valentine's day. Beautiful.


-- Wednesday, February 15, 2006 at 06:44:19 (EST)

"I'm going to devastate her with pain and pleasure"

Butterfly Effects is a gorgeous piece that has touched me very deeply. I'm looking forward to seeing more essays from Themistokles here.


-- Thursday, February 09, 2006 at 19:21:35 (EST)


Butterfly Effects, by Themistokles...

One of the most vivid and passionate pieces of writing I’ve come across. Wow. “Later I will fuck the sky into her body.” Although I’ve never had an interest in bdsm activities, I couldn’t help but read this piece over and over. It was not only sadistic, but also romantic and spiritual, even--two qualities I’d have never expected to connect with bdsm. And after clicking on the link to his website and reading even more, well, I found myself thinking all day about what it might be like to be one of those wounded angels and “intimate with the birth of the stars.”



-- Thursday, February 09, 2006 at 03:15:24 (EST)


"Butterfly Effects" is really beautiful writing about BDSM!

Jack MA
-- Wednesday, February 08, 2006 at 17:09:14 (EST)


Follow the Clean Sheets links at the bottom of the page of pictures, of course.... and I love the "Butterfly" story, very hot!!

-- Tuesday, February 07, 2006 at 19:37:56 (EST)


Women en large and Familiar Men have some really beautiful photographs. Is there somewhere to see more of these?


-- Monday, February 06, 2006 at 23:18:48 (EST)


Craig - seldom am I without words, but I am totally speechless, this poetry is some of your best. Ellen

Ellen <>
Madeira Beach, FL USA
-- Wednesday, February 01, 2006 at 10:21:01 (EST)


"Five Girls" is like an harmonic progression. The style is sparse and evocative. The tone is sensual and self exploratory. The passion and the characterisation are soaked into every word.

Mike Kimera <>
Geneva, Switzerland
-- Monday, January 30, 2006 at 16:25:38 (EST)


"A Saturday Morning in October" is a nice sex scene.


-- Monday, January 30, 2006 at 12:42:09 (EST)


A Saturday Morning In October

Reading this makes me shiver inside - beautiful, erotic, sensual,... I could go on for a long time! ;) Thanks for sharing.


-- Monday, January 30, 2006 at 05:51:24 (EST)


Sr. Pantano,

Your words have inspired me to purchase a violin and violate it in ways known only to the sinful at heart. God bless...

Mike Hunt

Mike Hunt <>
Ilsan, Kyunggi Do KOREA
-- Monday, January 30, 2006 at 04:44:13 (EST)


Regarding "On a Saturday Morning in October" by Gwen Masters: WOW. Totally appreciate her intuition of his body language. That connection, that rarity of initmacy is amazing to experience even removed as we are in this medium of the internet We don't want to be distracted by our own pleasures while enjoying each other. WE feel worshippped and when we let go for each other and into each other, it truely is our favorite moment of intimacy. Words truely can dimish acts of the heart. It WAS a Saturday morning in October and we WERE right where we needed to be.

Mz Rimmer & her Lil Lover Girl

-- Friday, January 27, 2006 at 01:54:14 (EST)


"On A Saturday Morning In October" made me smile through tears. Thank you.

Thomas <>

-- Thursday, January 26, 2006 at 21:38:40 (EST)


What an amazingly beautiful portrayal of what deeply intimate touch can produce between two people. As an english teacher I commend your wonderful effort!

natalie <>
rochester, ny monroe
-- Thursday, January 26, 2006 at 17:52:51 (EST)


I really liked "Five Girls" and "A Saturday in October"!

-- Thursday, January 26, 2006 at 16:41:22 (EST)


Liked "Venetian Duet" and "Fugue".

Hopefully I'll have something good enough to try and submit


-- Wednesday, January 25, 2006 at 11:36:14 (EST)


Five Girls is an astonishing story, with a fresh, provocative style that draws the reader in -- and deep undercurrents of longing and loss.

Teresa <>

-- Wednesday, January 25, 2006 at 00:48:21 (EST)


Mike Kimera's Mating Call was an awesome story. I wanted more!

