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"To the Edge" by Yeva West was great, very funny and sexy!!
Janice C
CA
-- Wednesday, May 07, 2008 at 10:04:38 (EDT)
Thank you, I enjoyed reading it. The scene was vivid, the characters shined like sharp stainless steel.
Nikita <nikita.writer@gmail.com>
usa
-- Thursday, May 01, 2008 at 15:59:22 (EDT)
" Sex and Minimalism" is a great short piece of writing.
KB
CA
-- Tuesday, April 29, 2008 at 22:02:33 (EDT)
"Engineers and Astronauts" is a great piece.
Greg Gowlon
Chicago, IL
-- Thursday, April 03, 2008 at 17:22:27 (EDT)
The "Naked Chicks on postit notes" are crazy sexy, I wish I had them posted all over my office here!
David
FL
-- Tuesday, March 25, 2008 at 12:15:04 (EDT)
Beautiful story, Jacqueline Applebee.
LM
CA
-- Friday, March 21, 2008 at 11:45:37 (EDT)
Just in case I haven't told you lately, I really love all of you at Cleansheets, its so smart and sexy and interesting to come here to read. I really like the way you cover gay and social issues, a bit different and more intriguing than other sources.
WILFRED JOHN <wilfred_john99@yahoo.com>
calicut , kerala india
-- Wednesday, March 19, 2008 at 23:56:37 (EDT)
loved Della's Sandelwood Candles. there is fire in that furnace and kindling in that sensual gray matter.
max <maxcherven@yahoo.com>
-- Wednesday, March 19, 2008 at 16:03:09 (EDT)
annika jones what a nice job you did w/"what you didnt do".great word pictures. more please. thanks.
annay <gemini2861@gmail.com>
balto, md usa
-- Tuesday, March 18, 2008 at 22:47:50 (EDT)
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What a gorgeous, elegant magazine to find in the on-line world -- the poetry! and the art! not to mention the smut! Thank you for being here
Kara S. Westburg <karss@yahoo.com>
Seattle,
-- Monday, March 17, 2008 at 15:16:29 (EDT)
Absolutely love the naked
chicks on the postit notes - first class original art here.
Howard S
NY
-- Wednesday, March 12, 2008 at 15:01:55 (EDT)
AT,
As usual, you don't disappoint when you tell a story - the whole story, that is.
When will you pull me off of the ledge and reunite me with Jack and Alex...
oh, the pining away is slowly ....k.i.l.l.i.n.g.m.e
Still love you though.......
chicago girl <stickbroker@sbcglobal.net>
chicago, il usa
-- Thursday, March 06, 2008 at 15:37:17 (EST)
Ladies and Gentlemen of CS, thanks for the story from Alison Tyler.
Alison, this is clever and sexy and super. Thank you.
Peace.
Alana <alananoel@comcast.net>
Portland, OR USA
-- Wednesday, March 05, 2008 at 21:30:55 (EST)
Great story Alison. Nice to see something of your "spiritual" side, for a change.
Karl Friedrich Gauss <gauss@safe-mail.net>
-- Wednesday, March 05, 2008 at 12:26:47 (EST)
Very refreshing, enlightening and perceptive essay on the
complex phallic symbology in life, art, and poetry.
R.K.Singh
R.K.SINGH <profrksingh@yahoo.com>
Dhanbad, India
-- Monday, March 03, 2008 at 02:18:10 (EST)
Late Night Snack was a wonderful read. Made me want to go make brownies and have some fun with the batter...
Steph
Eagle River, AK USA
-- Friday, February 29, 2008 at 02:28:19 (EST)
Almost Scientific is the kind of story I come to Cleansheets to read, smoking hot, smart, and real. And that picture is also smoking!!
Jace
CA
-- Wednesday, February 20, 2008 at 14:13:32 (EST)
This was a very moving and beautiful story.
Vanessa Jackson <divav21@yahoo.com>
Atlanta, GA USA
-- Saturday, February 16, 2008 at 23:48:54 (EST)
Kite is a lovely story.very nicely written.
annay <gemini2861@gmail.com>
ironton, oh usa
-- Saturday, February 16, 2008 at 15:27:27 (EST)
I loved Kite and
Morning Prayer they are both quite lovely!
hnb
-- Saturday, February 16, 2008 at 08:51:56 (EST)
Well written, Glimpsing Gretchen develops the first person's humor and ability to laugh at himself without losing the thread of mutual desire. Great description of Gretchen's sweet ass! You done Good!
Rockee
-- Saturday, February 09, 2008 at 14:20:31 (EST)
The story kite by Chrley Moon is absolutely beautiful, a miniature picture drawn delicately of magic and desire.
Karla D
-- Saturday, February 09, 2008 at 09:36:58 (EST)
The Strange Credibility of Polyamory
by Pepper Mint was an excellent read. Just a couple of weeks ago I had a conversation with an uncle of mine who is a born-again Christian and asked me if I was 'right with God'. I'd told him that I followed Jesus' commandment that we love one another. That I love, that it is who I am and what I do. I was surprised by his acceptance of my lifestyle--and it made me think. Pepper Mint has put into words much of what I was considering. Thank you.
Silkenvoice <silken.voice@yahoo.com>
Portland, OR USA
-- Sunday, February 03, 2008 at 00:16:26 (EST)
Michael Saves Democracy is a hoot! Excellent job.
JMB
CA
-- Friday, February 01, 2008 at 13:55:42 (EST)
I am really grateful for Clean Sheets which I have just found! I wonder if you would consider separate comment threads for the separate stories/posts? This is super confusing to try to find comments about the one story I just read (I came to this comments page by clicking "read comments" on the story page).
Anya
-- Thursday, January 31, 2008 at 04:21:46 (EST)
Nice stories - I love the "kite" one and the poem!!
Janna
-- Wednesday, January 30, 2008 at 11:21:20 (EST)
"Lacuna" is beautiful. The poetry in Cleansheets over time has educated me on what erotic poems really can be.
Leslie N VA
-- Tuesday, January 29, 2008 at 18:12:25 (EST)
Love Abbie, in fact love all the "exotica" I read, love the site here!!
Christine
Portland, OR
-- Saturday, January 19, 2008 at 17:43:34 (EST)
I think the reason that polyamory does so well in mainstream media these days is that it subverts the stereotype that monogamous people all cheat on their partners but pretend they don't. It's hard to argue that people should feel hurt if they don't, and it's hard to argue that people should lie about their actions. And stories about poly relationships going bad read like "Poly Person Acts Like Normal Person".
Daniel Barkalow
-- Thursday, January 17, 2008 at 23:41:49 (EST)
abbie and the stranger in the bar...
reminds me of something I wrote for a gentleman once...very steamy.
Sallie <anais43@yahoo.com>
St. Pete, USA
-- Thursday, January 17, 2008 at 13:43:09 (EST)
loved Abbie. very sensual and evocative. made me want to spread those legs.
max <maxcherven@yahoo.com>
Boston, Ma USA
-- Thursday, January 17, 2008 at 12:38:50 (EST)
dj Gunn with the drawing was a great short short story!!
Jenny Vogel
CA
-- Wednesday, January 09, 2008 at 17:58:32 (EST)
The poem If I Could Make Her, is a
sly and seductive. I adore the clean
feel of the words on my tongue.
jade <jadefemme@excite.com>
brooklyn, ny america
-- Saturday, January 05, 2008 at 15:32:11 (EST)
I loved seeing the Rumi here, and also liked the list of things, I'll have to try poledancing!!
Alyssa M.
CA
-- Thursday, January 03, 2008 at 15:08:28 (EST)
What happened to the horoscopes? I looked forward to them every month!
Emaline
-- Wednesday, January 02, 2008 at 20:39:50 (EST)
I thoroughly enjoyed Need to Forget by Anne Lowry. It is a very touching story of how 2 people cope with bereavement.
Rob
-- Tuesday, January 01, 2008 at 20:37:33 (EST)
Be Still just knocks me out, very inspiring.
Heidi V.
Santa Fe, US
-- Friday, December 28, 2007 at 20:45:02 (EST)
DJ Gunn's story rocks-I'd like to read more of them, by the number!
Jackson Fenn <jfenn5@hotmail.com>
Seattle, WA US
-- Saturday, December 22, 2007 at 10:42:40 (EST)
What a fine direction, what door opening humane writing.
Lee
-- Friday, December 21, 2007 at 16:57:11 (EST)
he Lonely Onanista is the most original story I have read in years, and certainly one of the best written.
Erik <ErikLindblaad@Yahoo.com>
South Bend, IN USA
-- Thursday, December 20, 2007 at 03:12:09 (EST)
Love love love the post-it note chick
art site from the clever story!!
Karen Av
Phoenix, AZ
-- Wednesday, December 19, 2007 at 19:24:14 (EST)
The Lonely Onanista is a great story! I'll never look at the Washington Square Arch in the same way again....
Donna George Storey <donna@donnageorgestorey.com>
-- Wednesday, December 19, 2007 at 15:02:36 (EST)
That's a smoking hot story with a nice suprise at the end with the drawing!
Kevin Johnson
OH
-- Wednesday, December 19, 2007 at 14:33:13 (EST)
Those are amazing answers to the advice
questions, Indigo is right
about the voice (especially the
ending about boring yourself to death!) Never heard of him before, but am going to buy the book!
Jordan VG
WA
-- Friday, December 14, 2007 at 12:55:07 (EST)
Great stuff here---I love the "society is a gun"
answer!!
Janna S
IL
-- Wednesday, December 12, 2007 at 11:53:11 (EST)
Just read the article about
"The Rabbit" and from her description..I think I may have to buy one..and lose my mind.
Sallie <anais43@yahoo.com>
St. Petersburg, FL USA
-- Monday, December 10, 2007 at 15:07:44 (EST)
Wow! Be Still is a work of art
Shy
-- Saturday, December 08, 2007 at 09:59:52 (EST)
"Skin Deep" is a terrific story. It captures two damaged people in a very tender way. Thank you for your efforts.
Reed
Boston, MA
-- Friday, December 07, 2007 at 16:43:38 (EST)
Your story was exquisite - the velocity, the intensity - everything about it. And kudos to you for going to
such a difficult, deep place with your erotic imagination.
Anne Lowry's fan club
-- Thursday, December 06, 2007 at 14:52:21 (EST)
Very beautiful poem 'Be Still', I like that kind of style of poetry!
Sandi V.
Boston,
-- Thursday, December 06, 2007 at 10:20:42 (EST)
"When I am Syr" by Brandy Bonilla both brutally honest and breathtakingly beautiful. --An intimate foray.
Bri <shade_of _the_fallen@yahoo.com>
Ozark, AL USA
-- Saturday, December 01, 2007 at 02:32:00 (EST)
I really enjoyed Jim Danner's story "One for the Road." He captures the sense of this couple very smoothly. The sexual connection between them is quite real.
This is the kind of erotica I like to read.
Nan A <nandrews37@hotmail.com>
-- Thursday, November 29, 2007 at 18:27:59 (EST)
Just in case I haven't told you lately, I really love all of you at Cleansheets, its so smart and sexy
and interesting to come here to read. I really like the way you cover gay and social issues,
a bit different and more intriguing than other sources.
JJ
CA
-- Thursday, November 29, 2007 at 11:22:06 (EST)
Kris-You always had a way with words. A gift indeed. The story captivates you and doesn't let go. It's not about the sex but two people trying to survive and reconnect with their bodies. Great work
Teresa <tandbpaz@sbcglobal.net>
Saint Louis, MO USA
-- Monday, November 26, 2007 at 11:26:08 (EST)
"Skin Deep" is awesome. Beautiful and winsomely sexy! Thank you for this amazing piece of prose.
Marguerite <crazy@outgun.com>
-- Monday, November 26, 2007 at 10:16:44 (EST)
"To My Girlfriend, Who Loves Detail" - good story, but everyone knows how the second act goes ..... 'and now I can't stop thinking about her'......or ' she won't stop calling me'...... and the next thing you know you're on Dr Phil!
JC Redbound
CA
-- Sunday, November 25, 2007 at 14:36:16 (EST)
Bliss in mutual imperfection: Love it, Kristina. Thank you.
Alana <alananoel@comcast.net>
OR USA
-- Sunday, November 25, 2007 at 14:18:44 (EST)
Love the pink dress story!
Jenna F.
WA
-- Monday, November 19, 2007 at 10:55:57 (EST)
Re "Idle Hands"- as a massage therapist, I cringed at the mere idea of this story. I've been a CS reader for over 7 years, and I am aware that erotica sexualizes a wide range of occupations, but massage therapists have been fighting so long to be recognized as medical professionals, and a story like this doesn't help. People who might feel uncomfortable getting their first massage are gonna get the wrong idea from this story. It just furthers the misconception that massage is sexual, not therapeutic.
Jen <thjadewolf@yahoo.com>
Boston, MA USA
-- Friday, November 16, 2007 at 17:13:52 (EST)
Pretty nice.
Neale Sourna
USA
-- Friday, November 16, 2007 at 02:17:07 (EST)
Two cinquains: Simply Superb.
R K
R.K.SINGH <profrksingh@yahoo.com>
Dhanbad, India
-- Thursday, November 15, 2007 at 23:39:01 (EST)
Loved Shadow Dancing! Great characters and tightly-wound, intense story. Bravo ;)
Gracie <gwiz10@optonline.net>
New York, NY U.S.A.
-- Wednesday, November 14, 2007 at 23:50:39 (EST)
That was a sweet story Sarah. Thank you
Nitaelf <dustin37us@yahoo.com>
Klamath Falls, OR USA
-- Sunday, October 28, 2007 at 22:25:26 (EDT)
Damn! Could you ask for more? Alana Noel Voth's "Shadow Dancing" lived up to its title and then some! Erotic? Yes, but with an edge - an undercurrent as human and dangerous as a perilous river. For beneath the implied beauty of her protagonist writhes a mind trapped in suffering. And the ending ... well, if you haven't read the story, read it. I wished it didn't end. When's the book coming out, Alana?
Sonny <bluebourbonstreet@yahoo.com>
New York, NY
-- Friday, October 26, 2007 at 11:58:26 (EDT)
Sarah Black's "A Blowjob for Jesus" was not at all what I expected. Happy to say that it was much, much more. Mixing what could have been blasphemous elements, (to others, I myself am not at all bothered my the concoction) It was a sexy story that got to the figurative truth about the beauty one can find in any love. If Jesus did come back I could with great certainty believe that he would be a pan sexual bringer of happiness and comfort. Thank you for combining the things I love most about writing, a good hot loving scene surrounded by deep meaning all wrapped up in a "not-at-all preachy" package. Yet another brilliant story in a month of excellent stories. You did the near impossible, you made me forget the mythos and enjoy the truth as it should be.
Roy Mitchel
-- Monday, October 22, 2007 at 00:15:56 (EDT)
Ann Regentin's Magnificat was phenomenal, personal, and as awe-inspiring as the pregnancy, indecision and fear she describes. I remember it well, though ours was hoped for, somewhat planned and welcome, it still brought forth all the emotions and fears excitement Ann so beautifully describes. Thank you Ann for one hell of a beautiful story!
Roy Mitchel
-- Sunday, October 21, 2007 at 23:52:10 (EDT)
Brilliant story. I enjoyed it thoroughly. Bakka
bakka
India
-- Sunday, October 21, 2007 at 01:58:33 (EDT)
Alex Batty's "Spokes Need Hubs" is possibly the closest an erotic story has ever come to being my ideal. Thank you.
Kate <katemcc918@gmail.com>
Dublin, Ireland
-- Wednesday, October 17, 2007 at 20:57:30 (EDT)
What an amazing poem!
Edwinna Bryant
-- Sunday, October 14, 2007 at 20:59:27 (EDT)
fantastic lyrical writing...enjoyed it.
Zoe <blittleone@gmail.com>
newport beach, ca
-- Friday, October 12, 2007 at 01:23:27 (EDT)
you write very well. nut you already know that
Hank Heath <hankheath@aol.com>
Nashville, tn usa
-- Tuesday, October 09, 2007 at 02:41:39 (EDT)
Very erotic. Didn't want it to end .
Martinique
FL USA
-- Friday, October 05, 2007 at 18:21:41 (EDT)
Loved Existential Wendall. Very funny
Coco
-- Friday, October 05, 2007 at 08:17:12 (EDT)
Red Leatherette...oh yes.
max <mfxprov@yahoo.com>
boston, ma usa
-- Wednesday, October 03, 2007 at 14:16:36 (EDT)
Hi, Sommer. Just read "My Will." Just about the most erotic thing I've ever read.
Amelia
-- Sunday, September 30, 2007 at 17:15:36 (EDT)
The author really should try the Lifestyle before he attepts to write about the subject. It is most obvious he has not.
John <johnpendunn@yahoo.com>
Albuquerque, NM USA
-- Thursday, September 27, 2007 at 22:52:48 (EDT)
Hi Jeremy Edwards. Just read, and enjoyed, "Involuntarily." Nice job.
Alana <alananoel@comcast.net>
OR USA
-- Tuesday, September 25, 2007 at 22:21:32 (EDT)
I loved Consonance by DJ Maze. Interesting *and* hot is a combination that's far more difficult to achieve than one would think, and this story does it so very well.
R
-- Friday, September 21, 2007 at 01:12:06 (EDT)
I loved Consonance by DJ Maze. It's rare to find something that titillates you both intellectually and sexually, but the lyricism in the language takes care of the former while the tenderness of emotion and sensory description take care of the latter. I'm glad I got to read it!
Joy
-- Thursday, September 20, 2007 at 14:09:43 (EDT)
I love the poetry, especially the one by J. Shontere. And I appreciated your article about http://www.condomman.com and the 7 foot tall walking condom!
Kevin <helixweb@hotmail.com>
Woodland Hills, CA USA
-- Wednesday, September 19, 2007 at 19:11:35 (EDT)
I love the poetry, especially the one by J. Shontere. And I appreciated your article about condoms and the 7 foot tall walking condom!
Kevin <helixweb@hotmail.com>
Woodland Hills, CA USA
-- Wednesday, September 19, 2007 at 19:11:06 (EDT)
Hi Sommer,
Wow, more stories like "My Will" please. Enjoyed the premise very much. Thank you.
Alana <alananoel@comcast.net>
OR USA
-- Monday, September 17, 2007 at 19:15:27 (EDT)
re: Deanna: Wow. Nice balance between yearning and fear, there. I love a piece that isn't quite comfortable. Thank you for this.
Luca
-- Monday, September 10, 2007 at 23:10:50 (EDT)
I do enjoy the majority of the stories on this website but the one for "Big Boy" seemed on the line of real abuse. Especially when she had to have sex with his friend(a complete stranger to her). It didn't really sound like she wanted it like in other stories in the moment. It was as if she did it just to make him (master) happy in a way of ignorance of not knowing there is a choice. I know I may be taking this too literal, but compared to other stories I felt compelled to respond.
T
-- Wednesday, September 05, 2007 at 20:40:02 (EDT)
Directly inverting the strip-tease motif against repressed victorian imagery in "Dressing Dana" was such an original way to build up sexual tension. Very arousing!
A
-- Monday, September 03, 2007 at 19:00:36 (EDT)
"Sex on the Other Side of Midnight": the rhythm sets the scene, the words part of the music. When I felt the rhythm, then read the words, the whole unfolded ... a dance of nature lovers. That's poetry, Magi. So beautiful, so moving.
Sonny <bluebourbonstreet@yahoo.com>
New York, NY USA
-- Monday, September 03, 2007 at 18:41:54 (EDT)
Grey Irish Mornings -- really enjoy the way this writer is reflecting on the ups and downs of love in the real world. An calling the author "an up and coming erotic writer" is great. He can put that on the jacket of his next book.
Lee
-- Saturday, September 01, 2007 at 17:58:12 (EDT)
I really enjoyed Objects of desire, you see I'm also an Anthropology student:) Did give me some wonderful ideas for research proposals and my current supervisor is very yummy...
Coco <cocolovesparis@hotmail.com>
Australia
-- Wednesday, August 29, 2007 at 04:00:50 (EDT)
I loved Objects of Meaning by S. Lee.
I felt it was funny as hell, poignanT and just well done. I wish I had the balls this girl has in this tale...
Toni <thisnes@aol.com>
who the hell cares, Blue state Democratic all the way
-- Thursday, August 23, 2007 at 01:04:23 (EDT)
You ain't British are you 'luv' so stop 'pretendin' dear
Sxiiv
-- Wednesday, August 22, 2007 at 17:52:36 (EDT)
Toni Barca's work is just sexy & intriguing ---thank you for sharing it with us all.
Sandy K. <skk@yahoo.com>
MI
-- Sunday, August 19, 2007 at 21:34:46 (EDT)
Terminally Curious was great! I gasped and then cracked up at the end. Good fun!
Wylie
CA USA
-- Monday, August 13, 2007 at 00:46:32 (EDT)
Sarah Parr's "Buda" was a remarkably simple story; so simple that you felt it. When a story simply makes you feel without any unnecessary words, that's marvelous. Well done!
Sonny <bluebourbonstreet@yahoo.com>
Ny, NY USA
-- Saturday, August 11, 2007 at 23:10:08 (EDT)
Lovely! Rich language, very arousing and engaging. Plus, it describes perfectly the disjointed and passionate sex between two people of different nationalities when both feel so alone. Their difference is what makes them yearn for each other, and you really nailed it. Nice job!
Lauren <groverino01@yahoo.com>
New York, NY USA
-- Saturday, August 11, 2007 at 17:43:17 (EDT)
"Lessons on Love" by Caroline Wolfe reads perfectly. It sounds didactic while intuitively accurate, as if Wolfe expressed universal truths here that many of us haven't slowed down to see. I laughed to myself when she encouraged women to not talk about problems when making love to a man. I had to slow myself down when reading the details of making love to a woman.
I look forward to applying the lesson soon. Thanks!
Rickey P <segamegas@yahoo.com>
-- Wednesday, August 08, 2007 at 10:39:05 (EDT)
Hi Jean Roberta,
Many thanks for your review of The Mammoth Book of Best New Gay Erotica. I've got it and am reading my way around the book. So far, my favs include Kirk Read's "Little Stevie," Shaun Levin's "A History of Noah," Alexander Chee's "The Crow's Confession," "Two Hearts" by David May, "The Bureaucrat" by Andrew Holleran (his book, Dancer from the Dance, is equally amazing) and TJL's "Last Time." Incredible collection. Three cheers.