Kelli <>
Stillwater, OK USA
-- Tuesday, January 24, 2006 at 05:21:30 (EST)


What a beautiful story of love and sex and intimacy and knowing one's partner!

Joy <>

-- Wednesday, January 18, 2006 at 15:39:01 (EST)


I really enjoyed reading Tressie McMillan's The first dance. It was very well developed, talks about a woman's becoming aware of herself and taking care of her needs -- that leads to an exciting night out and a hot lover! -- for more than a one night stand!

Jennifer <>
Philadelphia, pa usa
Philadelphia, pa usa
-- Monday, January 16, 2006 at 23:21:00 (EST)

Mike Kimera's stories here are always a delight!

Janice C
-- Sunday, January 15, 2006 at 23:36:23 (EST)

Brave Antonio
Very well developed! This should come as no surprise to the millions of "straight" men who love sucking cock but are not quite ready to boy shop for furniture at IKEA. Those who do not admit to their true feelings are soon to be left behind <>
-- Friday, January 06, 2006 at 00:18:28 (EST)


i loved "tamarind"--what a wonderfully erotic piece, just enough to leave me wanting more!

st. paul, mn usa
-- Thursday, January 05, 2006 at 15:03:28 (EST)


Making Do by WS Cross was a very good story. Bravo!

Jenny Corvette <>

-- Thursday, January 05, 2006 at 03:33:09 (EST)


Re: Peter Klein’s post
-- Monday, January 02, 2006 at 12:38:51 (EST)

Peter SAYS :
in his opening statement: ‘I have to say I pretty much agree with Ann, and not the MOT3 post‘……..theand not the MOT3 post‘……..then

At 1) in his ‘advice to men who want or intend to be good lovers to women.’, that :‘The female orgasm IS elusive, unreliable, hard to figure out.

However Ann said: There's only one problem. Women's orgasms are not elusive……By comparison, it's the male orgasm that's elusive.

So Peter, it’s make your mind up time. You must know what happens to the man who tries to ride the up and down escalators at the same time.

At 2) ‘Expect to have more luck with your fingers than your dick.’

Not only does Peter appear to have given up hope of using his dick to be with and help women when they have the ultimate in sexual pleasure but also wants to rob others of having that experience only gained through perseverance. Surely he must know that upwards of 90% of women who masturbate do so to orgasm hence they would likely men of his persuasion, not least because they can do a better job of it than any man can. She would most definitely have much more luck with her fingers than any man’s.

‘Learn about this particular woman.’
Spot on Peter, on the button. Only trouble is the rest of the paragraph demonstrates confused thinking and is vitiated by this quote.
Every woman has her own needs where foreplay is concerned and she must say what that is; it needn’t be verbal. Men might try not removing their own underwear until the partner indicates positively that she’s good and ready. That way he can’t get carried away; all it requires is some patience. (It should be pointed out here that some women may wish to dispense with foreplay as they consider it unnecessary because they orgasm immediately on penetration, then go on to dozens.)
With MOT3 the woman is going to become multi-orgasmic and see to it that she keeps having that quality of experience.

At 3) ‘…..what do you do. Just go to sleep and let her do it by herself. Let her know that it's fine with you if she does. Maybe you just go in the other room and stay away until she calls you back.’

If this is Peter’s attitude, then the question might be, what does She do; the clear and unequivocal answer should be, dump him, move on. If all she wants or needs are fingers, hers are more clever. If you need to go in the other room, you should never be allowed to return. You are superfluous to her requirements.
The whole quote sounds as though he’s had his so she can have her turn next. Well Peter, women have news for you. They are absolutely pissed off with having their vaginas used as a pleasurable, convenient place for male masturbation.

At 2)[was this meant to be 4)?] : ‘Don't keep asking her: did you come. It's not your business. Maybe she can't come and she doesn't want you to make it your problem. Just be ready and willing to help if you are asked. But don't make it your responsibility. It's not necessary for you to have a big ego about being a great lover.’



brighton, uk
-- Thursday, January 05, 2006 at 02:42:58 (EST)


The "Penguins" exotica story is adorable, and so right on .... I'd love to read more like this, short and smart and sexy!