Alana <alananoel@comcast.net>
OR USA
-- Tuesday, August 07, 2007 at 21:24:43 (EDT)
I love it, it turned me wet
futna <futnamed@yahoo.com>
cairo, egypt
-- Monday, August 06, 2007 at 07:11:14 (EDT)
Sunburn was hot. perfect for chasing boredom,the enemy in the middle of the night,away.now, my mind wanders. thanx for sharing elizabeth
gr melvin <dkpoe@msn.com>
n.ft.myers, fl
-- Monday, July 30, 2007 at 01:19:06 (EDT)
Nikki, that was mind-blowing (almost as good as the real thing!)WHEN are we going to get a book of your poetry published I wonder?
Gordon Marriott <gmarriott@fsmail.net>
Orkney, Scotland
-- Friday, July 27, 2007 at 20:09:43 (EDT)
Ms. Nx Magennis, the poem is lovely!
Alana <alananoel@comcast.net>
OR USA
-- Friday, July 27, 2007 at 10:11:38 (EDT)
Wow, great tip on the greatest lube ever, I bought it from
Babeland and love it!!! Also happen to be most in love with Clean Sheets too, it's first on my list of zines to read every week!!!
Sandy V.
NM
-- Monday, July 23, 2007 at 12:31:58 (EDT)
Simply superb
R K
R.K.Singh <profrksingh@yahoo.com>
Dhanbad, India
-- Friday, July 20, 2007 at 02:20:46 (EDT)
re: Attune To You..very good, I enjoyed the mystery.
Sallie <anais43@yahoo.com>
St. Petersburg, FL USA
-- Wednesday, July 18, 2007 at 15:22:13 (EDT)
I loved Sara Parr's Buda. It's a strong,evocative and sexy piece. I could feel the rain storm, and the orgasms. Well done!
Max
-- Wednesday, July 18, 2007 at 11:12:48 (EDT)
Question Mark made me conceptualize our commonality more than I ever had before. I am profoundly moved by knowing that not only am I not alone in my analyzing of this strange situation we are in - (everyone would say we're crazy)but that someone else knows where I am - where my spirit is. And that I can talk to you about it over coffee is nothing short but a miraclous gift from God.
tinkerbell
-- Monday, July 09, 2007 at 20:51:28 (EDT)
vin rouge
how in the world could I ever forget?
Ken <kuc49@aol.com>
Gainesville, FL USA
-- Wednesday, July 04, 2007 at 15:23:44 (EDT)
ahhh..where is my greenman
Sallie <anais43@yahoo.com>
St. Pete, FL USA
-- Sunday, July 01, 2007 at 05:13:23 (EDT)
Hi Ms. Marsden, you captured this obsessive-compulsive character quite well. Sexy but sad. Thank you.
Alana <alananoel@comcast.net>
POrtland, OR USA
-- Friday, June 29, 2007 at 21:46:27 (EDT)
Marvelous job, Ms. Wolfsong. The Greenman will never die. Bless you for keeping him alive in a dark time.
And yes, this is what it looks/feels like for many heterosexuals.
xxoo!
Valentine
----so beautifully written...
Valentine Bonnaire
-- Wednesday, June 27, 2007 at 10:28:46 (EDT)
Sorry, I should have been more specific; I was referencing Trianon by Timothy Mulcahy. Great work.
Ellen <ellenrosso@yahoo.com>
somewhere, mi USA
-- Tuesday, June 26, 2007 at 14:21:18 (EDT)
Incredibly powerful and disturbingly beautiful. This story will haunt me for days.
Ellen <ellenrosso@yahoo.com>
somewhere, MI USA
-- Tuesday, June 26, 2007 at 14:19:25 (EDT)
Holy blessed smokes, Kim Wright! Curved Slightly Like A Question Mark is gorgeous & profound. Did you ever pull off the 2nd person POV. Thank you.
By the way, I've also read your story in BAE 2007. "Dangerous Games With Competent People." One of the best in the book. Hope to read more of your stuff. Good luck with the novel.
Alana <alananoel@comcast.net>
Portland, OR USA
-- Sunday, June 24, 2007 at 21:33:49 (EDT)
Trianon by Timothy Mulcahy is without doubt the best and most beautiful erotic story I've ever read. Never before have I been both turned on and incredibly moved by erotica. Wow - the story is an amazing achivement, and I'm grateful for having read it. Thank you.
Lindsey
UK
-- Thursday, June 21, 2007 at 14:09:27 (EDT)
Your magazine is superb! Keep up the good work.
Nick Manley <nickmanley@lifeloveandliberty.com>
Kansas City, MO U.S.A.
-- Friday, June 15, 2007 at 01:09:41 (EDT)
The total attention on a lover and the molten hot freezing sensations travelling across nerves in the speed of light, from erogenous zones touched and licked, to the brain, becomes the ultimate headtrip in a finite moment of nirvana. Wow, you made me realize this.
Philnensia <valentin_pusilikov_orgasmaker@yahoo.com>
Manila, Philippines
-- Tuesday, June 12, 2007 at 06:29:30 (EDT)
"Maria's Window" by Teresa Lamai is a gem.
It resonates with dark, archetypical themes,
yet sparkles with vivid imagery.The story artfully bounds between locales
and times, keeping the reader interested
but never bewildered.
"Maria's Window" is further proof that, in the right hands,
erotica can be smart and sexy.
Reen Guierre <reenguierre@yahoo.com>
USA
-- Sunday, June 10, 2007 at 12:03:01 (EDT)
The Bubble.....totally haunting and wierd.....i like it
A.J. <citizenanna@yahoo.com>
Seattle,
-- Friday, June 08, 2007 at 01:36:53 (EDT)
Velvet Moore's Born of a Shadow is a delight, a wonderfully, dark and shadowy delight. you can feel the cool dark light.
max cherven <mfxprov@yahoo.com>
Boston, ma usa
-- Wednesday, June 06, 2007 at 09:04:14 (EDT)
That "magic Feeling" I have felt that, I know that..
Sallie <anais43@yahoo.com>
St. Petersburg, FL US
-- Tuesday, June 05, 2007 at 07:41:04 (EDT)
Wow, I really liked "Magic Feeling", Shell Shocked", and "The Bag", great stories!!
JP
UK
-- Friday, June 01, 2007 at 10:49:08 (EDT)
The Bag was a tender, sensual and beautiful story.
Vanessa Jackson <divav21@yahoo.com>
Atlanta, GA USA
-- Friday, May 25, 2007 at 20:46:20 (EDT)
Re: "Domai believes that the beauty of woman is valuable, and that not only is it okay to admire beauty, it is a sin not to" -- OK, but that's only half the picture; the beauty of man is valuable as well.
Starchild <sfdreamer@earthlink.net>
San Francisco, CA Francisco, CA 94114 United States
-- Monday, May 14, 2007 at 02:49:34 (EDT)
Just a comment on William Dean's essay on the topic of sex and death: what I remember most from a book on the various Jewish views of the afterlife, was written by an Hassidic rabbi who said that there's food and sex in heaven-I pray that he's right, and, by the way, I say, the hell with the food-unless it's strictly ORGANic!
Dara
-- Sunday, May 13, 2007 at 17:29:33 (EDT)
I read Bandora's Box(her affliction)by J. Walczesky.
It was very raw, sensual and empowered with a sort of defiance for freedom. I loved it.
This phrase totally hypnotised me:
Be sexy, just be sexy, flaunt your pussy and purr.
I loved it ! Keep writing!
cinthia <angel_black813@yahoo.ca>
montreal, Qc Canada
-- Thursday, May 10, 2007 at 16:22:42 (EDT)
Rebecca Vining... she is winning really !
Read "Babyji" by Abha Dabeswar... Indian context. Subtle but potent stuff.
arvind <forget@it.com>
Provo, CA Guess
-- Tuesday, May 08, 2007 at 13:10:36 (EDT)
Shanna, the poems are awesome.
Alana <alananoel@comcast.net>
Portland, OR USA
-- Wednesday, May 02, 2007 at 21:34:09 (EDT)
I loved "A Case of Female Hysteria." Great tone, images, pacing. I can't wait to read more from Alicia Wag
Terie B. <ccben104@aol.com>
Madison, WI USA
-- Wednesday, May 02, 2007 at 13:54:00 (EDT)
This is my first time at Clean Sheets. I love the story, "A Note" by Alexandria Day. Those first months of being a new mother and the body changes are a big adjustment. There's nothing more sensual than nursing breasts. Often the only solution to the tenderness is your husband/partner suckling them often. Sweet story. I hope to read more by this author.
Mocha
New York,
-- Tuesday, May 01, 2007 at 12:57:09 (EDT)
Love H.L. Berry's Nightgirl.
Alexandria Day <lance48@verizon.net>
Baldwin, ME USA
-- Monday, April 23, 2007 at 09:41:29 (EDT)
Alicia Wag's "A Case of Female Hysteria" ... depth, substance ... much
appreciated, much enjoyed. More, please.
sara
-- Tuesday, April 17, 2007 at 23:24:49 (EDT)
Amanda Fox ... you're a treasure! Keep writing!
Sonny C <bluebourbonstreet>
New York, NY USA
-- Tuesday, April 17, 2007 at 23:07:47 (EDT)
I may be a wee bit biased, but Will Belegon's poetry rawks!
Alessia Brio <alessia@eroticanthology.com>
Pittsburgh, PA USA
-- Saturday, April 14, 2007 at 18:52:01 (EDT)
I thought both poems by Will Belegon were great but Answer The Phone brought back a sexy moment/memory. Looking forward to reading more of your work.
Suzette <latinlady6929@yahoo.com>
USA
-- Friday, April 13, 2007 at 19:13:50 (EDT)
Will Belegon's poetry is just as good as his prose. I'm delighted to see him here on Clean Sheets!
Gwen Masters <gwenmasters@yahoo.com>
Centerville, TN USA
-- Friday, April 13, 2007 at 08:04:02 (EDT)
Whoa, Samson. Get me to a hairdresser, and oh yes, a woman as hot as this one. she is scalding.
max cherven <maxcherven@yahoo.com>
boston, ma usa
-- Wednesday, April 04, 2007 at 16:49:02 (EDT)
'Petard' by Erastes is very hot.
Rachel Green <leatherdykeuk@gmail.com>
Sheffield, UK
-- Monday, April 02, 2007 at 19:32:51 (EDT)
I adore the pictures of the BBW woman, and also the story about 'riding the edge of a knife'!
Janice C.
UK
-- Saturday, March 31, 2007 at 12:12:02 (EDT)
Love the naked girl with penguines picture - and I'm always trying to uncover my 'erotic nature' at cleansheets!!
Terry BK
Portland,
-- Friday, February 23, 2007 at 19:50:34 (EST)
Pole Dancer is beautifully written, with a nice twist at the end. I really enjoyed it, especially the observations in the final paragraph. Well done!
S.E.
-- Wednesday, February 07, 2007 at 20:05:45 (EST)
Michael by Gwen Masters is awesome, small town erotica at its best.....
~M~
TN
-- Wednesday, January 31, 2007 at 00:30:07 (EST)
f.a.night; you have touched on a favourite fantasy. Thank you!
ada
-- Monday, January 29, 2007 at 20:05:28 (EST)
I appreciate all these good movie reviews here in Cleansheets, since we're always looking for sexy moview to watch!!
Ken Youst
IL
-- Thursday, January 25, 2007 at 13:54:24 (EST)
"Ink Stone" -- absolutely elegant poetry here. I do love that Clean Sheets keeps up so well with erotic poetry, when so few places do!
Shane W.
CA
-- Monday, January 22, 2007 at 15:35:35 (EST)
I love the American Violet stories...Being in a BDSM relationship myself i found it his subltety interesting but his cruelty a little frightening.....
Good Story though
Property Of KINGBRH <ebony.satin@yahoo.com>
TWIN CITY, ga United States
-- Monday, January 22, 2007 at 14:29:21 (EST)
Trailblazers is my total fantasy. I would love to be part of a hot 3some like this. 2 huge cocks for me? Yes please!Great story!
monica <nowhere_girl22@yahoo.com>
Aurora, CO USA
-- Monday, January 15, 2007 at 21:38:00 (EST)
Jayden Blake, I'm so lovin that camping article, you're on to something, a real inspiration in so many ways. keep writing!
thank you
-- Saturday, January 13, 2007 at 01:17:16 (EST)
Dear Mr. Brendin;
I was so with you on this until we got here: "Still, it was only our second date. I figured if she's enough of a floozy to come to my apartment, who knows how many dicks have been inside her." Bummer.
Alana Noel <alananoel@comcast.net>
Portland, OR
-- Thursday, January 11, 2007 at 23:02:02 (EST)
Good With Tools is a very sensual story. The interesting characters and references to the senses brought it to life.
Alex Day
-- Thursday, January 11, 2007 at 09:58:26 (EST)
Dear Dorothy,
I particularly liked the third poem, a lyrical tanka. Brief and beautiful
R K Singh
R.K.Singh <profrksingh@yahoo.com>
Dhanbad, Jharkhand India
-- Wednesday, January 10, 2007 at 23:22:07 (EST)
Lord, those hippie girls are SEXY as can be!! Thank you for that link!
John VN
WA
-- Sunday, January 07, 2007 at 23:57:45 (EST)
Dear Kat,
I love narcissa. I've come back to read it over and over, perhaps a dozen times in the last two weeks. It's sexy, it's urgent, it paints pictures, and, best of all, it tells a story. The unpunctuated style works wonderfully to make your voice unique.
narcissa has so many fabulous lines I could quote the whole piece trying to tell you which ones they are. Here's a few of my favorite favorites:
"me with my white eyelet cotton dress pulled up" [oooh, so sexy]
"the years trip and flip and rip away"
"men old and young and in between look, cannot help but look want wonder" [me too]
"molten polenta and i am shimmering, alone at this bar in heat"
"more pluck than i have in my toolkit"
And of course, the smoldering line CleanSheets selected for a teaser:
"they lose their bearings no matter how hip no matter how worldly no matter how young and i am in heat and i want to score the supple flesh of a man's bare back with my short nails while he pummels me punishes me pushes himself into me into me into me"
If gently done, writers also like to know what readers think might make a simmering piece like narcissa even better. I know you went over every word a billion times, and to you it's perfect, but what about leaving out another word or three to make the above passage even more rushingly demanding:
they lose their bearings no matter how hip no matter how worldly no matter how young and i am in heat and want to score the supple flesh of a man's bare back with my short nails while he pummels punishes pushes himself into me into me into me
Offered with the greatest respect,
Matthew Dyne
Matthew Dyne <mattpro2@yahoo.com>
Lexington, MA USA
-- Thursday, January 04, 2007 at 14:36:49 (EST)
John Bredin's "The Blow Job that Changed America" made me feel more patriotic than the many hours I spent watching the Ford funerals and requiems.
Blick
New York, NY
-- Wednesday, January 03, 2007 at 23:29:45 (EST)
Narcissa by Kat Cox was great!
More please!
Allie
-- Wednesday, January 03, 2007 at 18:43:31 (EST)
Trailblazers, oh my, oh yes. oh, for a sleeping bag in that tent.
max
-- Wednesday, January 03, 2007 at 09:15:24 (EST)
loved "Posession" by Coco. How can we get more from her?
wasabi peas
-- Wednesday, December 27, 2006 at 00:42:16 (EST)
I really liked the blow job essay
KH
FL
-- Friday, December 22, 2006 at 23:50:54 (EST)
narcissa by kat cox is a wonderful story. all lower-case and no punctuation
lends a breathlessness and erotic urgency to her writing. ee cumming(!)
would have been impressed. please encourage further contributions from ms
cox, her style and passion is exciting and left me wanting more
"Possession" by Coco Rogue is a engaging, fluid, shifting, and hauntingly beautiful storytellling.
Sonny C <bluebourbonstreet@yahoo.com>
New York, NY USA
-- Tuesday, December 19, 2006 at 00:36:25 (EST)
Hey, I loved that blow job rave and rant, great writing!
Jack House
MA
-- Wednesday, December 13, 2006 at 11:59:23 (EST)
Milk by John Shanahan was one of the most intriguing pieces of erotic literature I have had the pleasure of taking in for a very long time. Some of it was the type of thing I pen, and some of it was totally of an ethereal plane. And I loved it all. I do hope to find more by this wordsmith, who spins a sultry tale weaving the words into my mind...like a pain/pleasure vibrato mantra that I just love and want more of.
FantasiaRealms <fantasiarealms@yahoo.com>
-- Monday, December 11, 2006 at 03:20:08 (EST)
Absolutely love "I Have the Power" with the erotic art after breast cancer - great work here.
Sandra Z.
CA
-- Monday, December 04, 2006 at 18:38:03 (EST)
hurray for Mindy and her boring, perfect ass. great story.
max <maxcherven@yahoo.com>
Boston, ma
-- Wednesday, November 29, 2006 at 10:56:26 (EST)
The Tradeoff by Tula is a wonderful comment on the compromise of marriage. I truly enjoyed it.
B.
B.F. Redd
Birmingham, AL
-- Monday, November 27, 2006 at 13:28:43 (EST)
Toni-Barca's linos - love them!
ItIsYu
-- Friday, November 24, 2006 at 12:14:11 (EST)
The linocut series by Toni Barca is wonderful- beautiful designs with a touching message.
Charles
Los Angeles, CA USA
-- Wednesday, November 22, 2006 at 14:32:14 (EST)
Jules Jones is an awesome writer!
Catt <cattabrie@centurytel.com>
usa
-- Wednesday, November 15, 2006 at 20:35:57 (EST)
"La Femme Rouge" is close to perfect storytelling.
Janna Z
CA
-- Monday, November 13, 2006 at 16:39:12 (EST)
Lovely zine here!
Sandy B.
CA
-- Monday, October 30, 2006 at 11:34:50 (EST)
I really loved "Ancient History" by Gwen Masters. Great use of water, with the rain and the balcony scene. Plus the feeling that she's doing something illicit? Yummy.
Callie McIntyre
Las Vegas, NV
-- Sunday, October 29, 2006 at 10:57:30 (EST)
I like all the stories and poems here, but this one realy hit home, cause I have my own secret.
Sallie <anais43@yahoo.com>
St. Pete, FL USA
-- Sunday, October 29, 2006 at 07:31:25 (EST)
"Drafts" by Michael O'Mahony. From the opening, the author grabbed me; as I read, I was caught up in the rhythm of the piece. I was whooshed along by the "breeze" -- directed, engrossed and finally fulfilled. I shared the unhurriedness of the lovers. And I thought "wouldn't it be wonderful to make love to a woman in such a languid way, to the rhythm of the wind?". Using a device as simple as the breeze flowing through a window, Michael spun a tale so deceptively intoxicating, I didn't exhale till the end.
Sonny C <bluebourbonstreet@yahoo.com>
New York, NY USA
-- Thursday, October 26, 2006 at 15:11:39 (EDT)
Absolutely loved "Rapture in Paris: Three Scenes of the Left Bank" , great stories!
Jenna T
IL
-- Tuesday, October 24, 2006 at 19:39:07 (EDT)
Trade-off is an amazing story, so hot and complex
ariel
-- Saturday, September 30, 2006 at 22:59:43 (EDT)
I love the drawing sun vulva. That is so cool-
rochelle <hikkerfan@yahoo.com>
USA
-- Wednesday, September 27, 2006 at 17:19:06 (EDT)
Back by the Weekend was amazing. Thanks Jacqueline! More, more!
Mick <koehlerma@earthlink.net>
USA
-- Tuesday, September 26, 2006 at 21:46:03 (EDT)
The Helmet
by Craig Sorensen
By the way Craig, that last comment from me, was for you buddy!
;)
Skyler
Skyler Grey <skylers_romance@yahoo.com>
Fl USA
-- Saturday, September 23, 2006 at 13:58:34 (EDT)
That was an AWESOME excerpt and I can't wait to read more. Great job!
Best of luck in all your future writing.
;)
Skyler
Skyler Grey <skylers_romance@yahoo.com>
Fl USA
-- Saturday, September 23, 2006 at 13:54:39 (EDT)
Thank you, Jenn, for your comments on my story, The Helmet. I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Craig J Sorensen
-- Friday, September 22, 2006 at 15:29:29 (EDT)
FEET IN THE SUPERMARKET
That story was really hot. As a foot man, I find that the super market is one of the nicest places to see sexy feet. I work for myself so am free during business hours and make it a point to go then looking for horney housewives w/sexy feet. I always carry a camera w/me and as I engage a sexy pair of feet in conversation, I subtly take pictures of her feet. If anone is interested in my pictures, write to me at Sandallover@webtv.net and I will send some.
So ladies, do you dare to bare your feet in the supsermarket.
Bob
Bob <Sandallover@webtv.net>
Haddonfield, NJ USA
-- Friday, September 22, 2006 at 08:34:51 (EDT)
Maggie.......Oh Baby-I am sure to have sweet dreams tonight...
Cara
Miami, FL USA
-- Friday, September 22, 2006 at 00:16:16 (EDT)
The Helmet
by Craig Sorensen
Was great! I loved the end where both got what was coming to them.
Jenn
-- Thursday, September 21, 2006 at 20:28:32 (EDT)
These poems blew me away their so good.
I would aspire to write this well myself.
ronnie greenspan <ronnie429green@bellsouth.net>
hallandale, fl usa
-- Thursday, September 21, 2006 at 14:45:41 (EDT)
Many strong and brave things here. I like "Perseid's Witness" enormously. The lyrical flow seems just right, a bit toned down, but payoff in last line is a stunner--makes the "nature" prelude work all the more. Great stuff.
michael cleary <mcleary@broward.edu>
Ft. Lauderdale, FL Broward
-- Thursday, September 21, 2006 at 12:32:04 (EDT)
I agree with your article Sexual Identity. My questions to you is do you feel that bi-sexual women respond the same way? I'm bi-sexual & find it's so much easier being a women. We are much more touchy feely that it doesn't even have to be an issue. Twice a friend asked if I would help her to experiement. I wasn't about to turn that down & yet I didn't pressure them .I really wanted them to enjoy it.They did but 1 women said it was nice but she didn't want to do it again. And of course would I keep it a secret. I have so many secrets in my head it's a wonder it doesn't explode. My other friend shows up at my door now & then for comfort & closeness her husband doesn't give her.So. one way or another I'm having the warmth & softness of a woman next to me.