JK Jones
-- Wednesday, January 04, 2006 at 23:38:47 (EST)


Michael O'Mahony's writing is very lovely!!

-- Wednesday, January 04, 2006 at 17:29:29 (EST)


I have to say I pretty much agree with Ann, and not the MOT3 post. And so I write this advice to men who want or intend to be good lovers to women.

1) Go easy on yourself. The female orgasm IS elusive, unreliable, hard to figure out. It's not your fault, pal. So go easy on yourself.

2) Expect to have more luck with your fingers than your dick. Don't follow the conventional wisdom. Learn about this particular woman. For example, we're often told: pet a women with a long luxurious foreplay. Not always true. Sometimes a long foreplay will cause a women to misfire when it is time for petting to orgasm. Those women need a short foreplay and then advance quickly to petting for orgasm.

3) Sometimes women are just simply inhibited. And you say, she should get over that. That's bullshit. Maybe she won't get over it, but she's still your lover -- what do you do. Just go to sleep and let her do it by herself. Let her know that it's fine with you if she does. Maybe you just go in the other room and stay away until she calls you back.

2) Don't keep asking her: did you come. It's not your business. Maybe she can't come and she doesn't want you to make it your problem. Just be ready and willing to help if you are asked. But don't make it your responsibility. It's not necessary for you to have a big ego about being a great lover.

Peter Klein <>
Northfield, MA USA
-- Monday, January 02, 2006 at 12:38:51 (EST)


" Magmadootch" was a delight to read!

-- Monday, December 26, 2005 at 22:00:06 (EST)


sorry i've come so late to your blog SEX, FUCKING AND FEMALE ORGASM.
it is very refreshing to see the ease with which you approached the topic, and the distinction between sex and fucking is noteworthy. however, if i may i should like to make a couple of comments and leave a little information here.

1. 'women can orgasm until their fingers get tired or their batteries run dry.'

this is indeed true, and maybe you ought to have included 'or until they are too sore to go on comfortably'.
however, we have found, empirically, that women can orgasm dozens of times in heterosexual pairings, without once putting a finger on the clitoris, with the same erection, once they are multiple orgasm tutored, trained and tuned (MOT3).

2. 'most women cannot come during intercourse.'

there might be greater accuracy in the statement if it were to be modified by sustituting 'do not' for 'cannot'. it is our belief that it is possible to help at least a couple hundred million women become MOT3 within the next ten years. becoming multiple orgasmic is just a simple matter of desire, arousal and knowing what to do and how to do it.

3. 'It's not a question of masculine endurance or technique, just a physical quirk so rare that it could be said to be abnormal.'

if by 'physical quirk' is meant that the small percentage of women who orgasm during sexul intercourse with their partners is an anomaly,we disagree as we believe that if the resources were available the figure at 2 above could easily go up to five hundred million and eventually the anomaly would be the 6 percent who didn't, for whatever reasons.

4. ' Millions of men have agonized over their performance and millions of women have berated their lovers or themselves all because of something that no technique or duration of penetration can change.'

we have established that indeed technique and duration of penetration are essential to both single/couple/few orgasms and dozens of orgasms with the same erection. all the agony and blame alluded to are the result of frustration at not achieving a genuine desire for both to experience the full pleasure of having orgasms during intercourse, without assistance of any kind.

5.'The female body is just not made to come when fucked.'

wow! one cannot be more emphatic than that. on the contrary, the reverse is true. so the statement might be more accurate if we were to remove the words 'just not'. it is just plain unfortunate that the requisite carnal knowledge is still the preserve of a very fortunate relatively small number of people. the human female can orgasm as many times as her age and more, with the same erection, even in her sixties, once she is in reasonably good health, and of course, if both know what to do and how to do it.

in fact, women of different ages, social backgrounds, marital status, number of children can have:

8 orgasms in 12 minutes
20 orgasms in less than 18 minutes
30 orgasms in 30 minutes
6 dozens of orgasms in 2 and a half hours
8 dozens of orgasms within 6 hours,in two sessions
and so on. and note carefully , all this without a finger touching the clitoris,and without any soreness at the end.