Cathy <writer158@comcast.net>
Phila, Pa USA
-- Tuesday, September 05, 2006 at 10:12:13 (EDT)
"Into the Shadow and Through" was a beautifully written piece. A fantasy worth having.
Frank <wino30064@yahoo.com>
Marietta, GA United States
-- Monday, September 04, 2006 at 11:50:34 (EDT)
about Nolan Whyte's Late Night Decisions:
This could be the work of a good writer. As a reader I can surely enjoy and relate to it. Maybe I should peek in exotica more often, but this is surely a good one.
Honest Joe
Mtl, QC Canada
-- Friday, September 01, 2006 at 01:32:48 (EDT)
Lord and Master. Perfection, so rare.
sara
-- Monday, August 28, 2006 at 21:59:20 (EDT)
Beta-Reader
Is a quick ass...excuse me, a spanking ass of a story. Wow!
I want my daddy : )
TB <baacchor@aol.com>
hell no, ca what happened?
-- Sunday, August 27, 2006 at 01:04:43 (EDT)
Into the Shadow & Through was EXCELLENT!!
I was excited ALL the way through it! I couldn't help but imagine myself in the sub-hubbie's place...Getting Wife's Bull ready to screw Her...sucking Him hard so He could give Her what I couldn't!!! Submitting to Him...giving Him MORE power over me! Just to know my Wife was watching closely as I fell in LOVE with His big Cock! Moaning unabashedly...not caring that both knew how badly I wanted to have His Manhood in my mouth........
Then to watch Him bring Her to heights I could only dream of...Knowing how much better He was than me! TYTYTY..I LOVED It!!
Glen Walker <subpantyboy35127@yahoo.com>
Birmingham, AL USA
-- Wednesday, August 23, 2006 at 03:01:24 (EDT)
Antonio Galarza's article is right-on target. An excellent read and couldn't be more correct!
Spread the word.
Rob <discrtexec_suk@yahoo.com>
Houston, TX
-- Monday, August 21, 2006 at 12:04:36 (EDT)
WOW!!! This story smoked :) Very erotic and got me going :)
Bill <andersenbil@gmail.com>
Raleigh, NC United States
-- Monday, August 21, 2006 at 11:52:03 (EDT)
beautiful read for a quiet afternoon home alone, just what every woman would want.
sandra <appollo27@hotmail.com>
melbourne, vic australia
-- Sunday, August 13, 2006 at 01:07:36 (EDT)
"Honey Bunny" was a complete delight to read! Thank you so much!
Ami Doehring <Thatmilkmaid@gmail.com>
MI USA
-- Wednesday, August 09, 2006 at 19:27:19 (EDT)
.
On "Attempt to Rise" -- I haven't stopped by here in awhile and now I'm incredibly glad I did. Gorgeous, tough, and very affecting. Very nice work. Best to all at CS
Julia Peters
-- Monday, August 07, 2006 at 15:37:00 (EDT)
Casa Azul - absolutely beautiful!!!
Sarah
Canada
-- Monday, August 07, 2006 at 00:05:02 (EDT)
Good article from William Dean about sexual assault in the military. And please, let's not forget that women cannot obtain an abortion via their military medical care, thus increasing the trauma of many more victims.
A note for CS staff -- maybe you could consider implementing comment verification that requires you to enter a code in a box. It does seems to cut down the spam.
CB
Denver,
-- Friday, August 04, 2006 at 11:19:26 (EDT)
i love this site.
Ronny <privet@hotmail.com>
Arabia, Sweden CA
-- Wednesday, August 02, 2006 at 23:28:56 (EDT)
You in My Garden was fucking amazing. It made me love love.
Nemo
-- Monday, July 31, 2006 at 17:24:25 (EDT)
Wow... I just read Ms. McMillan's "The First Dance". What a well-deserved blue ribbon! Love the rhythm of the telling.
Luca <ognisperanza@gmail.com>
-- Monday, July 31, 2006 at 16:53:47 (EDT)
Really enjoyed Casa Azul by Valentine Bonnaire - well written, imaginative and erotic with credible characters not cardboard sexual athletes! Congratulations.
John L
UK
-- Wednesday, July 19, 2006 at 15:03:23 (EDT)
I really like the poem 'naked girl with a samurai sword' was surprised to come across it
Cerlayne <cerlayne@yahoo.com>
Portland, ME USA
-- Friday, July 14, 2006 at 22:40:54 (EDT)
All the three poems--simply superb. Keep it up.
R K
R.K.Singh <profrksingh@yahoo.com>
Dhanbad, Jharkhand India
-- Friday, July 14, 2006 at 00:10:55 (EDT)
If I Were. . . was downright clever!
James
-- Thursday, July 13, 2006 at 12:06:11 (EDT)
Liked the first two of the three "Erotic Paintings"
Erotic Dralion
-- Tuesday, July 04, 2006 at 11:58:25 (EDT)
For me BD/SM has always been in my life I can go back to vanilla but never for long. My parnter has always been on the same lines. In the past couple years he doesn;t want to let alone much of anything else. I haven't strayed and keep on trying. It's him that I want. But I seem to be losing myself and nothing I do works and any form. I have tried mostly anything I can dream up to interest him which is alot. I feel if this continues I will lose my desire completely or I will search someone else out. I have told him this. He'll try and then quit again. I can't imagine the rest of my life without sex. I'm now in my 50's. This is very sressful.
Chloe <writer158@comcast.net>
Phila, Pa USA
-- Monday, July 03, 2006 at 12:35:05 (EDT)
Lovely story!Wish more women were like that.
David <forde55@yahoo.com>
Jersey CI~UK
-- Saturday, July 01, 2006 at 10:28:26 (EDT)
Comment on Poems by RC Edrington
Dark, dark, dark, but painfully true and beautiful. Loved the two pieces.
Elazarus
Elazarus Wills <Hotchkiss@aol.com>
Hotchkiss, CO USA
-- Wednesday, June 28, 2006 at 13:08:21 (EDT)
What a great love story! Thanks!
jennie <jenniejoy2@yahoo.com>
Phila, Pa USA
-- Tuesday, June 27, 2006 at 20:11:04 (EDT)
Wow! I really enjoyed reading this!!
:o)
Write more.......Thanks
Joe <FISH45373>
TROY, OH USA
-- Tuesday, June 27, 2006 at 14:29:04 (EDT)
Thank you, Chris Bridges, for the anti-porn article. I agree completely! It's especially reassuring to know a man feels the same way.
Samantha
USA
-- Saturday, June 24, 2006 at 14:11:02 (EDT)
An excellent review of an excellent movie. Joy St. James' review of "Breakfast on Pluto" nailed it. As well as portraying transexuals in an honest light without the cliche, so too does it portray Ireland. Lot of parallels there. See this movie, please do. Kudos to Joy for the review.
Maggie K
Ireland
-- Thursday, June 22, 2006 at 09:21:47 (EDT)
I am an American
woman, who has long had the innate desire to be submissive. I
just recently found out what this is truly about. I am like a
sponge and cannot get enough. Reading
Kayla Kuff's article about the submissive woman, hit home
with me. I feel as she does in several points. This is my life,
and I will live it happy! Polly Samples
Polly Samples <teacherhope2003@yahoo.com>
Avinger , TX USA
-- Sunday, June 18, 2006 at 15:26:01 (EDT)
Enjoyed
Chris's anti-porn article. We really enjoyed Xana & Dax:
When Opposites Attract (2005), I also have a Sex in Film wed
site that lists good erotic films
http://sexinfilm.blogspot.com/
Paul <mainefarm@earthlink.net>
Greenville, NC USA
-- Saturday, June 17, 2006 at 15:44:46 (EDT)
New Bamboo - great story Ms. Colson. On an elephant -
original to say the least. Thank you.
Hugh
-- Monday, June 12, 2006 at 17:51:50 (EDT)
Bike Girl is an incredibly erotic tale. Every time I read it
I come. Every.Time.
Celeste
-- Thursday, June 08, 2006 at 02:00:46 (EDT)
New Bamboo -- an incredibly sexy story. Loved it.
Sara
-- Wednesday, June 07, 2006 at 12:00:13 (EDT)
Thanks for the story "she
likes it when i watch". Excellent. I've long wanted to do
that for my partner. She loves how I shave....so maybe I will
have to show this to her for a good night!!
Kiddo
Ames, IA USA
-- Saturday, June 03, 2006 at 17:09:43 (EDT)
Just as some pornography is just pictures of nude people,
some stories are just words. Thanks for realizing that the best
sex occurs in the mind and for sharing your sexy mind with me.
Keep putting pen to paper and fingers to ???
desarian <desarian@yahoo.com>
b.h., mi usa
-- Thursday, June 01, 2006 at 23:05:16 (EDT)
First visit to this site and I feel at home already thanks
to Chris's anti-porn article. I wholeheartedly agree. I'm a
female who's always enjoyed porn. In the 70's the main thing was
to turn down the horrible music - you know - porn music. I was
glad to read what Chris had to say regarding his needs. I agree
100%, but didn't know if I was too picky or too bitchy or too
catty or too something.
What I want is fairly simple:
1. a semi-believable plot for at least the first half of the
movie.
2. realistic positions, changed frequently
3. no more cutting and splicing the explicit scenes just to
stretch out the movie
4. women in the movies? please. kick off those damned high
heels. Yes you have pretty legs and dainty feet and we've all
seen them - now be real.
5. lingerie ladies! naked gets boring very quickly
6. HUMOR! I saw an X-rated western once that was great. I'd
rather watch porn that has some quality humor in it than the
best of what passes for porn today.
7. can't be stressed enough - get real, especially females. Tone
down the makeup, let your hair actually move and get messy, walk
and move like real people, not wannabe models, and stop acting
like semen is a precious Gift From The Gods.
sonsie
(pssst...Chris...um..some
women DO moan with pleasure while giving oral, if it's one of
those times when I'm really hot)
sonsie
-- Thursday, May 25, 2006 at 02:58:09 (EDT)
I'm wholeheartedly with
Chris Bridges in his anti-porn position. it is a sad state
of affairs when the virginal caresses of "Shakespeare in Love"
are more arousing than anything you find in the over-21 section
of the video store. If I wanted anatomy lessons I'd go see my
gyn. (Here's a thought--what if they had a plot?) The best thing
I've seen in years is "Secretary," and there was nearly no skin
showing...
Tina M
-- Wednesday, May 24, 2006 at 18:37:53 (EDT)
Your Shortsheets editor is right on---that 'You are So
Beautiful' was downright orgasmic for me!! (Taylor HIcks on AI)
JK V
IL
-- Tuesday, May 16, 2006 at 22:41:15 (EDT)
thanks for the "heads up" on attention to
the clitoris; I think I will give it
priority when I finally get the next lady
in the sack. At least I'll give my jonny
less attention.
jon <jesteele1948@yahoo.com>
san jose, ca usa
-- Monday, May 15, 2006 at 05:22:13 (EDT)
I absolutely loved "To
Dance Beneath the Diamond Sky", it is just beautiful, and so
right!
JM
MA
-- Monday, May 08, 2006 at 21:06:01 (EDT)
This is too weird. My estranged man goes by the name Flint,
and I truly am a MOlly. Then I read on, and this is the way it
truly is. Minus the hospital. But everything else. I was like
who has been a voyeur in my house?God, it brought back memoreis
of the good times. Thank you. I almost forgot I had a sex drive.