6. 'Fingers, tongues, or vibrators applied to the clitoris are the best tools for inducing female orgasm, and this should be good news because dicks are notoriously temperamental'.

dicks are unquestionably as you say, and we would add that erections are the most perishable commodity known to man, and even more frustratingly, to woman. be that as it may, fingers, tongues and vibrators are still not the best tools for inducing female orgasm or multiple orgasms. powerful desire, arousal and carnal knowledge combined are supremely the hands down winners; upwards of 90% of women and their male partners can learn to do it. the only way the last number will not happen is if people are not interested or couldn't be bothered.

in conclusion, we would like to say that none of the numbers are speculation or wishful thinking, rather cold hard fact and reproducible. the next stage would be to set out to create a fully validated methodology of fuckology as it were, that can legitimately take its place within the scientific record of sexology. it could then be the norm for men to be fucking for female multiple orgasms(fffmo), any time and every time their partners wish it; orgasmic bingo would be a common place bed game. it's just a matter of time when a worldwide orgasm revolution would have kum about.

may we wish you a joyous festive season, and that you and all your female friends and readers kum at least 2006 times in 2006!!

togm <>
brighton, uk
-- Monday, December 26, 2005 at 14:46:34 (EST)



I love the sparse language of "Waiting". So much said in so few words...kudos!


John MacLean
-- Monday, December 19, 2005 at 15:50:31 (EST)


' Catching a Dreamer" - I love lesbian stories here. And of course I also thus love your yoni art-:)

-- Friday, December 16, 2005 at 15:23:25 (EST)


I think undoubtedly the third one down is the prettiest. Only kidding - they're all very beautiful. I find it a pity though that yonis are so often shaved nowadays. It seems even stranger that on some porno sites, photos of natural yonis are classified as fetish/bizarre. When I was a teenager and first came across a post-pubescent girl, I was a little scared by pubic hair but I got over it and came to love the mystery of the pussy partly hidden. I have often wondered if the prevalence of shaved female genitalia is a result of males not growing up enough to accept that females, like males, change as they grow older. If so, I would find it sad. I find it hard to explain. The yoni is beautiful though - even if it is shaved.

Jaie Helier <>
Darwin, NT Australia
-- Thursday, December 15, 2005 at 08:42:48 (EST)


Your "Celebrating Yoni" is like celebrating fragment and wholeness, movement and stillness, Shiva and Shakti, lotus and mud.

Call it spoof
or nirvana
if you like

hidden between thighs
is the spring music
beyond birth

It's a lovely exercise, stimulating mysticism, or gently harmonising Ying and Yang. The images appear to me like lotus rising from the depths of lake through mud crossing existence. GREAT. It's the BEST of 2005.

R K Singh

R.K.Singh <>
DHANBAD, Jharkhand, India
-- Thursday, December 15, 2005 at 00:46:43 (EST)


First time reader, but you are now added to my favorites. Keep up the good work! I do have one question, how does a new author of erotica become a part of your family?

Nia - Author
Gargoyle's Quest
The Worthy: Wildest Dreams

Nia <>
Pinckney, MI
-- Wednesday, December 14, 2005 at 21:40:00 (EST)


Love that yoni!! .....3 Pieces was nice too

Jennifer VV

-- Wednesday, December 14, 2005 at 16:26:14 (EST)


I liked your article. Yes, men have had problems coming too quickly and then feeling like they can't satisfy their partner. I suggest that you consider the Tantric philosophy, where male orgasm is separated from ejaculation. I aspire to this as the best method yet for everyone getting everything they need when making love. Besides, the spiritual connection is just awesome and that alone makes a woman come a lot easier.

Take care.

S4mesmile <>
Baltimore, MD USA
-- Sunday, December 11, 2005 at 17:29:16 (EST)


"Brava, Ann!" You confirm my worse suspicions about cocks just not doing it! A tremendous article, which hopefully will relieve many a girl all too persuaded that she needs a man for the old "in-out!" I just reviewed her piece in my own blog, and I'm recommnding "cleansheets" far and wide. Thanks, Ann!!!!

Justine <>
Vero Beach, FL USA
-- Saturday, December 10, 2005 at 12:57:37 (EST)


Absolutely on track... especially the last paragraph! I'm forwarding it to my 21-year old son, for his education...

Paul <>
Richardson, Tx USA
-- Friday, December 09, 2005 at 12:52:05 (EST)


Ann, thanks for the brilliant article about sex, fucking and the female orgasm. (

I blogged it ( and have sent the link out to all my friends.

What a breath of fresh air!

Regina Lynn

-- Friday, December 09, 2005 at 12:50:28 (EST)



-- Friday, December 09, 2005 at 11:04:23 (EST)


That's an excellent story (Red State Blues), very musiuse clit stimulation. additionally, I was involved with a lady who had multiples orgasm through vaginal penetration and with my fingers she also had very stronger vaginals muscles that clamped down during her orgasms. Very intense and definetly not faking. But your right i think rare. I know women have come vaginally with me but not like her. it is seems when its face to face the will come. especially if a play with them a lot. and i grind instead of pound them to death. P.S. and its fun to play with women

tp <>

-- Thursday, December 08, 2005 at 16:00:08 (EST)


" Penetration, provided it is face-to-face, does result in clitoral stimulation."

Right. In some romance novel, perhaps.

-- Thursday, December 08, 2005 at 12:27:44 (EST)


Very provocative discussion by Ann Regentin with one major omission. Penetration, provided it is face-to-face, does result in clitoral stimulation. Isn't life grand?

Lauree <>
Duluth, MN USA
-- Thursday, December 08, 2005 at 08:43:37 (EST)


I enjoyed " Three Pieces of My Past"!
c idea I've read here or anywhere else in quite a while, mostly because it has such a beautiful ring of truth.

Michael <>
London, England
-- Tuesday, December 06, 2005 at 19:48:08 (EST)


That Bono interview is downright inspiring , probably for everyone

U2 fan
-- Sunday, December 04, 2005 at 18:38:47 (EST)


Now I'll have that song in my head all day just from reading the lyrics - I love Rent!!

Stacy H
-- Thursday, December 01, 2005 at 13:01:37 (EST)


That's a weird ugly story (The Seer's Wife) - disappointing from Cleansheets.

Jack V.-gk
-- Thursday, December 01, 2005 at 11:05:53 (EST)


Compulsive writing. Solid imagery, great use of power phrase repetition and alliteration.

I could see the pictures!

I liked the almost guttural phrasure that conveys the primitiveness of the man's need for the most basic escape all men seek. The writing also inspired in me an empathy for the scared, riddled-with-doubt, sacrifice of the woman.

Most enjoyable. To quote that famous Oliver, "Please Sir, can I have some more?"

gingermegs <>
Frenchville, Qld Australia
-- Thursday, December 01, 2005 at 02:12:33 (EST)


Cheyenne Blue's "The Seer's Wife" is lovely, mystical, physical, visual, filled with magic. It fits into what could easily be a tired "cheat-wife" genre, but the approach is fresh. Exhilerating. Well done.


H. Jekyll <>
-- Wednesday, November 30, 2005 at 17:45:32 (EST)


"Catching a Dreamer" is quite lovely - I love stories about long-time couples. "Stuck Inside the Uh-Oh's " is a great story too

Christopher VN
La Jolla,
-- Wednesday, November 30, 2005 at 12:50:47 (EST)

The contacts we had for Kinky Joe's seem to no longer work, and we can't find any other contact for him.

Sam Capps, Editor

-- Monday, November 28, 2005 at 19:54:44 (EST)

can ANYONE tell me how to contact Joe Hurly A/K/A Kinky Joe's Furniture
we need some custom, easy furniture, just a simple chair, angled back with leg rests. no big contraption

amie <>
fort wayne, in us
-- Sunday, November 27, 2005 at 23:00:11 (EST)

This story was great. However...I don't fully understand it. Was he seeing Keiko and Carmen both at the same time? Was that last fling with Carmen solely because they were high? Was he supposed to be turning inin to the man he didn't want to be when he was helping Keiko cheat on her boyfriend? Will I ever know? GAH! heh thank you

Nik <>
Orlando, Fl USA
-- Sunday, November 27, 2005 at 12:00:48 (EST)

The hokey-pokey story was a great read.