Molly A <mynerva12_23_93@yahoo.com>
Frederick, Md USA
-- Sunday, April 30, 2006 at 01:38:09 (EDT)
G-spot Spelunking,
I really enjoyed this article and the way the author made the
content fun and playful. I would love to read more of her stuff
Morgan <morgan0213@adephia.net>
Scott Depot, WV USA
-- Thursday, April 27, 2006 at 10:09:24 (EDT)
"In the Rain" feels real and haunting.
JJ Long
USA
-- Tuesday, April 25, 2006 at 23:33:14 (EDT)
i really enjoyed reading the short story "the
first dance" by tressie mcmillian. wonderfully descriptive.
i wish that could of been me...
margo
-- Tuesday, April 25, 2006 at 19:10:10 (EDT)
I loved that article about
Etta James. I was so there when you described Etta mouthing
and then you prone on the floor.
I fell in love with the blues on day listening to Ruth Brown
singing her chair song on NPR on a long scenic drive home with
the kids fast asleep in the back seat.
Thanks too for letting us know when the rerun of that show is
on. I am definitely tuning in.
faeryfish
Belvidere, IL USA
-- Sunday, April 23, 2006 at 02:59:23 (EDT)
You should see
her live... sigh... and damn...
tish
-- Saturday, April 22, 2006 at 20:33:50 (EDT)
I enjoyed your remarks about
Etta james. I have been one of her greatest fans since I was
growing up during the fifties in the Bedford Stuyvesant section
of Brooklyn. When all the radios in the apartments facing the
street would all be turned to the local blues and R&B radio
station. And Etta's voice would be seducing all of my teenage
friends. She is the epitome of blues and R&B of the fifties and
the queen of today's blues. I look forward to the Austin City
rerun later this month. Thanks for the heads up keep up the
commentaries.
Eric <ericericsson@optonline.net>
CT USA
-- Friday, April 21, 2006 at 00:22:25 (EDT)
10,000 orgasms! What we all want, not just the 10K, but the
guy who cares enough to count!
Janna S.
AZ
-- Thursday, April 20, 2006 at 23:33:30 (EDT)
I am loving the female energy in the recent
Exotica - Song of Solomon, Paper Buddha, Diamond Sky,
etc..... great stuff!
KKL
CA
-- Thursday, April 20, 2006 at 11:03:03 (EDT)
Lawrence Schimel - another reason to regret that I didn't
come out at Yale. At least I got my fill in Madrid of Strong and
Chez Pomme and a Javi. :)
reminiscer
-- Wednesday, April 19, 2006 at 18:57:18 (EDT)
yes, I know this story
I LIVE this story
with a lover who I can only be with every 4 to 6 months (or so)
we take what pleasure we can in those stolen hours together
the author's words cut to the bone
to the core
thank you
zoesophia <lacuna7@aol.com>
Richmond, VA US
-- Wednesday, April 19, 2006 at 18:25:23 (EDT)
Toni Barca is a master of words and pictures. When they say
a picture is worth a thousand words they should also say toni's
words are worth a thousand pictures. Bang on Toni
Chef Stu
Sherman Oaks, CA USA
-- Friday, April 14, 2006 at 12:45:13 (EDT)
I had a visual feast as I read
Paper Buddha and Some Ice Cubes- You should do more art and
poetry, it works so very well-
Very sensual art work by Barca-
Nikki <punician@aol.com>
USA
-- Thursday, April 13, 2006 at 16:58:33 (EDT)
Love the
Toni Barca, and love when Cleansheets does poetry and art
together!!
JCB
-- Wednesday, April 12, 2006 at 17:11:19 (EDT)
A Saturday Morning in October...my love said that it
described almost perfectly the way she feels when she is with
me. Thank you for putting our love into words.
SG
SimpleGifts
MD
-- Monday, April 10, 2006 at 01:54:22 (EDT)
Love your writing...
Rae <rmh1230@sbcglobal.net>
Tallmadge, Oh US
-- Sunday, April 09, 2006 at 11:44:02 (EDT)
I certainly agree..completely..with
Mr. Garcia's comments about Mike Kimera.
No one does it better than Mr K...
he is my very favorite male writer..
(Victoria Manley..my fav female writer.)
Be sure to read Mr K's...Deserving Ruth...and My Brother's
Wife...two of my favorites. ..and of course his
great holiday series.
Write on..Mike...
and if you have never read V Manley..
read Pleasure Giver..and an earlier one..The Imaginary
Lover...superb.
Check the exotica archives.
mambolady
WI usa
-- Saturday, April 08, 2006 at 02:03:12 (EDT)
Loved the story "In The Rain". A bittersweet ending to a
short tale about a man with questionable motivations for what he
is doing. He knows it too. But the pain would just be worse if
he stops, or at least he assumes it would.
Will Belegon <willbelegon@yahoo.com>
San Diego, CA USA
-- Thursday, April 06, 2006 at 03:40:27 (EDT)
Loved
"What she hides from the sun". Hit home..Thank you
patty <luvzzs4play@yahoo.com>
-- Wednesday, April 05, 2006 at 17:48:23 (EDT)
I loved the
"Sex
& ltp://www.cleansheets.com/exotica/santiago_03.29.06.shtml">
Idol), and thats a great picture of him here!!!!
Barb
CA
-- Wednesday, March 29, 2006 at 18:21:20 (EST)
The
"Wedding Dress" was a really funny story that I enjoyed very
much. More Don Rasner stories, please.
Kim
-- Wednesday, March 29, 2006 at 17:37:56 (EST)
Ann Regentin's article from Dec '05 gives an enlightened
perspective on the female orgasm, encouraging readers to think
beyond the dominant cultural paradigm of sexual pleasure being a
tool for evolution. It is well worth reading and thinking about.
Thank you Ann.
Anonymous <at.giza@yahoo.com>
San Diego, CA USA
-- Wednesday, March 29, 2006 at 00:10:45 (EST)
I loved the
wedding dress story, very well written & funny :)
a <thatmilkmaid@gmail.com>
detroit, mi usa
-- Tuesday, March 28, 2006 at 13:42:05 (EST)
That's a great thought-so many things at Clean Sheets
"define erotica", and there's nothing else like it. I absolutely
love the shorter pieces here, like
"The Queen of Fucking Everything", and others.
KJN
CA
-- Monday, March 20, 2006 at 15:11:49 (EST)
No band-aids, no bongos. This is a wonderful site.
"How to Fuck a President So It Means Something" was funny,
sweet, sad, charming and sexy. This kind of writing defines
erotica.
Margaret
WI USA
-- Friday, March 17, 2006 at 20:17:31 (EST)
Stunning! Absolutely stunning!
Normique
-- Thursday, March 16, 2006 at 11:02:01 (EST)
Well written, If yiu were female I would shudder to think of
your insight.
You need to put your intelligience to the investigation of the
erotic human mythos such as, well, you can see the possibilities
without my input.
william stoffs
-- Wednesday, March 15, 2006 at 16:30:01 (EST)
I really liked the cute
"Story Problem" story!!
Jerry K
CA
-- Sunday, March 12, 2006 at 20:34:06 (EST)
So happy to see Sera Gamble's story
"The Clay Man" here. I first discovered it in this year's
edition of Best American Erotica. "The Clay Man" is one of my
most favorite short stories now. Really well written and
absolutely intriquing. Thanks for giving it another forum. I
love it!
Alana
Alana Noel Voth <alananoel@comcast.net>
Portland, OR USA
-- Thursday, March 09, 2006 at 19:51:54 (EST)
Love love love the
"Queen of Fucking Everything"!
Chris VB
-- Wednesday, March 08, 2006 at 23:30:03 (EST)
"Bike Girl" is well-written, sensual, incredibly sexual, a
great piece.
Susie <shecougarwrites@yahoo.com>
WV USA
-- Tuesday, February 28, 2006 at 20:38:28 (EST)
I loved the "Women en Large" stuff!!
JH
Birmingham,
-- Tuesday, February 28, 2006 at 14:14:56 (EST)
Having read Themistokles
Butterfly Effects long ago, it was refreshing to see it
again here. The writing is inventive and insightful. He takes
great care to invite the audience in, to experience the moment
with him.
And we do.
dawn
AZ
-- Sunday, February 26, 2006 at 00:47:00 (EST)
Bike Girl by Paul Christian is one of the slickest, smartest
pieces I have read in a very long time. Wonderful!
Gwen Masters <gwenmasters@hotmail.com>
-- Saturday, February 25, 2006 at 21:00:08 (EST)
That's an pretty predictable ending to the Justine story, a
disappointment. Love the
Butterfly story though, want to follow that one forever !!
P. Bridge
MA
-- Friday, February 24, 2006 at 20:55:05 (EST)
For the
"Butterfly Effect" writer - bravo, great D/s writing.
JL Hasting
CA
-- Thursday, February 23, 2006 at 00:12:22 (EST)
This has been my first visit to your website, and I found it
quite politically interesting I have traveled to Cuba several
times, and will be going again this month. I would like to ask
Richard Ammon, what the name is of the gay friendly Casa
Particular, which he has stayed at in Havana. I will not post
anything on any website. Also if he has the phone number. Thank
You
Robert Shupe <r.shupe@shaw.ca>
Vancouver, B.C. Canada
-- Saturday, February 18, 2006 at 21:35:54 (EST)
"A Story Problem" was a delightful fun surprise - made my
day!
Charles BYN
CA
-- Saturday, February 18, 2006 at 19:46:16 (EST)
Regarding,
"A Saturday morning in October", by Gwen Masters: It was a
perfect description of my experiences with my One. I sent it for
Valentine's day. Beautiful.
BecJ
BecJ
-- Wednesday, February 15, 2006 at 06:44:19 (EST)
"I'm going to
devastate her with pain and pleasure"
Butterfly Effects is a gorgeous piece that has touched me
very deeply. I'm looking forward to seeing more essays from
Themistokles here.
Elizabeth
-- Thursday, February 09, 2006 at 19:21:35 (EST)
Butterfly Effects, by Themistokles...
One of the most vivid and passionate pieces of writing I’ve come
across. Wow. “Later I will fuck the sky into her body.” Although
I’ve never had an interest in bdsm activities, I couldn’t help
but read this piece over and over. It was not only sadistic, but
also romantic and spiritual, even--two qualities I’d have never
expected to connect with bdsm. And after clicking on the link to
his website and reading even more, well, I found myself thinking
all day about what it might be like to be one of those wounded
angels and “intimate with the birth of the stars.”
*swoon*
CBT
-- Thursday, February 09, 2006 at 03:15:24 (EST)
"Butterfly Effects" is really beautiful writing about BDSM!
Jack MA
MA
-- Wednesday, February 08, 2006 at 17:09:14 (EST)
Follow the Clean Sheets links at the bottom of the page of
pictures, of course.... and I love the
"Butterfly" story, very hot!!
jpc
ca
-- Tuesday, February 07, 2006 at 19:37:56 (EST)
Women en large and Familiar Men have some really beautiful
photographs. Is there somewhere to see more of these?
morena
-- Monday, February 06, 2006 at 23:18:48 (EST)
Craig - seldom am I without words, but I am totally
speechless, this poetry is some of your best. Ellen
Ellen <fairellen@earthlink.net>
Madeira Beach, FL USA
-- Wednesday, February 01, 2006 at 10:21:01 (EST)
"Five Girls" is like an harmonic progression. The style is
sparse and evocative. The tone is sensual and self exploratory.
The passion and the characterisation are soaked into every word.
Mike Kimera <mikekimera@yahoo.co.uk>
Geneva, Switzerland
-- Monday, January 30, 2006 at 16:25:38 (EST)
"A Saturday Morning in October" is a nice sex scene.
Unknown
-- Monday, January 30, 2006 at 12:42:09 (EST)
A Saturday Morning In October
Reading this makes me shiver inside - beautiful, erotic,
sensual,... I could go on for a long time! ;) Thanks for
sharing.
Moon
LakotaMoon
-- Monday, January 30, 2006 at 05:51:24 (EST)
Sr. Pantano,
Your
words have inspired me to purchase a violin and violate it
in ways known only to the sinful at heart. God bless...
Lust,
Mike Hunt
Mike Hunt <sfmarr01@smumn.edu>
Ilsan, Kyunggi Do KOREA
-- Monday, January 30, 2006 at 04:44:13 (EST)
Regarding
"On a Saturday Morning in October" by Gwen Masters: WOW.
Totally appreciate her intuition of his body language. That
connection, that rarity of initmacy is amazing to experience
even removed as we are in this medium of the internet We don't
want to be distracted by our own pleasures while enjoying each
other. WE feel worshippped and when we let go for each other and
into each other, it truely is our favorite moment of intimacy.
Words truely can dimish acts of the heart. It WAS a Saturday
morning in October and we WERE right where we needed to be.
Mz Rimmer & her Lil Lover Girl
-- Friday, January 27, 2006 at 01:54:14 (EST)
"On A Saturday Morning In October" made me smile through
tears. Thank you.
Thomas <thomasakins68@bellsouth.net>
-- Thursday, January 26, 2006 at 21:38:40 (EST)
What an amazingly beautiful portrayal of what deeply
intimate touch can produce between two people. As an english
teacher I commend your wonderful effort!
natalie <natricotta@yahoo.com>
rochester, ny monroe
-- Thursday, January 26, 2006 at 17:52:51 (EST)
I really liked
"Five Girls" and
"A Saturday in October"!
KKM
MI
-- Thursday, January 26, 2006 at 16:41:22 (EST)
Liked
"Venetian Duet" and "Fugue".
Hopefully I'll have something good enough to try and submit
Dralion
-- Wednesday, January 25, 2006 at 11:36:14 (EST)
Five Girls is an astonishing story, with a fresh,
provocative style that draws the reader in -- and deep
undercurrents of longing and loss.
Teresa <teresalamai@yahoo.com>
-- Wednesday, January 25, 2006 at 00:48:21 (EST)
Mike Kimera's
Mating Call was an awesome story. I wanted more!
Kelli <stwcouple2005@yahoo.com>
Stillwater, OK USA
-- Tuesday, January 24, 2006 at 05:21:30 (EST)
What a beautiful story of love and sex and intimacy and
knowing one's partner!
Joy <jenniejoy2@yahoo.com>
-- Wednesday, January 18, 2006 at 15:39:01 (EST)
I really enjoyed reading Tressie McMillan's
The first dance. It was very well developed, talks about a
woman's becoming aware of herself and taking care of her needs
-- that leads to an exciting night out and a hot lover! -- for
more than a one night stand!
Jennifer <jenniejoy2@yahoo.com>
Philadelphia, pa usa
Philadelphia, pa usa
-- Monday, January 16, 2006 at 23:21:00 (EST)
Mike Kimera's stories here are always a delight!
Janice C
CA
-- Sunday, January 15, 2006 at 23:36:23 (EST)
Brave
Antonio
Very well developed! This should come as no surprise to the millions of
"straight" men who love sucking cock but are not quite ready to boy shop
for furniture at IKEA. Those who do not admit to their true feelings are
soon to be left behind
<i.am.your.secretary@gmail.com>
MI USA
-- Friday, January 06, 2006 at 00:18:28 (EST)
i loved
"tamarind"--what a wonderfully erotic piece, just enough to leave me
wanting more!
wendy
st. paul, mn usa
-- Thursday, January 05, 2006 at 15:03:28 (EST)
Making Do by WS Cross was a very good story. Bravo!
Jenny Corvette <jennycorvette@yahoo.com>
-- Thursday, January 05, 2006 at 03:33:09 (EST)
Re: Peter Klein’s post
-- Monday, January 02, 2006 at 12:38:51 (EST)
Peter SAYS :
in his opening statement: ‘I have to say I pretty much agree with Ann,
and not the MOT3 post‘……..theand not the MOT3 post‘……..then
At 1) in his ‘advice to men who want or intend to be good lovers to
women.’, that :‘The female orgasm IS elusive, unreliable, hard to figure
out.
However Ann said: There's only one problem. Women's orgasms are not
elusive……By comparison, it's the male orgasm that's elusive.
So Peter, it’s make your mind up time. You must know what happens to the
man who tries to ride the up and down escalators at the same time.
At 2) ‘Expect to have more luck with your fingers than your dick.’
Not only does Peter appear to have given up hope of using his dick to be
with and help women when they have the ultimate in sexual pleasure but
also wants to rob others of having that experience only gained through
perseverance. Surely he must know that upwards of 90% of women who
masturbate do so to orgasm hence they would likely men of his
persuasion, not least because they can do a better job of it than any
man can. She would most definitely have much more luck with her fingers
than any man’s.
‘Learn about this particular woman.’
Spot on Peter, on the button. Only trouble is the rest of the paragraph
demonstrates confused thinking and is vitiated by this quote.
Every woman has her own needs where foreplay is concerned and she must
say what that is; it needn’t be verbal. Men might try not removing their
own underwear until the partner indicates positively that she’s good and
ready. That way he can’t get carried away; all it requires is some
patience. (It should be pointed out here that some women may wish to
dispense with foreplay as they consider it unnecessary because they
orgasm immediately on penetration, then go on to dozens.)
With MOT3 the woman is going to become multi-orgasmic and see to it that
she keeps having that quality of experience.
At 3) ‘…..what do you do. Just go to sleep and let her do it by herself.
Let her know that it's fine with you if she does. Maybe you just go in
the other room and stay away until she calls you back.’
If this is Peter’s attitude, then the question might be, what does She
do; the clear and unequivocal answer should be, dump him, move on. If
all she wants or needs are fingers, hers are more clever. If you need to
go in the other room, you should never be allowed to return. You are
superfluous to her requirements.
The whole quote sounds as though he’s had his so she can have her turn
next. Well Peter, women have news for you. They are absolutely pissed
off with having their vaginas used as a pleasurable, convenient place
for male masturbation.
At 2)[was this meant to be 4)?] : ‘Don't keep asking her: did you come.
It's not your business. Maybe she can't come and she doesn't want you to
make it your problem. Just be ready and willing to help if you are
asked. But don't make it your responsibility. It's not necessary for you
to have a big ego about being a great lover.’
togm
togm
brighton, uk
-- Thursday, January 05, 2006 at 02:42:58 (EST)
The
"Penguins" exotica story is adorable, and so right on .... I'd love
to read more like this, short and smart and sexy!
JK Jones
Ca US
-- Wednesday, January 04, 2006 at 23:38:47 (EST)
Michael O'Mahony's writing is very lovely!!
Casey
CO
-- Wednesday, January 04, 2006 at 17:29:29 (EST)
I have to say I pretty much agree with
Ann, and not the MOT3 post. And so I write this advice to men who
want or intend to be good lovers to women.
1) Go easy on yourself. The female orgasm IS elusive, unreliable, hard
to figure out. It's not your fault, pal. So go easy on yourself.
2) Expect to have more luck with your fingers than your dick. Don't
follow the conventional wisdom. Learn about this particular woman. For
example, we're often told: pet a women with a long luxurious foreplay.
Not always true. Sometimes a long foreplay will cause a women to misfire
when it is time for petting to orgasm. Those women need a short foreplay
and then advance quickly to petting for orgasm.
3) Sometimes women are just simply inhibited. And you say, she should
get over that. That's bullshit. Maybe she won't get over it, but she's
still your lover -- what do you do. Just go to sleep and let her do it
by herself. Let her know that it's fine with you if she does. Maybe you
just go in the other room and stay away until she calls you back.
2) Don't keep asking her: did you come. It's not your business. Maybe
she can't come and she doesn't want you to make it your problem. Just be
ready and willing to help if you are asked. But don't make it your
responsibility. It's not necessary for you to have a big ego about being
a great lover.
Peter Klein <peter.r.klein@verizon.net>
Northfield, MA USA
-- Monday, January 02, 2006 at 12:38:51 (EST)
"
Magmadootch" was a delight to read!
Jenn
CA
-- Monday, December 26, 2005 at 22:00:06 (EST)
sorry i've come so late to your blog SEX, FUCKING AND FEMALE ORGASM.
it is very refreshing to see the ease with which you approached the
topic, and the distinction between sex and fucking is noteworthy.
however, if i may i should like to make a couple of comments and leave a
little information here.
1. 'women can orgasm until their fingers get tired or their batteries
run dry.'
this is indeed true, and maybe you ought to have included 'or until they
are too sore to go on comfortably'.
however, we have found, empirically, that women can orgasm dozens of
times in heterosexual pairings, without once putting a finger on the
clitoris, with the same erection, once they are multiple orgasm tutored,
trained and tuned (MOT3).
2. 'most women cannot come during intercourse.'
there might be greater accuracy in the statement if it were to be
modified by sustituting 'do not' for 'cannot'. it is our belief that it
is possible to help at least a couple hundred million women become MOT3
within the next ten years. becoming multiple orgasmic is just a simple
matter of desire, arousal and knowing what to do and how to do it.
3. 'It's not a question of masculine endurance or technique, just a
physical quirk so rare that it could be said to be abnormal.'
if by 'physical quirk' is meant that the small percentage of women who
orgasm during sexul intercourse with their partners is an anomaly,we
disagree as we believe that if the resources were available the figure
at 2 above could easily go up to five hundred million and eventually the
anomaly would be the 6 percent who didn't, for whatever reasons.
4. ' Millions of men have agonized over their performance and millions
of women have berated their lovers or themselves all because of
something that no technique or duration of penetration can change.'
we have established that indeed technique and duration of penetration
are essential to both single/couple/few orgasms and dozens of orgasms
with the same erection. all the agony and blame alluded to are the
result of frustration at not achieving a genuine desire for both to
experience the full pleasure of having orgasms during intercourse,
without assistance of any kind.
5.'The female body is just not made to come when fucked.'
wow! one cannot be more emphatic than that. on the contrary, the reverse
is true. so the statement might be more accurate if we were to remove
the words 'just not'. it is just plain unfortunate that the requisite
carnal knowledge is still the preserve of a very fortunate relatively
small number of people. the human female can orgasm as many times as her
age and more, with the same erection, even in her sixties, once she is
in reasonably good health, and of course, if both know what to do and
how to do it.
in fact, women of different ages, social backgrounds, marital status,
number of children can have:
8 orgasms in 12 minutes
20 orgasms in less than 18 minutes
30 orgasms in 30 minutes
6 dozens of orgasms in 2 and a half hours
8 dozens of orgasms within 6 hours,in two sessions
and so on. and note carefully , all this without a finger touching the
clitoris,and without any soreness at the end.