-- Tuesday, November 22, 2005 at 15:50:15 (EST)


what a beautiful, beautiful story. i felt like i was getting off on the new york times. truly qualit

Pack Rat <>
Wilkes-Barre, PA USA
-- Saturday, November 19, 2005 at 13:16:47 (EST)


Your website BEAUTIFUL AGONY is awesome. I have been looking for something like this for a long time.

Cocoa Beach, Fl USA
-- Saturday, November 19, 2005 at 02:08:24 (EST)


I think that Gary Meyer (who "reviewed" a movie in the current issue) could benefit from looking up the difference between the words "summary" and "review".

Rob Retter <>
San Diego, CA USA
-- Friday, November 18, 2005 at 01:04:19 (EST)


the "Uh-Oh's" -- I love it!!

-- Thursday, November 17, 2005 at 13:04:29 (EST)


Susannah Indigo can WRITE. That Denver story is r old son said to me with a very somber face, "dad, did you hear that the guy that wrote the 'hokey pokey' song died? Apparently they had a tough time at the funeral home when they tried to put him in the coffin. They put his right hand in..."
The longer you think about it, the funnier it gets.

dhmoyer <>

-- Wednesday, November 16, 2005 at 08:42:51 (EST)


Great story-need to know the ending!!

-- Wednesday, November 16, 2005 at 08:21:00 (EST)


x Nina- Just loved your story of love and passion on the shore.. Two women teasing and pleasing each other is a fascination and an obsession for me.

john wylie <>
billerica, ma usa
-- Saturday, November 12, 2005 at 09:27:51 (EST)


-- Wednesday, November 16, 2005 at 08:21:00 (EST)


x Nina- Just loved your story of love and passion on the shore.. Two women teasing and pleasing each other is a fascination and an obsession for me.

john wylie <>
billerica, ma usa
-- Saturday, November 12, 2005 at 09:27:51 (EST)


The fascinating discussion between Shanna and Gary gave much more than the usual all-too-brief articles. More (in length and in frequency) like this, please.

Michael O'Mahony <>
London, England
-- Wednesday, November 09, 2005 at 21:05:44 (EST)


Tressie McMillan's "The First Dance" was sensational. An absoluetly brilliant story that captures the power of music, sexuality and physical and psychologuical abandonement. Luved it. I want her book. :)


-- Thursday, November 03, 2005 at 21:40:56 (EST)


Alana Noel Voth's rock star story is great.

-- Saturday, October 29, 2005 at 14:34:47 (EDT)


"Soft Spot" by Susan Weaver--one of the best things i've read in ages. Honestly, this story transcends! It is layered and beautiful and moving. And erotic! Thank you for sharing.

Humble Reader

-- Friday, October 28, 2005 at 02:16:14 (EDT)


My first comment was for "A Midnght..."
Then I took a look at Stuart Hall's writing and I take up the call: You rock!

-- Thursday, October 27, 2005 at 07:05:59 (EDT)


Beautiful. Moving.

Thank you.

-- Thursday, October 27, 2005 at 06:48:24 (EDT)


Panopticon was probably one of the best reads I've ever seen on this site! You rock, Stuart Hall!

-- Wednesday, October 26, 2005 at 23:21:10 (EDT)


"At Midnight in the Month of June" is bittersweet, sad, lonely, affirming of love. It explores the one thing we can't have, our love forever. A wonderful story.

H. Jekyll

H. Jekyll <>
-- Wednesday, October 26, 2005 at 14:56:41 (EDT)


Very tender & sweet! Nice work! Jim, age 66

Jim K.

-- Wednesday, October 26, 2005 at 11:35:02 (EDT)


Susan, you are a very hot woman: you lay out beautifully the movement from resistence to seduction to abandonment, and the heat specific to each. Your students, your husband and your lovers are lucky.

David Wright <>
San Francisco, CA USA
-- Tuesday, October 25, 2005 at 23:06:12 (EDT)


"Family Affair" -- excellent writing, a bit on the edge, but then ultimately redeemed, with heart.

Jack L.
-- Thursday, October 20, 2005 at 13:46:01 (EDT)








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