6. 'Fingers, tongues, or vibrators applied to the clitoris are the best
tools for inducing female orgasm, and this should be good news because
dicks are notoriously temperamental'.
dicks are unquestionably as you say, and we would add that erections are
the most perishable commodity known to man, and even more frustratingly,
to woman. be that as it may, fingers, tongues and vibrators are still
not the best tools for inducing female orgasm or multiple orgasms.
powerful desire, arousal and carnal knowledge combined are supremely the
hands down winners; upwards of 90% of women and their male partners can
learn to do it. the only way the last number will not happen is if
people are not interested or couldn't be bothered.
in conclusion, we would like to say that none of the numbers are
speculation or wishful thinking, rather cold hard fact and reproducible.
the next stage would be to set out to create a fully validated
methodology of fuckology as it were, that can legitimately take its
place within the scientific record of sexology. it could then be the
norm for men to be fucking for female multiple orgasms(fffmo), any time
and every time their partners wish it; orgasmic bingo would be a common
place bed game. it's just a matter of time when a worldwide orgasm
revolution would have kum about.
may we wish you a joyous festive season, and that you and all your
female friends and readers kum at least 2006 times in 2006!!
sincerely,
togm
togm <obtogm@hotmail.com>
brighton, uk
-- Monday, December 26, 2005 at 14:46:34 (EST)
Bernard,
I love the sparse language of
"Waiting". So much said in so few words...kudos!
John
John MacLean
USA
-- Monday, December 19, 2005 at 15:50:31 (EST)
'
Catching a Dreamer" - I love lesbian stories here. And of course I
also thus love your yoni art-:)
Angelina
MI
-- Friday, December 16, 2005 at 15:23:25 (EST)
I think undoubtedly the third one down is the prettiest. Only kidding
- they're all very beautiful. I find it a pity though that yonis are so
often shaved nowadays. It seems even stranger that on some porno sites,
photos of natural yonis are classified as fetish/bizarre. When I was a
teenager and first came across a post-pubescent girl, I was a little
scared by pubic hair but I got over it and came to love the mystery of
the pussy partly hidden. I have often wondered if the prevalence of
shaved female genitalia is a result of males not growing up enough to
accept that females, like males, change as they grow older. If so, I
would find it sad. I find it hard to explain. The
yoni
is beautiful though - even if it is shaved.
Jaie Helier <garanwallace33@hotmail.com>
Darwin, NT Australia
-- Thursday, December 15, 2005 at 08:42:48 (EST)
Your
"Celebrating Yoni" is like celebrating fragment and wholeness,
movement and stillness, Shiva and Shakti, lotus and mud.
Call it spoof
or nirvana
if you like
hidden between thighs
is the spring music
beyond birth
It's a lovely exercise, stimulating mysticism, or gently harmonising
Ying and Yang. The images appear to me like lotus rising from the depths
of lake through mud crossing existence. GREAT. It's the BEST of 2005.
R K Singh
R.K.Singh <profrksingh@yahoo.com>
DHANBAD, Jharkhand, India
-- Thursday, December 15, 2005 at 00:46:43 (EST)
First time reader, but you are now added to my favorites. Keep up the
good work! I do have one question, how does a new author of erotica
become a part of your family?
Nia - Author
Gargoyle's Quest
The Worthy: Wildest Dreams
http://nkfoxx.tripod.com
Nia <nkfoxx@netzero.net>
Pinckney, MI
-- Wednesday, December 14, 2005 at 21:40:00 (EST)
Love that
yoni!!
.....3 Pieces was nice too
Jennifer VV
-- Wednesday, December 14, 2005 at 16:26:14 (EST)
I liked your article. Yes, men have had problems coming too quickly
and then feeling like they can't satisfy their partner. I suggest that
you consider the Tantric philosophy, where male orgasm is separated from
ejaculation. I aspire to this as the best method yet for everyone
getting everything they need when making love. Besides, the spiritual
connection is just awesome and that alone makes a woman come a lot
easier.
Take care.
S4mesmile <s4mesmile@yahoo.com>
Baltimore, MD USA
-- Sunday, December 11, 2005 at 17:29:16 (EST)
"Brava, Ann!" You confirm my worse suspicions about cocks just not
doing it! A
tremendous article, which hopefully will relieve many a girl all too
persuaded that she needs a man for the old "in-out!" I just reviewed her
piece in my own blog http://www.livejournal.com/users/devifemme/, and
I'm recommnding "cleansheets" far and wide. Thanks, Ann!!!!
Justine <devifemme@yahoo.com>
Vero Beach, FL USA
-- Saturday, December 10, 2005 at 12:57:37 (EST)
Absolutely on track... especially the last paragraph! I'm forwarding
it to my 21-year old son, for his education...
Paul <pbacoustic@aol.com>
Richardson, Tx USA
-- Friday, December 09, 2005 at 12:52:05 (EST)
Ann, thanks for the
brilliant article about sex, fucking and the female orgasm. (http://www.cleansheets.com/coverstories/regentin_12.07.05.shtml)
I blogged it (http://wiredblogs.tripod.com/sex/) and have sent the link
out to all my friends.
What a breath of fresh air!
Regina Lynn
-- Friday, December 09, 2005 at 12:50:28 (EST)
GREAT STORY,WELL WRITEN,VERY VERY SEXY
HARRY O
R I
-- Friday, December 09, 2005 at 11:04:23 (EST)
That's an excellent story
(Red
State Blues), very musiuse clit stimulation. additionally, I was
involved with a lady who had multiples orgasm through vaginal
penetration and with my fingers she also had very stronger vaginals
muscles that clamped down during her orgasms. Very intense and definetly
not faking. But your right i think rare. I know women have come
vaginally with me but not like her. it is seems when its face to face
the will come. especially if a play with them a lot. and i grind instead
of pound them to death. P.S. and its fun to play with women
tp <jazzinstuff@yahoo.com>
-- Thursday, December 08, 2005 at 16:00:08 (EST)
" Penetration, provided it is face-to-face, does result in clitoral
stimulation."
Right. In some romance novel, perhaps.
JK
UK
-- Thursday, December 08, 2005 at 12:27:44 (EST)
Very provocative discussion by
Ann Regentin with one major omission. Penetration, provided it is
face-to-face, does result in clitoral stimulation. Isn't life grand?
Lauree <laureeguyer@yahoo.com>
Duluth, MN USA
-- Thursday, December 08, 2005 at 08:43:37 (EST)
I enjoyed " Three Pieces of My Past"!
c idea I've read here or anywhere else in quite a while, mostly because
it has such a beautiful ring of truth.
Michael <neonexile@gmail.com>
London, England
-- Tuesday, December 06, 2005 at 19:48:08 (EST)
That Bono interview is downright inspiring , probably for everyone
U2 fan
NY
-- Sunday, December 04, 2005 at 18:38:47 (EST)
Now I'll have that song in my head all day just from reading the
lyrics - I love
Rent!!
Stacy H
US
-- Thursday, December 01, 2005 at 13:01:37 (EST)
That's a weird ugly story (The Seer's Wife) - disappointing from
Cleansheets.
Jack V.-gk
MI
-- Thursday, December 01, 2005 at 11:05:53 (EST)
Compulsive writing. Solid imagery, great use of power phrase
repetition and alliteration.
I could see the pictures!
I liked the almost guttural phrasure that conveys the primitiveness of
the man's need for the most basic escape all men seek. The writing also
inspired in me an empathy for the scared, riddled-with-doubt, sacrifice
of the woman.
Most enjoyable. To quote that famous Oliver, "Please Sir, can I have
some more?"
gingermegs <david.a@iinet.net.au>
Frenchville, Qld Australia
-- Thursday, December 01, 2005 at 02:12:33 (EST)
Cheyenne Blue's
"The
Seer's Wife" is lovely, mystical, physical, visual, filled with
magic. It fits into what could easily be a tired "cheat-wife" genre, but
the approach is fresh. Exhilerating. Well done.
hj
H. Jekyll <h_jekyll2000@yahoo.com>
US
-- Wednesday, November 30, 2005 at 17:45:32 (EST)
"Catching a Dreamer" is quite lovely - I love stories about
long-time couples. "Stuck Inside the Uh-Oh's " is a great story too
Christopher VN
La Jolla,
-- Wednesday, November 30, 2005 at 12:50:47 (EST)
The contacts we had for Kinky Joe's seem to no longer work, and we can't find any other contact for him.
Sam Capps, Editor
-- Monday, November 28, 2005 at 19:54:44 (EST)
can ANYONE tell me how to contact Joe Hurly A/K/A Kinky Joe's Furniture
we need some custom, easy furniture, just a simple chair, angled back with leg rests. no big contraption
amie <althenawith2@aol.com>
fort wayne, in us
-- Sunday, November 27, 2005 at 23:00:11 (EST)
This story was great. However...I don't fully understand it. Was he seeing Keiko and Carmen both at the same time? Was that last fling with Carmen solely because they were high? Was he supposed to be turning inin to the man he didn't want to be when he was helping Keiko cheat on her boyfriend? Will I ever know? GAH! heh thank you
Nik <woomanfoo@hotmail.com>
Orlando, Fl USA
-- Sunday, November 27, 2005 at 12:00:48 (EST)
The
hokey-pokey story was a great read.
JHBN
OR
-- Tuesday, November 22, 2005 at 15:50:15 (EST)
what a beautiful, beautiful story. i felt like i was getting off on
the new york times. truly qualit
Pack Rat <robele55@people.com>
Wilkes-Barre, PA USA
-- Saturday, November 19, 2005 at 13:16:47 (EST)
Your website BEAUTIFUL AGONY is awesome. I have been looking for
something like this for a long time.
LINDA <THE9544783@AOL.COM>
Cocoa Beach, Fl USA
-- Saturday, November 19, 2005 at 02:08:24 (EST)
I think that Gary Meyer (who "reviewed" a movie in the current issue)
could benefit from looking up the difference between the words "summary"
and "review".
Rob Retter <rretter@san.rr.com>
San Diego, CA USA
-- Friday, November 18, 2005 at 01:04:19 (EST)
the
"Uh-Oh's" -- I love it!!
JK W
OR
-- Thursday, November 17, 2005 at 13:04:29 (EST)
Susannah Indigo can WRITE. That Denver story is r
old son said to me with a very somber face, "dad, did you hear that the
guy that wrote the
'hokey pokey' song died? Apparently they had a tough time at the
funeral home when they tried to put him in the coffin. They put his
right hand in..."
The longer you think about it, the funnier it gets.
cheers!
dhmoyer <festus1963@hotmail.com>
-- Wednesday, November 16, 2005 at 08:42:51 (EST)
Great story-need to know the ending!!
KL
MA
-- Wednesday, November 16, 2005 at 08:21:00 (EST)
x
Nina- Just loved your story of love and passion on the shore.. Two
women teasing and pleasing each other is a fascination and an obsession
for me.
john wylie <johnwylieelder@hotmail.com>
billerica, ma usa
-- Saturday, November 12, 2005 at 09:27:51 (EST)
-- Wednesday, November 16, 2005 at 08:21:00 (EST)
x
Nina- Just loved your story of love and passion on the shore.. Two
women teasing and pleasing each other is a fascination and an obsession
for me.
john wylie <johnwylieelder@hotmail.com>
billerica, ma usa
-- Saturday, November 12, 2005 at 09:27:51 (EST)
The fascinating
discussion between Shanna and Gary gave much more than |
